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Reviewer: jerogers06 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Love this fanfic... can't wait for more! I started reading it and read through it in 2 days. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
damn to predictable and yet a shock, i was hoping for different for that happy ending... but i guess its not the ending yet.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! We're definitely not at the ending yet...
Reviewer: ratqueen (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I love this story. I have been reading it in any down time for the past 3 days!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! So glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
ahhhhh! she needs for take him back, quickly. She doesnt have to forgive him right away, but she needs to have him near her to show him she can, in time.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! We'll see what she decides.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
oh, good i love emmitt, he so natural and just says what he wants.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Em's just a big bear.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus
OK i have to admitt, i dont like this chapter and yet i do, i can see in several places in several chapters where you make little notes to the SM storyline and how this is like her during her change (human to vampire). But what i dont like is how she knows the childs name, and how she is dreaming and in previous chapters she called the baby a boy and now she magically knows its a girl... its very confusing. but i still will keep reading.
Author's Response: Ah, but she knows because she can hear what people around her are saying. She hears Edward. Carlisle. She's somewhat aware.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
I just have to tell you Elizebeth is my favorite name, and had i had any girls that is what the frist one would have been named. but the faits saw fit to give me boys. So i have to let them barrow it when ever a beautiful girl with red hair and brown eyes (I have red hair and my hubby has brown eyes) is born, and her parents decided that its a fitting title for such a litte girl. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad you enjoy the name!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Can't wait to see what Bella chooses to do! She does need to move forward, even if that means moving in w/ the Cullens to get the help she needs. At least she would be getting the help and getting assistance with Elizabeth.
I can't believe I actually caught up with this! Like I said in my first review, this story is completely owning me right now and I can't wait to read more! I just couldn't stop reading! It flows well and because the chapters are short, I just felt like I was able to read more! So excited to see where we go next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! The next chapter is now up!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
omg you just dont stop.... cant say more speachless.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
I think Carlisle's proposal is a good one. Although, I do wonder if Bella will put up a big fuss at all of the options, trying to do it all on her own instead. She is damn stubborn and would try to say she could do it all. I'm thinking she'll stay w/ Charlie and have Alice and Angela come help. It's the furthest away from Edward.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! We shall see what she decides!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
Yep, still in love with Jasper! That was just awesome! Jasper officially rules my world! And Edward asked him to speak English! I understood what he said completely! Guess Edward was just a little too out of it though. His leg & face are gonna hurt like hell when he finally snaps out of it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Edward isn't so down with today's lingo:) And he obviously doesn't watch Animal Planet!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No
Oh. My. GOD! i can see, too many tears in my eyes, and my sweaty palms cant get the right keys. i am crying for bella and and edward, how bad it must feel to know you screwed up so badly. We always have wondered what the hell was he thinking when he left her. and we all crenge when we think of him punishing myself. oh and love the Angela saying she's Team Edward priceless.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Definitely a tough chapter.
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Ah damn! I knew she was going to choose the 'safe' side of that damned highway! I know she's trying to be strong for Elizabeth and to make sure she never feels that way again, but does she really think this is the best decision? Really?!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It's not so much about how she feels. This is about fear and trust. Give it time..
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Well, seems they both got some good advice. Hope they take it and use it! Man, the first actual conversation between these two is gonna hurt something fierce!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It's likely to be a rough start...
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I do think more was 'said' then verbalized as you put it. They didn't need to say much in that moment. It was good for Bella to see how much he loves Elizabeth and how much he still loves her. She'll let him in again, hopefully soon, but if not, it will be one day. They're too much apart of the other to be separate forever!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! We shall see what happens:)
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
seriously "sniffles" you suck and i love you at the same time.!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
That was a good reunion. Maybe not a perfect one, but it's a really good step! I even got a little teary. And then Emmett, ah, he's definitely a force of nature! And all you really can do is smile and love him! So excited/nervous for the Bella/Edward reunion.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! The big reunion is coming!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
Yeah, so I'm all Team Edward and shit, but damn if I don't love the hell out of your Jasper! He's buckets of fun and crazy as hell! Leave it to him to lay it all out for Bella, even if it was in Jasper talk. Pretty sure Bella speaks Jasper though!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Jasper is such a blast to write. He has a fan club!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
ahhhh, tears... ok hands working again. gotta keep reading.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
i have so many questions but one is forefront, why does alice, and edward, mostly a edward, calls carlisle and esme by their names and not mom and dad?? typo or are you trying to stick with the vampire thing in a way, it doesnt seem like it.... i may have to go back and read your writers notes.
Author's Response: Same reason that Bella calls her dad Charlie. Same reason that I call my dad by his given name. Some children just prefer it and some parents don't mind, I guess.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
WE all knew he didnt know, how could they doubt him at all. but what about bella, is she alright??
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Edward made some questionable choices so some amount of doubt is expected. But I think they all realize he didn't know in their hearts.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
thank god, i was holding out on the reviews because i had to know. i am so worried about bella, btw i dont read the things in the begining. are they important, i mean i know they are if you took the time to write them but, i dont want spoilers.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! The A/N's are sometimes important, so yes. They should not spoil the chapter, other than the title and POV, as well as how angsty the chapter is.
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid
Aw! She made some progress with Charlie. It's still going to be a long road, but I'm glad she's on the path! So happy that she likes the name. You kinda knew she would, but still, it's nice to know she does. It does have a really nice ring to it! Can't wait until THE conversation happens!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It's coming!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
Carlisle's talk with Edward couldn't have been easy, but he said what needed to be said, and hopefully Edward will get something out of it. Emmett and Rose with the baby was awfully cute! I think they need to have some little Emmett/Rose babies in the future!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am sure Em/Rose will be working on that as soon as they're "old enough".
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
I love Angela and her two cents. She isn't afraid to speak up and tell it like it is, and I like that! Her explaination of things will hopefully help Bella out when getting everything straight.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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