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Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

YAY!! She's waking up!  Hopefully all will be righted in her world soon :)
~Susan



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

well, i was going to review anyway, but with that incentive maybe i should review twice? :)

i just want to say how fantasitc you are - i LOVE your writing and absolutely cannot wait to read more.  i literally got goosebumps reading this chapter... you're simply a master at conveying emotions...

ok, back to studying for finals - you make an excellent study break!



Author's Response:

It’s a good incentive, right?  LOL!  I am so glad you are enjoying the story!

I am glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jrojrojro (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

I'm so glad we got to hear from her!  I can't wait to read more - especially when she wakes up.  I'll be on pins and needles until the next chapter!  Keep up the bloody brilliance, lovie!



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  It’s coming!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

It was an incredible chapter! I loved it. Can't wait to see what's next



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: fictionfan (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

damn carlisle for making him leave! I happened to have Never Think playing in the background while I was reading this and it all made me cry a little. They need each other so badly.  I love this story.



Author's Response:

It was so tough, impossible even, for him to leave, but it had to be done.  Carlisle was right on this one.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

awwwwwwwwwwwww finnally!!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: pxiicuties (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

so awesome!! first time to read this and i read all 33 chapters in 4 hours..and i cried too.. update soon..:D



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you for giving my story a chance!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Oh man?  That was a TEASE.  So So close.  I can't wait for the next chapter. You are doing such a good job.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

That was a great chapter!  I'm so glad we got to hear from Bella and she's waking up!  I really hope to hear from Carlisle or Edward next!  Bella again would be great, but she's going to be so disoriented I can't even imagine what that chapter would look like!! 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I think you will enjoy the next chapter!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Oh that was sad :( I mean it's nice that while she was unconscious she was having happy dreams of her family..but then when she was struggling to wake up.. :(

I hope this means next chapter Bella will be conscious! :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Our girl is coming back!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

can't wait to see whats nexted



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lolobird (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Ugh! Again... you leave us hanging. :P I need another chapter to read. That was just enough too hook a person, but not enough to satisfy my curiosity! Great chapter. :)



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  It’s coming!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Aw, beautiful chapter. I loved how Bella pictured her future with Edward and their baby. Hope it ends like that for them (happy sigh). Felt so much for Bella, wanting her baby, wanting Edward, not knowing what happened and having no way to reach out and speak. Beautifully written. Felt for Edward so much too when Carlisle made him leave but it had to be done I guess. So DESPERATELY cannot wait to read what happens next!! Continue with the magnificent writing....

AliciaZA



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Edward didn't want to go, but Carlisle is doing the right thing here.

Thank you so much for reviewing!  More soon!

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

You know, I'm a little annoyed with Carlisle. He wouldn't have "interfered" if Bella had only been alone and starving? It took the news that she was pregnant before he went to slap some sense into Eddie?



Author's Response:

I think this was more of the trigger that finally forced Carlisle to go against his son's wishes.  It wasn't the pregnancy that triggered it - it was the fact that she was gone...

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

aw :(

at least she finally woke up :D that makes me happy  :D



Author's Response:

She is not quite there yet, but she's coming back!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

what an incentive! you had me at shirtless but glistening?! whew! =) and i, as always, love this chapter especially the end part when carlisle was asking edward to leave. i could feel edward's pain.. i know he doesn't want to leave bella. will bella be waking up in the next chapter? i'm a little anxious because even though i know bella loves edward deep inside, i know she's still angry with edward and they'd go thru a lot of things before things could totally be okay..



Author's Response:

Good incentive, huh?  I am so glad you enjoyed this chapter!  I know it was hard to watch Edward have to go, but Carlisle was right in this.  Carlisle hated to do it, but he had to.

Bella will be up in 35.  We have some business to attend to first...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Awesome chapter! I am so happy to see Bella is slowly waking up! More, MORE soon, please!!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Yes, that very much felt like she was floating into a conscious state while still having dreams and such.  It was great how she picked up on the name Elizabeth.  Hmm....will she like that, I wonder?  I'm sure she will probably be spitting nails that Edward got to name her before she understands that he had to.  Great insight into her mind at this point.  Can't wait for more, as always!  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!  She did pick up on the name from conversations around her and accepted it fully in her mind.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DONT GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have been checking every day for an update i lve this story so much!!!!!!



Author's Response:

It was so tough, impossible even, for him to leave, but it had to be done. 

If you add the story to favourites, you'll get an email each time I post!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Purple83 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

she's finally coming out of it...sigh...



Author's Response:

That she is!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

This was fantastic I just want her to wake up!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: alice is awesome like that (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

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Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Oh God, why did he have to leave!!! Im gonna cry now...



Author's Response:

It was so tough, impossible even, for him to leave, but it had to be done.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Oh goodness, how could I not review.  Let's see... you didn't confused me.  I could tell what Bella was hearing from her thoughts from what was really happening around her.  I was fine with all that.  I'm just anxious for her to wake up, have a rip-roaring fight with Edward, clear the air, and get back to business!  That's what I'm looking forward to.  Soon?  Please?



Author's Response:

I am so glad it made sense and that you enjoyed it!  Don't worry, it'll keep moving towards what you want!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

I'm so glad Bella is finally waking up even though I did cry through the whole thing!

I think her dream is her subconcious showing that she does believe everything will be ok and that Edward DOES still love her, even if she doesn't fully understand it yet.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Her dream is her idealization of what life should have been like had Edward never left.  We shall see if it can come to fruition.

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