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Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Yea, Daddyward is definantly sexy as hell! Anyway, loved the chapter. I like to heard what's going on inside their minds. I agree with Esme, Bella should make him earn every ounze of trust back. But not for too long though, I don't know if I could take it! LOL
Author's Response: LOL! Hang in there! It'll be okay.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
I hope Esme talked her into it. Edward is written so sweet in your story just love him she has got to love him too!
Author's Response: As Angela said, love isn't the issue. She still loves him more than anything. It's about trust now...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: ShannonMcK (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
You truly are a gifted writer, this was an exceptional chapter...and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for your kind words and your review!
Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
By far my fave fan fic. Can't wait for the next chapter!! (can Edward go shirtless in the next one?? Please?? :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Wish Edward could go shirtless all the time:)
If you like this fic, and you haven't tried it yet, give ...Becomes the Swan a chance!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: mebonvicino (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
more, more, more!!!! great chapter.
Author's Response: I am so glad you're enjoying it!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Great chapter! At least Bella and Edward are both getting some perspective on their situation. Now they just need to move forward with the information they have learned. I totally understand why Bella is so anxious about allowing Edward entrance back into her life due to lack of trust, but part of me would be able to breathe a sigh of relief if I saw some give on her part. I can only hope it will come soon. More soon, please!
Author's Response: You will see a lot more about Bella's thought process in the next chapter. I will submit it tonight!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
These were both good pieces of advice. I love this story. It really makes me emotional. I seriously got a lump in my throat when I read the conversation that Edward had with Angela. I feel for him even though he messed up. I can't wait to read the next update. Please let them finally talk.
Author's Response: I am glad you feel for him. I think both of these kids need a break...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
That was wayyyy too short. Wayyyy too short.. but fantastic.
Author's Response: They are all about the same length! LOL!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
I just love this story. It is very well written and I can literally feel the character's pain. Angela is my favorite right now.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story! I love Angela!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Nice!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
I love Esme. She doesn't get enough attention in the ficdom. Always the voice of reason.
Author's Response: She probably has the most important chapter to come. I love me some Esme!
Thanks for all of your support!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Loved this! I love Esme and Angela. Can't wait for more! Especially more Daddyward.
Author's Response: Shirtless Daddyward - causing spontaneous ovulation the world over!
Thank you for all of your support, darlin!
Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Good grief! Almost 7000 reviews for this story??? That's incredible!!!
Ok, I've been a bad reviewer...I haven't reviewed this in awhile. I do review the heck out of Becomes the Swan every chapter though (btw, where is the new chapter?? I need my Chubward turns Sexward fix).
The conversation between Angela and Edward is so sad and heartbreaking. He is struggling so hard to find a way back into Bella's heart. The trust issue is pretty huge though. Bella's conversation with Esme is so very painstaking as well and I'm glad Esme told her that no matter what her decision, she and Carlisle will be there.
Sooooo (rubbing hands together) we're getting closer to the big talk, right??? Surely that's got to be coming soon, RIGHT?? heehee....great chapter! :o)
Author's Response: LOL on ...Becomes the Swan. The chapter is in queue as we speak. Hope you got to see his Big Boy debut on Smut Mondays.
Brace yourself for the talk. It is, indeed, coming.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Great chapter! THX
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Ohhh... I wish they could talk already... can't wait for that...
I'm sure he'll find a way to get her back... loved the chapter!! :D
Author's Response: Brace yourself - it's coming...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Daddyward is sooooooooooo great!
Author's Response: I love me some Daddyward!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
sniff sniff ,wow i read this story this afternoon ,this is my 1st review on the story ,i wanted to find out what was gonna happen next !
wow ,very real and emotional ,i did find myself saying ,she believes in happy endings ............
Now be a darling and finish the story .My heart wont take it if you don't
x x x x
Author's Response: LOL! I absolutely will. I actually am almost done with the writing of it!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
What a beautifully written chapter! You never fail in amazing me, this story just gets better and better as it goes along. Angela talking with Edward and letting him know what she has to do to regain Bella's trust again and that she knows Bella never stopped loving him was wonderful! And Bella's talk with Esme was so touching because she showed she loved and cared for both of them and her asking Bella to give Edward a chance (in her own words) choked me up so much! (You know how I love your Edward) Can't wait for more daddy time for Edward - maybe if Bella sees him with the baby she will forgive all sooner than later (I can hope can't I) No forget that cause I'm not ready for this story to end!!!!!!
Author's Response: You are so sweet! Thank you so much for your kind words and your review!
Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
It’s not her love you have to fight for now. You never lost that. It’s her trust.
That line just got to me. Beautiful. Loved it as always.
Author's Response: It is so true though. You don't stop loving folks for hurting you. But you do stop trusting them. It's going to be a difficult road.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
I have believed from the beginning that they will find their way back to each other. After all this turmoil, anything else will just be wrong. I know you won't disappoint us.
Author's Response: I promise, I won't! At least I hope not!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Esme is a wise woman and Angela is a great friend. Bella and Edward are lucky to have them in their lives.
Author's Response: They both had some pretty important things to say, but said them in order to help our poor kids.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: tricky (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
I was sort of waiting for this chapter, I had faith it would happen! It's the whole Esme conversation - and I really wanted Bella to have that. I wanted her to get a moment with a mother, because that is one of my treasured memories from childbirth. Just feeling connected to my mother at that time, while holding my little girl, was amazing - I am so glad you had the foresight to put it in here. Although she doesn't have her mother there, Esme is a wonderful addition. Plus, i like that she was able to stick up for Edward a bit, yet she stil wants Bella to kick his ass, a little :).
Another great chapter, to an amazing story...I am in awe of your skills, and the way you are able to write emotions. Just a quick question - In RL, are you this aware of other's emotions? It's kind of a miracle that you are able to keep all of these people's individual emotions straight, i was just curious if you are this insightful with real people...
Well done!!!!
Tara
Author's Response: I am very in tune with other's emotions in real life. Sometimes painfully so. Writing this, sometimes, is emotionally exhausting but so very worth it.
I am glad you liked the Esme scene. There is another, even more important one, to come.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
I love this story--I can always count on the chapters to be well written, heart felt and emotional. You really have a talent for writing emotion; I'm always amazed at just how much emotion you are able to evoke from me.
At this point in the story, however, I'm getting frustrated with Bella. Edward was wrong on so many levels for leaving and Bella (and everyone else really) is completely right to not make things easy for him. What frustrates me is that Bella has not really taken responsibility for her actions. Regardless of whether or not she thought Edward loved her she had a responsibility to tell him he had a child on the way. I just keep getting the feeling that Bella has not been acting in the best interest of her child--the running away with no food, money, clothes, not telling anyone in her life about the baby, and now it seems that she is unsure about Edward's place in Elizabeth's life because she isn't sure she wants him around her.
Here's hoping Bella and Edward step it up!
Author's Response: Just remember, this story is all from an emotional perspective, *not* a narrative about what happened. What we see, hear, feel often doesn't reflect the truth of the situation. It's not always reality. That being said, you've made some great points and I think Bella has a better idea of what she did here than we have seen.
Great points!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
I must say I've missed Angela in this....her talk with Edward...sigh! :( Though she gave him a lot of stuff to think about....I'm so glad she assured Edward that Bella loving him is not the problem....trusting him again is. And gaining that trust back is going to take a lot of work.
Bella...dear sweet Bella....she is still breaking my heart! :( But as always...loved her moment with Esme....that is what she needs right then...a mother figure....even though Bella is a mother now...shes still a kid herself....a scared shitless kid who doesn't know what to do...and Esme was right in telling her to have faith and that everything will work out how it should....hey, having faith....if it works for George Michael....it will work for Bella. :)
ADORED it....as you know! :)
Author's Response: Can Carlisle be my Father Figure? Sorry, bad George Michael pun:)
I am so appreciative of all your support on this journey. You've been so amazing, and you are so very right in regards to Bella. These two are kids. Youngest of the lot of them, at that. That's a lot to absorb and handle at this age...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
roflmao@ sponmtanious ovulations
I love where your taking the story, good work
Author's Response: LOL! Shirtless Daddyward caused eggs to be released the world over!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
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