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Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! She believes in happy endings. She believes in happy endings. She believes in happy endings. No I'm sorry I don't believe you anymore.
During the chapter I figured Bella was going to say that they should take it slow. Start out as friends and go from there because that was how I read her thoughts. Then you dropped this massive bombshell that NO she doesn't really want anything to do with him. I was tempted to not leave a review as punisment.
At least the conversation was civil so when they do get togther (which they better *shakes fist*) it doesn't seem so out there. Bella and Edward's reaction wasn't too out of character.
Good chapter but the next one better be excellent to make up for the sadness and cruelty you have delt on both your characters and readers. LOL jokes.
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet! I know it was tough, but have faith in me!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Grreat chapter. I'm glad they finally had the talk and I am very happy with the way it went. I hate it when Bella gives in too easily.
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story.
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
LOVE CARLISE.
Author's Response: I love me some Dr. Daddy too!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
I LOVE ALICE.
Author's Response: Alice is so important to the story!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
LOVE EMME
Author's Response: I am so glad!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
OMG, I am sobbing. And chanting "She believes in HEA" And I hate to do this because i hate when people do this to me....but please, update soon.lol
Author's Response: I do believe in happy endings! Hang in there!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
I LOVE EMMET, SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Wait until you meet Jasper.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
yeah okay so we knew this chapter was gonna be ROUGH! I sorta thought our girl was gonna push him away or make things rough for him...AS SHE SHOULD...that boy has HUGE issues to atone for...make him WORK FOR IT...forgiveness should not come easy for him...he broke her in everyway a person can be broken...and they won't ever get to where they were...but they might find a new place!
anyways that is just my two cents.
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story. I knew it would be an unpopular one, but I felt that this is the way it had to go.
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
I LOVE EMMETT. NEW CAR FOR THE FIRST ONE WHO FINDS HER?
-FUCKING FUNNY AS HELL
Author's Response: Emmett is wonderful!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: femme_fatale (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
wow. so, im really upset, and im not okay with this. and somehow im really scared about this. WTF. PLEASE, say its gonna be okay. because im not believing you at this point... i love you, and this story, and i dont know if i can handle any more heart break about this... please, spare my sanity!!!!
all my love, and please, please update as soon as ever you can
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet! It will be okay.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Im not going to call you all the names under the sun, cause i know you will be getting enough of that from others. But i will say that its lucky you do believe in happy endings, or else i would have to confiscate your shirtless daddyward and give you lumps of coal instead.
As always, awesome chap :)
Author's Response: I do believe in happy endings! Hang in there!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
WOW I'm such a girl...i'm totally crying lol. Anyway you did amazing..this was just beyond perfect and I just totally loved every second of it...ud soon
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story.
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: StarryStarryNight (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
I know that there is hope for a happy ending but this is agonizing. I know I should just wait until it's done so i can read through all of them at once but for now i'm dying over here lol
Author's Response: I do believe in happy endings! Hang in there!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Lopez90 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Haven't they been through enough... Wow... Love the chapter hate what happened...
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lolobird (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
I think this chapter was great! I think she needed to shut him out so she can heal a some before bringing him back in, but I'm really taking a leap of faith that you DO believe in happy endings here. :) I can't stand to see this story end with them apart! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story. I do believe in happy endings, tho!
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: PintoBean (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Great Chapter! Did I mention it was sad.
The last couple of chapters have had me teary eyed but I loved every minute of it.
I'm anxiously waiting for the next update! :)
P.S.
While reading this chapter I was listening to a song named "Rise" by Gabrielle and it went great with this. You might want to check it out.
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story.
I appreciate your review! And thanks for the song rec!
Reviewer: katiepattz (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
oh.my.god.
SERIOUSLY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!
i am not even kidding you right now. i am going to flood your steel enforced door with my tears. because this chapter made me cry. :[[[[[[[
okay. freak out over. i do understand this, though. honestly, i probably would have made the same choice bella did. and i give you major props for having the balls to write this. :] because if they ended up together RIGHT NOW, how superficial would that be? i'd probalby be even more pissed if they did, because bella would be dumb to do it without edward even proving he is trustworthy!
ughh. so. i AM glad you did this. even if i hate it a little at the same time. :]
pleasepleasePLEASE write again soooon.
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet! But this is where I thought the story needed to go right now....
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Yeah lady. You need to go into The Witness Protection Program. That's all I have to say.
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
I can accept this as long as you don't bring Jacob in to be Bella's savior ::gags at the thought::.
Author's Response: I promise I will *never* do that to you!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
ok wow ! I loved them having a talk and I am sure that at some point they will end up together again. After all it is like you said she believes in happy endings. please please update again soon
Author's Response: I do believe in happy endings! Hang in there!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dana_1779 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
*Finds tools to cut into reinforced steel doors*
Poor Edward. I hope Bella realizes her error.
I have faith that you will turn this around for them!
Author's Response: Keep the faith. I do believe! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: amberrlove (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
What?! That was the sweetest apology I have ever heard. And no, no they can't be together? Oh no! I hope your gonna make this better. Lol.
Haha. No but really Great Chapter! At least she talked to him. That's better than nothin' right? Lol. Can't Wait For the Next Chapter :)
Yay! for Updates!
Author's Response: LOL. Give it time. It will be ok. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Poor Edward, but am glad that Bella didnt take him back right away make him work for it. If Bella does decide to give their relationship another chance. And he better *shakes fist*.
I am over here crossing my fingers wishing for a HEA!!!!!
Author's Response: Keep believing! I do! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: puska (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
I'm so glad you believe in happy endings because that would have been too tragic to bear. Edward's going to have another meltdown now. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I really do believe! Hang in there. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Hey, I think the dickwad deserves it. But what do I know? I wanted to kick Bella's ass in New Moon for letting Edward zip right back into the center of her life. It really pissed me off. Who in their right mind would let someone put their heart in a blender on frappe and then, when they apologized say, "There's nothing to forgive." I don't think so. More like, "I'm never going to forgive the son of a bitch and he will be groveling for years before I consider it." Well, perhaps most of us are a tad bitchier than original Bella. I think your Bella has it right. She can't just fall back in Assward's arms. Why on earth would she think he'd be there for her or for Elizabeth when things get tough? She's got to make Golden Boy sweat blood. He's earned it.
Author's Response: She isn't quite at the making him grovel point, but she definitely is trying to protect herself. I am not done with these two yet. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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