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Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yes!  Bella's awake!  Now the messy part begins where Bella and Edward have to sort through and try to salvage something of their relationship.  I look forward to what happens next.



Author's Response: She is back and the long road to healing can begin. It won't be pretty but it will happen. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Lots of love for this chapter, hon! Beautifully done and I hope Bella will forgive Edward. This is really an emotional story and it's good to have Bella awake and talking again. She is going to adore Elizabeth. : )

Great job!
Joan



Author's Response: She's b9k and now the healing has begun. We have a ways to go before the HEA, but we are moving now! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

OH God!! Yeah, that's all i can say!!!!!



Author's Response: She's back! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: aidy (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yay finally awake!  I'm glad she found out that Edward was waiting - along with the rest of her family and Charlie.  Poor Eddie having to leave - that would have been killer.  THis chapter although greatly loved and appreciated felt short and I am itching for more story - pls update soon.



Author's Response: Lol! This is the longest chapter to date! But don't worry, more coming soon! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Abimaddevil17 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

YAY! Bella's awake!! :D This story just gets better wit each update!! :D

Abbie :D



Author's Response: She's back! I am so glad you are still enjoying it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Robs_Muse (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yaaaaaay! She's awake yet I know the tears are coming. I am utterly addicted to this fic. Beautiful writing as smiling thru tears is one of my favorite emotions. You've taken me on an emotional rollercoaster and I can't wait to see what's around the corner. Thank you. Now, I'll take my Edward shaking his ass-ets! Hahahaha

Author's Response: I am so glad you are connecting to this story so strongly! I will send Edward over to shake his grove thing for you! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Aww can't wait. Just can't wait.



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story! More will be coming soon! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

The letter to Charlie was beautiful and totally got me all emotional and teary-eyed. 

Contrast that to the out loud guffaws of this line right here,"Oh, he has no clue how much I want to be his friend right now." 

That line is perfect. :D



Author's Response: Lol! I try to slip in the humour where I can! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

it so good to see bella on the land of the living again..but cant wait for eadward and her to have "the TALK"...update soon..thanks!



Author's Response: She's back! She'll have to work her way up to Edward, but it is coming! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

Oh sweet baby Jesus NO!  Worse from here?  Yep, I am heading to the woods.  Gonna need the fetal position for sure.

This was my fav line, “No, Edward.  You grieve,” she said simply.  “For someone that doesn't have to be gone.”

So simple.  Not overly dramatic or drawn out - just the simple truth.  I really like how you do that.



Author's Response: Wow, thank you. You really write such wonderful reviews. I truly appreciate them!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

Very nice.  You gave her Angela.  I adore it.  Bella is indeed very strong, and I love that you have shown her strength in this.  She is broken and bleeding, but she survives for her child.  That is SO BELLA!  The image of the new crib was also very effective at explaining volumes about Bella, her feelings, her priorities, etc.  Also loved that you gave her the name "Marie Masen".  Great touch there.



Author's Response: Bella is definitely completely broken, but she will fight for her child. Now she has Angela on her side to help. So much relief. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: cherylmmm (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

loved the chapter...i can't wait until the bella and edward reunion (including little elizabeth)



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! She is awake and is working her way up to seeing Edward again! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

p.s. forgot to tell you that this line really struck me, "He was everything she was and was not.  She was everything he was and was not. "  That whole paragraph really got to me, as Bella and Edward essentially distilled, but this was beautifully phrased IMO. :)



Author's Response: Thank you. I picture them very much as yin and yang.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

I liked Alice's POV.  Yes, it definitely is different than Bella's POV.  As it should be.  You did very well with that.  It makes sense why you went to hers first before Edward's.  Please forgive me if this comes out wrong, but I can tell that you have put a great deal of thought into this story, and that is refreshing to read.   Also liked how you incorporated the backstory of the Cullens and how they came to be together.  Instead of a drawnout rehashing you have seasoned the chapters with the pertinent information when it is needed, without a lot of extras and frills.  Nicely done.  I am impressed with this story so far. :)



Author's Response: I am so glad! Yes, this is primarily a non-narrative story - just spurts of different characters views from an emotional standpoint. A lot of the nuts and bolts will be left to you to imagine. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Shell_Linkin (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

How lovely, she's finally awake and she handled everything pretty well....I suppose I would too if I woke up from a coma to the hottness of Carlisle. Lol.

Can't wait to see how the little family reunion goes.



Author's Response: Lol! Carlisle certainly softened the blow! She's back! Let the healing commence! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

This is heartbreaking.  I love the way that you have again incorporated the canon text into an AH.  That is pretty uncommon nowadays, and this is really freshing to read.  Well, it's refreshing at the same time that it has ripped my heart out and is about to do a mexican hat dance all over it.  So... yeah.  I have a hard time with angst, but since you promise a happy ending, I shall try to persevere.  Great job so far.  I think you have done an excellent job with the characterizations so far as well.  It feels very much Bella and Edward.



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story. I am trying to parallel cannon without repeating it. It means a lot that folks are connecting. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Just found this story.  I like the canon twists you have created for AH.  I thought it was really effective to keep using the phrase "Not now.  Not like this."  It's hearbreaking really.  Very nicely done.  reading on...



Author's Response: I am so glad you found the story and that you are enjoying it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

I feel so badly for Bella. She's so hurt and confused. I hate the fact that she can't even think Edward's name. I know she was terribly hurt, but I do hope she gives him the chance to explain, that she gives him the chance to tell her that he was just as empty and broken as she was.

Gah, Pomme the heartfail you write kills me. Quite literally breaks my heart into millions of little shards. I really want Angela to explain to Bella how much Edward has gone through. How terrified he's been, how broken he feels for breaking her. The awe and adoration he has for their daughter. I think it would help Bella accept Edward a bit easier if the one ally she's had can see that even though he left, he left his heart with her.

Keep it up, and give me some sunshine. I'm losing my smiles. =(

~Sarah



Author's Response: Oh, love... All of this is going to be addresses, almost to the letter, but it will hurt. There is so much damage to heal. But don't forget, I believe in HEA and in true love. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sareisle (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Wonderful chapter - once again of course! I've been a silent reader for a long time, but i thought i'd just say that i love this story a whole bunch :)

Carlisle was really wonderful in this chapter - he was so sweet. 

 

 

 



Author's Response: Carlisle is such a role model. I love him! Thanks so much for coming out and letting me know your thoughts!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Hooray for Bella waking up! Now to let her see her daughter



Author's Response: She's back and all sorts of reunions are on the horizon! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: taylach (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Great Chapter, god I feel like she's been not with it for ages and ages.....

 



Author's Response: She is back! Let the healing begin! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yay, she's awake, she's awake!  I was getting so concerned that she was in a coma for so long!

I am glad that Carlisle was able to be there when Bella woke up - as much as it would have been nice for Edward to be there it just wouldn't have been realistic!  I'm glad though that Carlisle told Bella that he had been at her bedside and that he had to be torn away when she was waking up.  Now she knows that her 'dreams' were real hopfully this will help to mend their relationship faster.

Does Bella remember the name Elizabeth?  How cool if she beats them all to the punch and announces the name before anyone has a chance to tell her:)

So glad you updated - please do so as soon as humanly possible again!

Can't wait to see the yummy mummy and daddy duo!



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Yay, she's b9k and she tolerated Carlisle fairly well! You will get more on the name as well. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TwiHeart (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Thank you for saving Bella and the baby.



Author's Response: I wouldn't have it any other way! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Yes, yes.  I REALLY wanted Bella to wake up.  Now that she has, I'm anxious for her to at least talk to Edward.  Next chapter, maybe?  Come on!  You know you want to! 

Actually, she's taking everything very well, considering.



Author's Response: She's b9k, but she's going to have to work her way up to Edward. Trust me, it is coming, though! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Great chapter. Yeh. Bella is finally awake. Now, for the interactions with all the other characters, especially Edward. OOh, can't wait. Please post soon.

 



Author's Response: She's back and it is time to try and mend some of these relationships. More soon! Thanks so much for reviewing!

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