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Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Wow!  This is getting happier and happier.  I can't wait 'till Edward shows up.  It'll be really emotional.



Author's Response:

Just remember, next chapter is not a one shot deal.  There’s more to come.  But we are on the homestretch toward happy:)

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: angiepie02 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

PLEASE have Edward/Bella love next chap, don't make her hate him. Have a heart to heart and keep in tune with the characters and how Bella forgave Edward after New Moon

Author's Response:

Just remember, next chapter is not a one shot deal.  There’s more to come.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: ShannonMcK (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Great story! Can't wait to see what happens...what would I like to have happen, hmm...I'd love for Bella to realize that she is at fault too and even though Edward made a horrible decision, her decision to run away really wasn't that different. So I think she should be honest about what she feels and thinks and I'm sure that will hurt Edward, but in the end...she loves him, they both made mistakes but they can move forward and grow together. What do I think will happen, Edward will beg for forgiveness, take all the blame and spend days, weeks, months, years trying to make up for what he did...he won't allow her to take any blame but she will forgive him in less time than he thinks is possible and they will have their happily ever after.



Author's Response:

Just remember, next chapter is not a one shot deal.  There’s more to come as these two have a long way to go before they heal...

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

AHH!!

I loved this.

But she has to see Edward soonnnn!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it!  Edward is up next!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

I hope...they're both honest. More miscomunication is NOT what they need. Great chapter! Emmett was unexpected but so great. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it!  Emmett is so wonderful.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: HSE (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

lol erm bellas heart monitor freezes up ala twilight

ooo charlie could escort edward to bella room and give him a good ole heart to heart charlie style....and will elizabeth be in it?



Author's Response:

LOL!  Well, you should soon find out!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

I don't want Bella just swallowing her feelings of rejection and anger just so Edward can feel beter too many  stories do that it's as if all that she suffered is pushed ascide soon as she sees him she has a right to exspress  herself and how she feels Edward feelings to me are inconsequential it was his choice he brought it on hisself she never had a choice he choose to put himself  trough that pain  . give Bella the right please to feel betrayed hurt and heart broken   because most stories don't as soon as  Edward appears she shoves her feelings aside.



Author's Response:

I don't think you'll have to worry about that here.  Hang in there.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

OMG this chapter was just amazing.  I love Em, no knocking just barging right in and knowing what to do.  I think you are right though about Alice and it being more work than she thinks.  I do hope like Alice that all will be ok in the end.

Hmmm next chap.  I hope that Edward will bring Elizabeth to Bella himself but I don't think that will happen.  Or I would like for Bella to see him talking to Elizabeth without him knowing.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the chapter!  There is much more healing to do but it's a step in the right direction.

Keep in mind that the next chapter is only the beginning, okay?  Promise you’ll remember.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

I so love this. It's killing me having to wait for Bella and Edward to talk though. You are doing a beautiful job with this story! I just love how I can totally put myself in Bella's shoes and feel her pain. Amazing job! I can't wait for the next chapter! I am expecting the next chapter to rip my heart out and leave it beating on the floor. I hope Edward is able to show her all the emotion that he's been showing through out this whole ordeal. I hope he can get over his problem with not letting Bella think for herself and I hope that he is with Bella when she sees Elizabeth for the first time. But most of all, I hope that Bella can forgive him and doesn't end up pushing him away.



Author's Response:

Keep in mind that the next chapter is only the beginning, okay?  Promise you’ll remember.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

good angle... congrats and good luck



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kumari (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Love this story very much, sorry for not reviewing earlier.  Great writing and you handle the characters really well.  Hmmm here's my thought on E & B together again.

She's going to be selfless as is her way.  He will Emo ward  beyond belief.  He will beg forgiveness, she will clam up.  He'll take her silence as non forgiveness and start downward spiraling again, not listening to her heart.   What will save them is that Elizabeth will be brought in, and she will be the cement that helps glue the pieces back together.  Their undying love for her will help them heal as she will be a piece of common ground that is safe for them to share feelings on.  Bella is not mean, and would not want Elizabeth to not have the undying love of her father, so that she will readily accept.  As that blossoms between them, their own love will mend.

So that is my take on how it may go.   However you write it though I'm sure it will be fantastic.   Great job!



Author's Response:

Keep in mind that the next chapter is only the beginning, okay?  Promise you’ll remember.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

I love Em!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Emmett is so wonderful! I lurves him! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

awww!!!!! this is so...sweet! im not gonna say pefect, coz is fucked up, but this chapter almost was....well, the emmett bit was :D i have said it before, and i will say it again, this is SUCH a FUCKING AMAZING fic. and thas still an understatement :D just speakin the truth here :D

 

and i dont no how u write such an amazing fic! im ritin one, and its on fanfic, but its so annoying trying to write it!!! and ive only done one chapter....:S not goin so great, but watevs, this is about this fic, wich, in a nutshell (divided by...say...50million) way too amazing forn  words to describe. basically.

 

:D love it-as per usual! :D:D:D



Author's Response: Emmett is so wonderful! I lurves him! I am so glad you're still enjoying the story! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

ahhh i want to see edward and bella...you are good keeping us all around waiting for them! haha

i really want to see an emotional, lovey-dovey mixed in with a "i'm sorry"s fest. i want them to have an emotional, dramatic, tearful reunion, declaring their love for eachother and edward begging for forgivness.



Author's Response: Keep in mind that the next chapter is only the beginning, okay? Promise you’ll remember. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Great chapter as always. I ADORE Emmett! If Rosalie wasnt so mean & scary, I'd fight her for him (lol). Bella's much nicer & kinder than I am for forgiving Alice (sigh). Aw, I loved how Bella asked Alice how Edward is with Elizabeth. So cannot wait for the next chapter & the big reunion! But so scared that the story might be ending soon (sad face). Whose story will I religiously check my email for update alerts (lol)?!

Author's Response: Emmett is so wonderful! I lurves him! And poor Bella just wanting to know how he is wiith their daughter! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

I was hoping Bella would talk with Rosalie, then Esme, and even make time for Ben, and some of the nurses before her conversation with Edward.  How I want him to squirm!

This was very touching.  I still can't believe the family allowed Edward to dictate their move and total removal from Bella's life.  I KNOW I COULDN'T be as forgiving as Bella has been.  I know she's not quite there with the forgiveness but even the little she's extended, I don't think I could have been quite that generous. 

Emmett is Norman Vincent Peale in his ability to heal with his laughter and earnest honesty.  Too bad his good cheer and good sense doesn't always extend itself to Edward who could stand to use a good dose of it.



Author's Response: LOL! Trust me, Edward is squirming and he has more squirming yet to do. Bella has definitely been forgiving thus far, but then again, her issues do not revolve around not loving them or wanting to be with them, it's about trust. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SteelBonedSelaneen (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Woah - I have just read this story in one massive chunk - I'm glad I only found it now as I don't think I could have handled waiting between some of those chapters!

Anyway - I love these characters, I love the way in which you have shown all the shattered pieces and the way in which you are picking them all up again.

As for how I would like it to end - well the reason I read so much fiction is because it gives everyone a chance at a HEA - I know from personal experience that it doesn't happen as often as it should in real life so I would like them all to be happy, safe. healed and loved but mostly Bella & Edward to be healing and loving freely and stronger beacause of it - if only because I'm like your Esme and I like to hold on to hope!

 

 



Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it! It's definitely much nicer when you can read it straight through! As for the HEA, it'll come. We just aren't quite there yet... Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jtaylor1972 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Still loving it... too small chapters... I want... no need more! :-) it's just that it's getting to a point that I wanna know everything... I want it all to be "okay" --- LOL! 

I have really enjoyed the way you have built the characters and how they are all coming together...

looking forward to more soon!



Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

I know she has a lot to be pissed over, but I want their reunion to be civil. No yelling. I really want him to be able to be honest with her and tell her how he feels and what he was thinking and have her really listen to him too. And I want them to talk about the baby! Hopefully she gets to see her for the first time as well and he gets to be a part of that. *fingers are crossed*

Please update soon! I'm so anxious to read the next chapter!!!! ;)



Author's Response:

Keep in mind that the next chapter is only the beginning, okay?  Promise you’ll remember.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 

 

 

Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

must see emmet the muscle man in trunks

 

really hoping for an edward/bella kiss perhaps as she is holding his daughter for the first time



Author's Response:

Emmett is so wonderful!  I lurves him!

Keep in mind, the next chapter is not a one shot deal.  That being said, I think you will get part of what you want...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: loss4words (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Wow. I didn't think I could cry so much just from the Bella/Alice reunion. Boy was I wrong. And I had a feeling that Emmett was going ot have to burst in there sometime.

The E/B reunion? EEK. I expect some graveling from him and eye daggers from her, but other than that? No idea.

Sweet chapter. Sad, but sweet. And we know the outcome will be good.

Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it!  Em definitely needed his presence known... 

Remember, B/E is not a one shot deal, so hang in there....

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

That was a really good chapter. :) One of those "oh no..." and then "OH YEAH!" good job!!

*hugs*

Joan



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

I agree, there is still a lot more work and healing that needs to be done.  I loved how Emmett just stormed in to talk with Bella.  He is such a good guy.  When Bella and Edward meet I think there are gonna be a lot of fireworks.  There will be a lot of screaming, tears and hopefully a little bit of healing.  There may also be some things thrown/broken in the process also.  I still don't know whether Bella and Edward will end up back together all lovey dovey but I hope that they can at get through this enough to be good parents to Elizabeth.



Author's Response:

I so love Em...

Just remember, next chapter is not a one shot deal.  There’s more to come. 

Thank you for reviewing!

 

 

 

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Beautiful chapter full of tears!

Next chapter?

Edward will sob and grovel at her feet and Bella will sob and scream and swear at him.  Then Elizabeth will be brought to the room.  Bella will see how much he really loves them and it will soften her heart...



Author's Response:

I think you'll get *part* of what you want.  But remember, it's not a one shot deal...

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

I always thought there should have been more interaction between Alice and Bella concerning the leaving.  I mean Alice sees the future, she should have stopped Edward. Not to mention how close they (alice and bella) were/are.



Author's Response:

Alas, in this story she can't see the future, although she's very intuitive. I'm glad you are okay with how this chapter went!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

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