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Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

okay, I'm crying here. Your fault, too.
Lovely moment between Charlie and Bella. Thanks for writing.
Happy Birthday!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.  He adores his daughter, even if he doesn't always show it in a traditional way.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Awww.. I am so glad there are a few happy moments with Charlie and I am sooooo glad she loved the name.  I think this is one of the best stories I have read in a while.  Love it :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.  I am so glad you're enjoying the story.

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

So sweet! I'm glad Charlie told her the name.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I'm glad Charlie was able to tell her the name if Edward could not...

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Wow!  This is a tender father-daughter moment.  Love it.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy Birthday for the 18th!  For your present I will send you Alice for the day.  She told me that she will take you shopping and buy you an entire new wardrobe!  Complete with shoes, bags and all of the bling that your heart desires.  I have also asked her to look a little into your future, just to give you a heads up on anything coming your way................ 

Ps - Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter. 

A shopping day with Alice would ROCK!  Thank you for the virtual gift!

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Aww I loved this chapter. It was so sweet with how they are kind of awkward together, but yet, you can tell that they love each other and she is his little girl and always will be.

This part made me laugh :“Look, Bells.  I know how babies are made, but let’s just skip that part, okay?  I’m going with the immaculate conception theory right now.” 

When Bella was happy that at least Elizabeth had a mommy with her (Esme), that made me kinda sad but it was cute...and when Bella said that she wanted Elizabeth with her so she would know that her mommy didn't abandon her made my heart break! Bella needs her baby! Dammit! Why aren't they taking her to Bella yet? I would be freaking out and demanding I get her. haha

I am definitely getting excited for the Edward/Bella reunion! I'm sure there will be lots of heartache with it and apologies and all that..but I'm so excited.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.  And they really do sort through a lot in this chapter.

Elizabeth isn't quite stable enough to be moved from the ICU yet, nor is Bella stable enough to go see her, but you're right, I'd be screaming bloody murder as well.

Bella/Edward/Elizabeth - Chapter 41.  Nuff said.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Good Job and Happy Birthday!! Since I'm a little possessive of Edward, how about naked Jasper wrapped in a red bow?



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter. 

Any of them will do for me:)

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

edward's next right?



Author's Response:

Not quite.  But it's coming in chapter 41

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

A wet Edward!  How is that for a birthday present??? ; - )  Keep um coming!  I can't wait for the next update! 

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Author's Response:

That's a great birthday present, thanks!

I'll submit the next one soon!

Thanks for reviewing and for the birthday wishes.

Reviewer: jimmy7660 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy Birthday!!!!!!!! This chapter was so sweet.  Charlie really came through, and was the perfect dad and grandpa!!!!!  I think you did a great job handling this chapter, you navigated the waters beautifully.  It could have been so easy to have Charlie blaming Bella for all that he went through but he showed her love and even tried to blame himself....OHHH Charlie!  And the parts where he would talk about Edward, it was so sweet and you could almost feel pity in his words towards Edward and his plight.  I am glad that you let Charlie tell Bella about naming the baby, it could have been a disaster, but  with Charlie explaining and even letting her know that he was consulted, I think it made the whole thing easier....Anyway, did mean to ramble, just really love this story.  Can't wait for more, as always!!!

 

Again, Happy Birthday!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.  He's going to do his best to make sure Elizabeth has the family he couldn't make for Bella...

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

SO SWEET!!!!!!

HOW ABOUT A DATE WITH EDWARD FOR YOUR BIRTHDAY???



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

OOOOH!  A date with Edward.  Hmm... do I get to keep him all night?  LOL!

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

XDXDXDXDXD

 i love it always 

the best human story i have ever read !!!

ever!!!!!!!!!!

XDXDXDXD

we have started filming - just takin wayy too long for me :( 

lol but its coming on well shud have it eventually --hopefully

lol 

xxxx

loved it always...xxxxxxxx



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

I definitely want to see it when you're done!  I'm so excited!

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: Cookie Lover (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

The 18th is my dad's birthday too!!!



Author's Response:

No way!  How cool?!?

My dad's is the day before mine!

Reviewer: sabrina323q (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

cant wait for edwards turn!!!



Author's Response:

It's coming!

They'll see each other in Chapter 41.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

I'd be Jasper and send you waves of arousing pleasure until you fell over the cliff in extacy.



Author's Response:

Now THAT's a birthday!

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Awwww... this is making me sniffle and wipe away tears.  Love their reunion.  It wasn't as bad as either of them thought it would be, but they've got things to still work out.

Hummm... Edward & he'd do your every whim for your birthday, no matter what it was.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!  Yum.... Edward and every whim....

 

 

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

I didn't realize Charlie would feel guilty!  He was so sweet to Bella.

Birthday wish:

A friend gives you a certificate for a massage.  When you get there, they ask if it's okay if a new employee they're training works on you.  He comes into the room and your jaw drops.  You look into the sparkling green eyes of the most beautiful man you've ever met.  The masseur gives him a few pointers, watches Edward work for a while and then leaves him to finish on his own.   His long sexy fingers are working magic on your body and you can't help but become a little aroused.  Edward notices after a while and...

I think I'll turn this into a one shot.  I'll send you a copy.  Hope you enjoy the massage!

Jenn



Author's Response:

Charlie is such a good guy.  He does feel guilty.  She must of inherited it!

As for the birthday wish *thud*.  Holy Hell!  I want!  I want!!!!!

Oceanwaters2006 posted her tribut to my bday, if you want to read some hot stuff!

Definitely want to see it if you make it into a one shot!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

thanks for the update! i love your charlie.



Author's Response:

Aw, I love him too.  He's such a good guy.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

a big bear hug from Emmett being sent your way for your birthday...

 Maybe one of the girls can bring in the baby for her next, Esme? Rosalie? She'd get some honesty from Rose about Edward's motives for leaving her and how he fared after their separation.   That knowledge may prepare her for the meeting with Edward - which we are dying for.  At the moment she can barely say his name...



Author's Response:

I am so glad you're understanding why I'm travelling this road.  She can barely say his name, so why do folks think she can handle having THE conversation yet?  She will, but it will take time.

Thank you so much for reviewing and for the birthday wish.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

I'm ready for all the big reunions now!  Bring on Edward and the baby please!!



Author's Response:

It's coming!  Really.  Chapter 41.  Just hang in there!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy Birthday my dear and as for a Cullen and presents...ponders...I would say a different Cullen for a day for the entire day to do with as you please.

I loved daddy daughter time...it was hard on all but now healing has began, I love it...still counting down until Bella is reunited with Elizabeth and Edward...please don't keep us waiting to long as the suspense is killing me.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come… It's not THE conversation, but it's the first time they all see each other.

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the birthday wishes!

Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

This was a wonderful chapter.  You captured Charlie's character really well.  I knew Bella would love the baby's name.  Now I just can't wait for the little family to see each other.  



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  He's such a good guy and he's doing what he feels is right.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come…

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

    It’s so right!  Tough father with marshmallow heart will forgive you right away without rubbing your nose in it.  He will know that you have learnt you  lesson the hard way . 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  He's such a good guy and he's doing what he thinks is right, whether or not he particularly likes it.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

happy early birthday!!!  great job with the story so far and i can't wait for more



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter. 

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the birthday wishes!

Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

hahah read he bday thing wrong. :P Happy bday I dont know how old your turning but yea lmao



Author's Response:

LOL!  You weren't the only one!

Let's just say it was the 20th anniversary of my 18th birthday!

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