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Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Esme's pov was great...Edward and Bella are so cute but sad at the same time ..ud soon



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

I'm saying that were gonna get a look through Bella's, Edward's and... Alices.

Though... have we seen anything through Rosalie's eyes? O.O

You're absolutely amazing, and I loved this chapter. It made me tear up... and I do see hope. Lots of hope. But it's sad to see this coming to a close. Even if we have an eight chapter epilogue coming up.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  You are right on two of three of the last chapters...

Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

I am so happy and full of hope.  I know that they have lots to work through but I know that they can make it.  I was just blown away with what Esme said about how deep their love was.  To be in love with someone that much.............



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Yes, this is a once in a lifetime love..

Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Ohhhhh so cuteee!!!!  *sigh and smile*  can't wait for them to work it all out... and to some final talk.... that's gonna be something else huh??



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Yes, their final talks are... whoa.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Oh, bless her insecure little heart. I'm so glad Bella has Esme! Would that we all did at that point in our lives... :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I know.  I definitely did not have a mother figure around when I had my son.  I figured it out on my own (with kiddo's dad), but boy could I have used an Esme!

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Oh I loved it!!

Are you planning a sequel?  I would love to see them with little Elizabeth!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  No sequel as these kids need a break, but you get a look ahead in the multi-chapter (8 in total, I think) epilogue.

Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

this is one of the best and most sensitive chapters you have ever written.  i am glad to see that this is wrapping up and i am very excited to read the epilogue.  i love the calming influence of esme's presence. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I am so glad you liked Esme's voice.

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

I LOVED Esme's point of view!  She never seems to get a voice, and I know she must be dying to speak.  You wrote her as the kind of mother we all wish we had. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I love writing Esme....

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Aw, sweets...it seems that updates to this always appear at the right time! I don't know what it is....but this was such a beautiful chapter....especially Esme watching those little moments between her son and the love of his life....sigh! I loved the silent conversation between the two of them...they KNOW each other so well! The talk between Esme and Bella was wonderful too....I'm so happy that she has Esme around.

The hope is slowly but surely coming back....and that makes me SO happy! I already want the next chapter...lol! Though I'm so sad at the thought of this coming to end soon....you know I heart it so! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I am so grateful for all of your support on this journey!

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Awww, getting towards the HEA.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightbookaddict (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

This was, by far, the best written chapter of the story. And, also, the most heartwarming and informational. I love Esme's point of view because she doesn't openly choose one side or the other. When it's her thoughts we hear everything and when she speaks to everyone else it's very objective, which is nice to see. With the last three chapters I'm guessing one is Edward, one is Bella, and one is maybe Charlie or Alice. I can honestly say that I have no idea what you're planning on doing, which is weird for me because I can usually predict the end of fics halfway through. You are truely talented if you can keep us all in the dark while still producing a wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing; happy holidays!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I truly appreciate your kind words.  I hope the surprise is good:)

Reviewer: jackie84 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Ahh! Finally they're moving in the right direction! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

*raises hand* i do i do! awwwh i agree with esme, a love like bella and edward should not be broken like this :[



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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

My heart hurts, it's too much!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

OMG I am with Esme my heart is going to explode from this. So freaking sweet the way you wrote the looks those two give one another. keep peeling back the onion...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Their looks say so much!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Another excellent chapter.  Glad to see that Bella has a mother figure to look up to as she takes on the challenges of motherhood herself.  She's got such a strong support system between Charlie, Angela, Ben and the Cullens, and it would be a tragedy if she chose not to utilize that.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  She is trying to make good decisions for the right reasons...

Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

hmmm well that is a sucky situation for moma bella bear.yup, no easy fixers here. Good luck moma bear



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Mama bear has a lot on her plate...

Reviewer: dravenia (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

Okay, I lied earlier. THIS is now my favourite chapter. I'm just hoping that no one will come looking for me and find me as a sobbing mess in my room.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Daddyward melts your heart, no?

Reviewer: dravenia (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

I got all misty eyed from this! Especially since "Lost In You" from Three Days Grace was playing. The running mascara was worth it though. This is my favourite chapter so far. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Amazing how music influences experience....

Reviewer: Twifan_jus (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Oh My God!
You're killing me. I've never cried over a story so much in my life. It was like every chapter I'd cry, stop and then start all over again with the next one.

It's a really great story and I'm loving reading it, started last night (UK Time) and now I'm upto here and cannot wait to see where it ends up.

I think your writing is really good especially with it being in the different peoples perspective I've never read a ff with so many POV's

Hope you update again soon! ;) x

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I am so glad you're enjoying the story!  The next chapter is now up!

Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

i cant wait to see what Bella picks to do..  I think she should go to the Cullens for now.  I see Edward doing what is right for Bella and making her comfortable and showing he is a big man..  Just cant wait to see how you do it..  keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Edward is trying so hard.

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Option 1!!!!

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping

option 1!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Love Jasper!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Jasper has his own way of telling you like it is!

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

Bawling here...

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  This is definitely a difficult chapter.

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