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Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Jasper's right.  He put it oh-so-eloquently, but he is right.  Edward needs to show Bella that he's tough and he can take whatever she throws at him and then some.  He has to be strong while dealing with her to show he will be strong enought to fight FOR her and for their baby.  He needs to show her that she's worth it and that he knows he messed up and will do whatever it takes to get her back and show her she can trust him again.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  I think it got through to Edward that now that he's talked the talk, it's time to walk the walk.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Kisster (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I think I'm falling for Jasper, potty mouth and all! Edward needs to man up and show Bella that he isn't going to pussy out the next time things get tough. I'll cuddle Daddyward, but I think he might need a spanking first... you know to beat some sense into him... then I'll kiss it and make it better...



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  He seems to have his own fan club at this point!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilight15 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

What can I say that I haven't said on the thread already. I absolutely LOVED Jasper and his infinite words of wisdom. Between Emmett and Jaz... you just always get it like it is. I would definitely love to hear some Emmett wisdom soon.

I was wondering if you are going to bring Rosalie into the mix soon? Is she going to have anything to bring to help Bella and Edward reconnect? I know she always is protrayed as somewhat of a badass with a heart of gold.. so kinda wondering.

Otherwise.. heartbreaking chapter... the realization of how Bella felt that day in the woods now through the heartbreak of his own.. just hearbreaking and even more so realizing that both B&E are just kids going trough a torment of feelings that I don't even think an adult could handle very well...



Author's Response:

Em and Jazz- the best brothers Edward could have.  No, Rose is done for the main story, but don't count anything out for the epilogue.

Thank you so much for all of your support!

Reviewer: Tyley1 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

ok so my veterans day afternoon was spent with my heart in my throat making a big ol knot of things reading your story from chapter one- and let me tell you what a way to spend the afternoon evening and oh look its after 11pm - whoops! at least I did get the kids fed and showered and in bed. GREAT story loving it- the format- the words- the characters all of it! can not wait to see the final chapters and the epilogue you noted in an earlier chapter - just thought I would let you know, thanks for a very entertaining well, we should just round up to day at this point!



Author's Response:

Wow.  Thank you so much for giving my story a try!  I am so grateful that you enjoyed it, including the rather odd style and format!

I appreciate your review so very much!

Reviewer: kellyodonoghue (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

that was really good and i cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jenalpz (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I love your Jasper.

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Oh man.  I know there is a whole lot of sweetness and romance inside Edward.......let the fun begin.  I just know he'll do the standup thing and fight like a madman to get her back. 



Author's Response:

Fight!  Fight!  Fight!  Go Daddyward!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I'm glad Bella stood up to him. Even though Edward is througly upset, it just wouldn't be realistic if she forgave him like that. That's what I love about this story, the realistic vibe to everything that's in it :D.



Author's Response:

I do try to keep it as close to real as I can.  I am so glad you appreciate that, even when it hurts.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mycullenfantasy (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Unfortionately I don't love potty mouth Jasper, but besides for that I really did like this chapter. Edward did good and held it together in front of Bella, and Jaspers advice was really good. (minus all the bleeps) :-D

Author's Response:

Alas, that is his character for this story.  I am sorry if I offended anyone!  I'm glad you liked the content of the chapter.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Wow. I am totally in awe of how you are writing this. I just love how you write each character's thoughts and actions. I'm constantly gripped by this.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much!  I truly appreciate your review!

Reviewer: DazzledLamb (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I love Jasper. :] Update soon cuz I cant wait too long before i die of wonder



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Wow. For such a adult situation and being treated like such an adult by his parents...this Edward is awefully immature and reacts very childishly at times. Sort of makes me sad to know he has a child to take care of. Very Emoward! Thanks for the update. Love the story.



Author's Response:

He is an adult in most circumstances but here, he's been ripped to his core and he's fallen apart.  Luckily, he held it together when it counted and a little dose of Jasper brought him back again so that he can fight.

Thank you so much for reviewing

Reviewer: kate1991 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

seriously my eyes are blood red for reading 44 chapters straight. IF THE DON'T END UP TOGETHER I WILL FIND YOU AND DISSECT YOU



Author's Response:

LOL!  Hang in there!  I am not done yet!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: HSE (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

again and again and again I LOVE JASPER



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  I love to write him!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

God!!! This has to be one of my all time favorite Jaspers.  He rocks!!!  THX



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  I think he has own fan club....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Love when Jasper tells Edward if you watched Animal Planet you'd know that!  lol   Love this story!



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  Thank goodness for Animal Planet wisdom!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Bloody hell, that was amazing!

i love what Jasper said, im glad someone tells him the truth, i hate it when people pussyfoot around people, dancing around the truth!

There's no need for you to hide, this story is absoluetly amazing, you should be proud of what you write!!!!  :)



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  I so appreciate your support.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Edward is truly emotional aye?



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yup.  Just a wee bit!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Danae (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

OK, this is the best Jasper ever!!!!! I wish I had someone like that around in my life... I recently started reading your fic and I loveit! update soon!



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business! I am so glad you are enjoying it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

HA!  Love it.  The potty talk of courage.  lol



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Awww My shirtless DaddyWard is heartbroken!!
But Hell he was able to tell her he loved her and he will FIGHT for her and his little Love!! *squee*

but then he ran, he was so broken and at that moment I was like that is SO how Bella felt in NM.
I love how you gave him a taste of his own medicaine even though he's so terribly broken and downtrodden and it's hard to see but that makes the story so much better.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE Em tackling E, and Jaz saying that Em didn't have to do that cause he's like an 8th of E's weight LOL!
and Then PMJ going all animal planet on E, and LOL @ "rugrat" i really loved that *giggle*

And Carlisle's amusement and horror and how Jaz so "eloquently" laid it all out for Edward to finally understand Bella's reaction.

Awesome Job Ell :D
It will be interesting to see what happens next :P

xoxo

Lee



Author's Response:

I think his reaction was understandable.  The functional equivalent of Bella’s collapse in the woods.  But his family helped him pull it together and now he’s ready for the fight.  Carlisle's reaction to Jasper's wisdom is pretty amusing, no?

 

Yes, Daddyward needs some mad cuddles.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Not the face..why'd you have to make him get road rash on the face!!!  The rest...I can deal with!LOL....anxious for more. I want to see him fight for her....loved Jasper in this!



Author's Response:

Daddyward’s injuries are very minor.  I promise.  His stubble will cover the road rash!

 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Potty Mouth Jasper holds a very special place in my heart, I'd marry him right here on the spot if I could. Edward is very lucky to have two that great brothers in his life.

 



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  I don't know if Alice would be too keen on letting him go, tho!  LOL!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Potty mouth Jasper was back with a vengeance! I spent more time laughing at him this chapter than crying for Edward and Bella.

But I think Edward needed to run. He knew he had to fight, but he has to absorb everything first. Otherwise he'll end up being an even bigger jack-ass!

Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I think his reaction was understandable.  The functional equivalent of Bella’s collapse in the woods.  But his family helped him pull it together and now he’s ready for the fight.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: btomasko (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

definitely love potty mouth Jasper.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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