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Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
hooray edward will stay in the house. he is so sweet. I just love him.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: audra12s (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
It was a wonderful chapter and awesome to hear from Esme's point of view. Well done! I am scared to be hopeful, but can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cutter58 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Loved Esme's POV. So much caring and love shows through from her. Get them back together. Edward has suffered enough.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
oh god i love it!!!esme is the perfect mother. i can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: chelsweb (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I just started this story this weekend and now I'm hooked...can't wait to see how it ends :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Not much left now! (except the epilogue)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
This....this has to work out : ( I feel heartbroken for the things that are festering and broken between them.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Give it a chance. We're almost there....
Reviewer: pink_photographer (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
YESSS I like that they are getting closer! SO CUTE :) Ahw, Edward carrying her into the house while she sleeps :)
:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! They are definitely moving in the right direction!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I actually said Awwwwwww, out loud while reading this. I loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so grateful for all of your support!
Reviewer: sweetdevil100 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
i usually get annoyed when there are too many POVs but you have done a magnificent job in managing the characters and also moving the plot forward...
Longer chapters would be great.
Keep it up
sweetdevil
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! This story was an experiment. I wanted to give as many POV's as possible and only in short bursts inside of your mind without every narrating an objective truth. You're getting the thoughts and feelings and observations of one character at a time, and, as we all know, those types of thoughts and feelings are often biased. I just let you fill in the blanks...
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Aw Edward should definately be in one of the remaining chapters
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Edward definitely will be one of the last few POV's!
Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Hope, yes definitely! Sweet daddyward and anxious mamabella = le sigh.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Aww I LOVED this chapter. I'm glad that sub counsiously Bella is giving Edward another chance. I'm glad too that Edward is being so nice about everything.
Loved the whole conversations between Esme and Bella.
Can't wait for more. I hope you update agian soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Bella, subconciously, doesn't have her rational mind messing with her trust and does what is natural - snuggling into him. Hopefully that will manifest itself in the waking times as well!
Glad you liked Esme!
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Yes, I'm finally feeling the hope, not just that Bella agreed to stay with C&E, but that she allowed Edward to help her in the car - that was a huge step in the long road of trusting him again, then to say she didn't want him to move out of the house. She obviously did a lot of thinking in those few days before her discharge.
Esme's POV was important here as she shared her observations about her son and wanting to be there for Bella as a mother figure.
Who might we hear from the the last three chapters: Bella? Edward? Carlisle? Alice? Angela? I like Angela as she's sort of an outside observer.
I'm just impressed that Lizzie slept the entire three hour drive back to Forks. My son never slept more than 90 minutes at a time the first three weeks. And the breatfeeding thing? Someone was pumping for her while she was unconcious? That was inspired. I just assumed that would be secondary to her surgical recovery and Lizzie would be on formula, but hey, if she gets to nurse, that'll save a ton of money on formula!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You did name all three for the last three chapters, but I can't tell ya which!
Glad you liked Esme's POV for this.
My son slept like a log. At least 3 hours at a time. I was LUCKY, I know...
Yes, someone pumped for her from the time Lizzie was born. It wasn't hindering her recovery and kept her options far more open when she could do it herself....
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I think Charlie's talk really helped her. She's getting the second chance he didin't get and I think she is going to take it.
Thanks for the lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Charlie did have a huge influence on her, as did Esme...
Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
You gotta love Esme, we should all be so blessed to have a giving, non-pushy MIL. Can't wait to see the interactions when Bella discovers that she not only needs Edward, but she also wants him too. Love this story and thank you for your timely updates.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: too far gone (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I am eager, yet sad, to think of this story coming to an end. I want the HEA, but just love these characters. Beautiful chapter. I love the B and E interaction and the loving kiss to her head.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Well, we still have the epilogue after the last 3 chapters....
Reviewer: Rowzy (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
omgomgomg.... Go esme! lol i love her. by the "main story" do you meen the entire fic? or just the main plot line? Will there be a sequel?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! By main story, I mean the entire story I meant to write. There will be an 8-10 chapter "epilogue" after the main story, but no sequel.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I knew it would be a great chapter....All things Esme are great. I am so excited not only did she decide to go to the Cullen house she said Edward could stay. When he lifts her from the car and kisses her head I may have broken out in a chorus of Oh Happy Day.
Alice is the girl isn't she? All those car seats. It lightened my mood considerably and I definitely laughed at that. Of course the mention of rethinking her car choice helped.
The mother/mother bonding was very sweet.
Great chapter. Really great chapter.
Sandra
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad you've stuck with me and encouraged me throughout this story. Thank you, Sandra.
Reviewer: FutureVampChic (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Esme always makes everything better. Everyone needs a mother like that. You have done very well in capturing her in this story. You have to write faster to feed my addiction though...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! The story is written - the chapters just have to wait for validation to be posted. Glad you liked Esme!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
So sweet! I'm so glad she and Edward had their little moments...it did give me hope. I think Esme is going to be a great influence on her but I don't think they'll need her interference. If they spend any time at all together with Elizabeth, it'll be all over.
Great chapter as always!! I can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! There is definitely TONS of hope there...
Reviewer: 1twilightfan4ever (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
OMG...Charlie and Jasper in the same vehicle together...I would love to be "a fly on the wall" for those conversations! LOL!!
This was an absolute perfect chapter...Esme taking Bella & Elizabeth home from the hospital...Bella really does need her now and giving her this time alone with Esme was just...just...perfect!!
And yes, I do have hope now...so glad that she didn't make Edward move out.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Keep Hope Alive!
Reviewer: vampire-25-princess (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
You are evil; you are beautiful. You are lovely! You are wicked. I want to hug you... I want to beat you up. You are the devil. You are a godess. A very well spoken (written) godess. And you have blessed upon earth this heart wrenching tear provoking little bundle of joy. Oh, yes, and the story's good too. Haha, sorry but I'm in love with Lizzie, that used to be my favorite name! This is such a wonderful story!! Don't stop or I might just keel over and die. And I think my family could find some way to sue you for that... :) LOVE IT!!
**vampire-25-princess**
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! LOL on the review! Please try not to kill me before I get to your cookie-filled unicorn epilogue...
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I'm so happy that they are finally on the road to mending. I can feel the love Esme has for Bella and Izzy. And I think Bella really needs Esme right now because of her tenuous relationship with Renee. Leave it to Alice to find ways to spend tons of money on the little things. This made me laugh uncontrollably. I'm thinking we will be hearing from Edward, Bella and Carlisle as the last three chapters come rolling in. I'm really going to miss this story. I feel like it's a part of my life that's about to end, which makes me so sad. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Alice is a shopping whirlwind. SIX car seats? Really? LOL!
You hit the nail on the head, although not in that order, for the last 3 chapters.
We still have a big ole multi chap epi to come...
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
You're my hero again.
I seriously was upset with the last few chapters. I know I know...happy ending and all. It still doesn't make it any easier to read the sadness.
So commentary:
Daddyward and Elizabeth...so cute.
Bella and Edward's "silent conversation" ...heart fail.
Bella's decision...my cold heart beats again...kind of.
I eagerly await your next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad I have redeemed myself!
Reviewer: lydchil (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
YAY!!!!!!!! Is all I have to say! I was so worried that Bella would make Edward move out, or that she'd choose to live with Charlie.
Great writing! Can't wait for the next chapter :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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