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Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

THis was really sweet. Great writing. Very tender.

*hugs*
Joanie

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Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

i LOVED esmes pov! it was perfect for this chapter and I am sooo happy that bella chose to stay with the cullens and that she let edward stay. *sigh* I cant wait to know what happens next :)

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Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Wow! So much love between the two of them. Will there be a sequel? Just wondering.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! There will not be a sequel, but there will be an 8 chapter epilogue set in the future.

Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

awwww, another great chapter...8D

next please.....

tiny

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Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

This chapter is so incredibly well written and sad. It tears me up every single time that I read it.

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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Her mind may steal need to heal along with her heart but her soul is mending and even if she doesn't realize it little things like her body naturaly snuggleing into his chest as he carries her to her bed just screams healing process!!!!

I am so happy she asked him to stay althought it would be entertaining if she said no he can go but if she wanted him to have daddy time be like ok I am going to take a shower so you can come be with Eli, hed get there her shower would be quick before he had to walk all the way back she could toy with him so much muah hahahah LOL

I loved the chap great work look forward to the next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: jengurl0413 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

love this and love it from Esme's perspective! I am thinking a little more potty mouth Jasper is in the near future and hopefully more esme!

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Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

definitely feeling the hope.

can't wait for more

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Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Awe this was perfect. Esme's POV is always so full of wisdom and goodness. I truly hope that she suceeds in helping them find their way back to one another.

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Reviewer: azafrinah (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Your Esme is great. <3

Im waiting so much Alice POV, she will be the greatest (and the craziest) Pixie the godmother ever ;)

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Reviewer: Tyranny (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

I want to leave you something good, something deep and well worded, but I can't. After this chapter, I just have no words. I do have tears, so I'll just leave you those. Thank you.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Aw, I so appreciate your support.

Reviewer: Celticgirl264 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

I loved Esme's POV and that she was such a prominent character in this chapter. I don't get to ready many stories where Esme is a main character and that she gets to be such a comforting and sweet character. It's usually very brief if I do. I loved the chapter and cannot wait to see how every one handles the new baby and taking care of Bella and how Bella will react to motherhood.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am glad that you liked Esme's character. I agree, she doesn't get enough plot in most stories soi she is pivotal to this one.

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

I liked Esme's POV, so calm and sincere. As for the remaining chapters...um, Alice, Bella and either Emmett or Rosalie.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You got one of the last three correct:)

Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

It's incredible the way you can transmit the thoughts, dreams and hope of a fictional character making it real for us. I love every single one of your characters and Esme right now is no exeption, she's so compationate and loving and the perfect mama bear meets stepford wife, hahaha. I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Wow, that is such an amazing compliment. I so appreciate it.

Reviewer: heatherbug (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

You are going in the perfect direction with this, it's really a lovely story. Almost 11 years ago I was 17 and bringing my baby home from the hospital so I understand Bella's fears and you capture them well.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad I am doing this story justice.

Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Yes! Finally feeling some hope here! And that last part with Edward carrying Bella into the house was just so sweet. It melted my heart. *sigh*

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Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Oh, how wonderful.... I can see that they are on the path to mend their heartaches. That was just sweet. Esme is really great and very perceptive. Wow, so now they will all be in one house. That was a good decision on Bella's part to stay with the Cullen and not let Edward stay at the guest cottage too. That was just so Bella.... really!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad you like the way this is going.

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

I got immediate chills when I read the title of this chapter. I had already sensed it would be a powerful one, and it indeed was. I thought she would choose the option to stay with the Cullens, but I did not think for a moment that she would want Edward to stay in the house with them. That was a shocker for me.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope that I did the chapter justice.

Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

I love it, i cant wait to see what happens next, baby antics i'm sure, and maybe bella will have to lean on edward more each day, until she realizes he isnt going anywhere?? just a thought. thanks and i will be paceing waiting for another chapter.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope that you are satisfied with the next few chapters!

Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!! great chapter!

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Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

its sweet.

i still think bella's an idiot though....................lol!!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Nah, she's just a scared girl...

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Is it wrong that I didn't cry in the last few chappie but this one I ended up crying and hating seeing it end....Oh, how I love Esme.....I am so glad that Bella chose to stay with the Cullen's...I can definitely see a happy ending like Esme said, that wise woman, "Yes, with time, everything would be okay." Ellie you knocked it out of the park on this one...and I believe that the last few chappies one of them will def. be Edward...Looking forward to the next one...

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad you liked this chapter - until the last 2, it is probably the most important to the story... Thank you so much for all of your support, and you are right, Edward does have one of the last 3 chps.

Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

The only thing I want to see is Edward get mad and stand up for his right to be a father regardless of what happened between him and Bella he has every right to take care of "Lizzie" while Bella can't.

Author's Response:
I don't think that Bella has ever tried to say she was going to prevent him from being a father to Elizabeth. In point of fact, she actually promised she would not. Even had she chosen Charlie's she would have allowed him time with her. Not sure where you are coming from above. I do appreciate your thoughts, however. He does have every right to be involved in her life.

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Esme's POV was so observant of emotions. It was exactly what was needed. I'm so elated to see E and B making some progress. This chapter was very sweet.

Author's Response:
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Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

This is the most hope I have had for them. I think they need the time to bond with the baby. If he takes is time with her

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