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Reviewer: ForeverLove (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
So...I love this story! I kinda alomost cried, I know I would have if my attention wasn't split between reading this and watching the Philles game! lol! But I have faith in you! I know this will have a happy ending!! :)
Author's Response: I do believe in happy endings! Hang in there!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
UUUGGGHHH! My heart aches. I need for her to bitch slap him and then get over it. In reality, would she stay for the money it could provide their daughter?
Author's Response: I do not think so. I think she could be convinced to accept money for Elizabeth's things - diapers, clothes, medical care - but I can't imagine that she would accept a dime for herself. She had a hard enough time when they were together accepting "gifts".
Don't give up yet. I'm not done with these kids!
Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
are you fucking kidding me?
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: agosbac (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
*dies*
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
OH my Lord Child are your trying to kill me? I cant believe Bella is saying that to Edward but sadly I understand how badly battered her heart is and is so afraid of getting hurt. I do hope those insecurities get resolved as it breaks my heart to see such pain,
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet! This is just where she is now...
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: DinerGirl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
i love this story! please don't let some negative reviews get you down... bella is doing the best thing for her and her baby! no one should just drop everything and run back to someone who just dumped them and ran. they are also young. it's best to slow down and not rush into anything.
aside from all that - great writing! good story line and flow. I really, really like this story!!
Thanks for sharing your work with us!
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story and for your kind words and support. This is where I felt the story had to go for now.
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: rogueslaygal (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Poor Edward! But I understand why Bella went with that decision, she's afraid to put herself out there again especially concerning Edward, the pain of his leaving is ingrained too deep.
Bring on more angst! I can take it...I think. Good job on this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story. I just felt that this was the way it needed to go for right now. But I'm not done with these two yet.
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: sgk39 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
NOOOOO!!!!! Fix it, please fix it!
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: unicorngirl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
oh you had better get on here and update and fix this mess soon or a mob of people with pitchforks and torches will start hunting for you. love the way you described the baby but seriously update soon
Author's Response: The chapter is in queue as we speak.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Kyramy (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
*sobs* *hits wall with pillow repeatedly* *sobs some more*
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightbookaddict (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Get back behind that reinforced door, young lady!!!
Ahhhh, Bella, why??? Don't be stupid. He apologized and he loves you. This isn't right!
**in all seriousnes, though... excellently written, even if I don't agree with what's going on :)
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet! This is just the beginning of their communication.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Oh, god! I so love this story, but will hunt you down (j/k) if you don't make this right! I so understand Bella needing to protect herself, but true love can't be denied. And they belong together.
Author's Response: I do believe in happy endings! Hang in there! This is just where I felt that Bella was at this moment. But that doesn't mean forever.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Oh man that was really sad, but I feel that somehoe they will get back to each other some way.
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: SyrenPrincess (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
What a horrible place to end!!!!...lol....cant wait to see what happens
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
I already reviewed this chapter once, but i just must do it again. i don't think bella did the right thing.
true love like that is NOT something to be thrown away so easily. it is something to fight for. most people in this world never to experience that kind of love. it would be a travesty to just throw it away.
edward made a mistake...one he obviously won't make again. that's why bella should forgive him and let him back in. and that's why bella did let edward back in so quickly in s.meyer's new moon.
life is short...true love is really all that's worth living for.
anyway, that was just me rambling my own opinions.
i STILL trust that you will give us a happy ending (which must include bella and edward together in order to be happy) but please don't make it too difficult on painful.
Author's Response: I think you will be very happy with some future chapters then. But you'll have to hang in there. There's work to do yet. Bella may have sounded final, but she's only been awake for 48 hours or so and is hormonal, terrified, hurt and drugged on pain meds. Not a good combo for making life altering decisions.
Hang in there!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Oh, my....that last line....gah! :( I know, I know...the happy ending will come...but damn! :( Still sad until that happens. I have no problem going over to the corner to pout until I get it!
In all honesty though....I know why she did that...and really don't blame her...and love that she knows that even if she can't be with Edward....that Elizabeth needs to be.... :(
I adored it, you rock, it was awesome...let me know if I left anything out! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story. There is still time left and Bella is going through a lot right now. But I still believe in happy endings.
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Wow! I guess they still have a long way to go but it was still hard to read
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
NO! I can't take it!!!!
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Well, if everything were all sunshine and roses the story would be over. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story. But there is definitely more to come.
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
I'm glad that Bella can be strong and resolute, but I'm sad that this is what she chose to be resolute about... to say never again. In her place, though, I can't say I'm sure that I would choose any differently.
Author's Response: I'm definitely not done with these two. I just felt this had to be her choice right now.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: azafrinah (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Yeah, she has made her decision! GOOD!
you have chosen harder way to this story, i am SO proud of you for that!
If her decision would not be this, your story would be over and Edward has not suffer enough, and i think that would be a lame ending for this great story.
OF COURSE i want the happy ending, but not like that!
NOW he feels the real pain, in his heart he feels what he had done to her.
Bella is SO brave, but I know the she cant live without Edward ;)
Keep going girl, now Edward needs to start fighting over her, and i hope it´s not going to bee too easy for him to get her back !
You are AWESOME, thank you!
-aZAFRINAh-
PS: Big Hugs all the way from Finland ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story. It just didn't feel right to me to have him jumping back into his arms just yet.
*waves at you all the way in Finland*
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Good for Bella. He deserves it. If he's serious he'll wait.
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story. I am not done with these two yet...
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: tuleangel (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
WHAT??????
Edward better not be all Emoward and say 'OK whatever you want' .... he better put up one hell of a fight and not let Bella go again.
Author's Response: Have faith. We're almost there...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cometgurl05 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Great story! But stop rologing their tourtue...evn if Emowarddeserves it!
Author's Response: Hang in there! I’m not done with these two yet! We're almost there.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Edwardishot (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
I hope you have a really good alias picked out, because we WILL find you....
Author's Response: I have hidden myself well!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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