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Reviewer: sparkle_me (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

Gotta love Facebook!! LOL

Angela is such a good friend.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Social networking makes it so much easier to find people!  And yes, Angela is the bomb!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sparkle_me (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

Tsk tsk tsk Edward, I agree with Emmett, you brought this upon yourself.

Really love the emoward!

But, with out the emo we would have the EDWARD we all love and enjoy, repeatedly! LOL



Author's Response:

LOL!  He did bring it upon  himself, but he will definitely pay.  Trust me on this.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sparkle_me (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

This was a emotional chapter so far.

I really feel for Bella, her despair really comes thru in Angela's mind.

 

Kudos!



Author's Response:

Alas there are some far more emotional ones to come.  I am glad you got a good view of Bella through Angela.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Meli1815 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

awwww !! loved father and daughter together very cute :)

Thanks for the chapter :)

 

 



Author's Response: Charlie is such a good guy! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Once again you've kept my impatience at bay.  Jasper was awesome in this chapter.  And of course, I loved that he was able to defend Edward a bit.  :) 

Great job as ever!

Alice buys me a beautiful black cocktail dress that I wear to sing old jazz tunes while Edward plays the piano:)

 



Author's Response: I am glad you liked it! Not long now though! Love your incentive response! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sparkle_me (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

Beautiful chapter, I really understand Alice's POV.

It really lays the ground work on how they find Bella.

Really excited to read the next chapter.



Author's Response: 0alicw definitely plays an enpormous role in the first leg of this story. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sparkle_me (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

Powerful first chapter, I like how you kept the dialouge from the booking but add your own Bella twist to it.

I also appreciate how you explained why Bella ran away, it allows me to understand her state of mind.



Author's Response: I very much appreciate you giving my story a try! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AngelFromMyNightmare (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

best.jasper.ever. 

he knows how to put it. 

loving it. hehe



Author's Response: I am so glad you like this Jasper! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sexysadie13 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

hmmmm....ruffle panties, corset, thigh highs, garter belt and some fuck me stillettos. for Edward. can't say what i'D do, it's illegal in most states. plz update soon!

Author's Response: Lol! Great incentive answer! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

-Why are you giggling? What are you reading? asks the other half.              

- Not Like This

- But isn't that the one with all the hospital angst?

-Yup, but it's Jasper's POV.

-Ah, enough said!

(I do love Jasper!)



Author's Response: LOL! This cracked me up, which I definitely needed! I love Jasper too! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Great chapter!



Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Aww! That was a really sweet chat with Charlie.



Author's Response: Charlie is such a good guy. I think he handled it well. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

okay...she gets to see her baby soon right?



Author's Response: Chapter 41. They are both too unstable to be moved at the moment. But soon! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Nice.  Just like Jasper to make Bella deal.  I love his humor and sense of humility.



Author's Response: I love to write him! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ANGELiCAWROTE (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

gahhh, i adore jasper. jasper jasper jasper. looney tunes. ahahaha i like that.. alot actually.

let's see one thing for alice to buy moi?... these chanel heels that are fuck hot.. the heel has some detailing... with gold chains intertwining around the heels.. fuck hot i tell you

they're some nice fuck me heels.. if you catch my drift... hehehe.. and with who of course?... gimme looney tunes



Author's Response: Jasper definitely has a way with words! Great incebtive answer! Have fun with our boy! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

a set of long, black silk scarves, for edward!! as for what i would do...to tie him to the bed, blindfolded, to start.....

 

as for the story, the delay in getting edward in seems rather artifical, as it forces rather than develops tension, and makes me annoyed at bella again, her martyr tendencies really annoy me. but its your story so your call.....please get him in there next chapter, though i think you mentioned it was beyond that!!



Author's Response: I am sorry you feel that way. In my opinion only, she would not be dying to see him and would want to work things through and ready herself for what she would want to say. It is hard, I know, as we have seen Edward's penance and his evolution but she has not and has a lot to absorb. She will, however see him in chapter 41. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: camianbu_88 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

WOW, this chapter was sooo funny, i love some Jasper potty mouth too!, thank god someone is brave enough to say the truth to everybody, it's about damn time!



Author's Response: You mean I sucessfully wrote something that wasn't total fail!? LOL! I am so glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

I'd get an outfit using only the colors orange, yellow and black - something stretchy and tight - rent the Oscar Meyer weiner mobile, and invite Jasper to spend 24 hours with me exploring L.A. and the inside of the weiner vehicle (in private, of course), while getting to know one another and comparing potty mouths.

I'm glad Bella started with Jasper, he set the proper tone.  Alice will soften it.  Emmett will tell her some incredible home truths.  Rosalie won't let her get away with sh*t.  And then, she'll be ready for the boy whose name she still can't say out loud.



Author's Response: LMAO with your incentive answer! Awesome! Jasper definitely told it straight to Bells and she needed to hear it. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Christian Louboutain shoes! For Edward of course! Hope THE talk comes soon! It's driving me crazy!!!!!  Glad to see Becomes the Swan has been updated!  Running over there next!



Author's Response: Hang on! Chapter 41 is coming soon. Lol! It was the perfect storm for me with both stories hitting within an hour! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Twat waffle?

LMMFAO...

Jasper if awesome. :-)



Author's Response: Jasper certainly has a colourful vocabularly! I am glad you enjoyed it and reviewed!

Reviewer: hesterj99 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Awesome chapter... I love Jasper!  Thanks for sharing your story with us fans!



Author's Response: I am so glad you are reading! Jasper is a blast! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

omg i LOVE jasper herw!!!!! hes awesome in this fic!!!:D amazing chapter btw...and two more to go untill the 'talk'! wow...it sounds like im getting excited to read about the 'birds and the bees' talk...*shudders* eugh...nope, im good on that front :D



Author's Response: Lol! Thanks for the giggle! Yes, Jasper has his own fan club. I love the kid! Only one more talk to go b/f the lovers see each other again! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Wow...I really do love Jasper now..It seems like he might be the one to set things straight.. ;D And he's right, if Bella doesn't deal she might end up like him. Can't wait for the next update.. ;D



Author's Response: Jasper certainly knows how to simple things up and Bella really needed to hear it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Ok...you just made me fall in love with Jasper! That was brilliantly written!!! LMAO I am excited for Bella and Edward to talk, and it kills me that I have to wait so long...but I do understand your point on that one. But if it's not too much to ask...you could post a little faster! The suspense is killing me!!! =)



Author's Response: Jasper certainly has his own fan club! I am trying, bb! It was less than a week between updates! Hang in there! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: angiepie02 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

PLEASE can we have some Edward/Bella in the next chap. PLEASE even just a longing stare =p ANYTHING

Author's Response: One more, sweet. They will see each other in 41. Not long now. Thank you for reviewing!

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