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Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
aww, that got me a little teary
Author's Response: Hopefully good tears!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Simply lovely. Beautifully crafted, and utterly believable with the way you have painted these characters all these months.
Thank you so very much!
Author's Response: Wow, I am so grateful for your comments!
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Reviewer: kikalee (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
I think this is one of my favorite chapters (the other being when Bella wakes up to see Edward with Elizabeth in the hospital) Again it is a chapter that is so simple but strong and beautiful.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I think the next one might beat those out though. At least I hope.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Great update! Finally she sees the light... ;o)
Author's Response:
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Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Oh, my heart. In one word this chapter was perfection. It's so true. Here I was expecting one big grand gesture from Edward to have him fix things with Bella when in truth it really is a series of events. Small gestures that lead to bliss. In previous chapters you definately showed some small moments between Edward and Bella. Those small moments lead to this one moment in which Bella told him that she could be with him. My goodness. What I would give for his pov on this. One chapter left and then the series of epilogue's :-) Edward was perfect in his actions towards Bella during breakfast. I have a feeling he remembers everything about Bella. Hot Chocolate with milk. He knows her. I love how Jasper's mouth. How Alice elbowed him for swearing. The laughing during breakfast was perfect. I can't wait to see where you take us :-) Daddward owns me :-)
Author's Response: Isn’t it odd how things as small as cutting her food for her and knowing her drink preference bring her to this realization? It’s the small things.
As for Jasper, poor guy is going to have to relearn his entire vocabulary.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
*Happy sigh*
I'm glad that it's finally here, that their relationship is on the mend some forty-eight chapters later. *Smirks*
I am so proud of you.
You've come a long way and you've given us an amazing story.
I will be sad to see it end, but I know that it'll be happy now.
I loved Jasper though, it almost reminds me of how I would have to rein myself in around a baby.
Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Jasper is too much fun. I pretty much *have* to write an epilogue chapter for the boy.
I know, it was a long time getting to this point, but I think you know why I went this route and hope you enjoyed the ride....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Love jaspers struggle to speak with out swearing. To funny. I love that Edward instictively knows her wants and needs and just takes care of them for her. To sweet. Loved the vase thing. TO true, hooray for the hopeful edward.
Author's Response: Isn’t it odd how something as small as cutting her food for her brings her to this realization? It’s the small things.
I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Aww...yay. I loved this chapter. There was like almost no angst in this chapter.
As always Jasper, is hilarious!
Author's Response: We're pretty much done with the angst....
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Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
!!!
Author's Response:
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Reviewer: bookluver (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Love it
Author's Response:
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Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
I really am dreading the end of this story, you have such a way with words - great job!
Author's Response: I am so glad you're still enjoying it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
awww...this is just so damn perfect.....well, as perfect as anything can get in major angst story....
When i saw the update for it all i could think was 'perfect this is honestly what i really need.' no sarcasm. I love this so much, and for once i wasn't pissed off, but i was stressed out from all this crappy work that i need to do-after missing two lessons, one a week, and having to complete everything and find out for myself how to do the work, isn't the nicest thing to do. But this just makes me feel better...even in the major angst ares. But I did get pissed off when I noticed that it had been posted for twenty minutes before i noticed it, and i didnt notice it BECAUSE of the damn work...
anyways, enough ranting this is just frickin amazing i just LOVE. IT. SO. FRICKEN. MUCH.
Author's Response: I am so glad I could give you at least a little stress relief!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
ahhhh so close to happiness. bella, edward, and elizabeth need happy family moments.
Author's Response: Still have a way to go for that, but I think you will be happy with the last chapter.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
i liked bella's reasoning. really good chapter! jasper may be my favorite character
Author's Response: I think Jasper is a lot of people's favourite character! Poor Daddyward...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jimmy7660 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
The only word I can think of is .........Perfect.
Great job on not only this chapter but the entire story, so far. And I can't wait for the last chapter (big tear) and for the epilouges. I will not offer any suggestions because this is your story and I just thank you for letting us come along for the ride....it has been a blast.
I would be so sad but, we still have Chubward, who I love!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it and that you are reading Chubward's tale as well....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
They are learning. Just like the rest of us.
Author's Response: Isn't that the truth? All of life is an exercise in learning lessons.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: angelica1 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
I so want these two to get married and build a happy family together with Elizabeth. They're never going to be happy apart
Author's Response: Well, remember, they're still 17 (in this story) and have a lot of growing up to do, but I don't think it's out of the question.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
How can she not just completely melt in edwards presence. So sweet. Just love him.
Author's Response: Simply because he hurt her and took away her trust. Not that she's not forgiven him, but it complicates just falling into his arms quite a bit.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Love it! So well done... The analogy was brilliant and explained it so perfectly. I can't wait....no, I can wait...knowing that the next chapter will be the last... Ok, my turn for verbal diahrea...
Author's Response: I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
An update from this always makes my day! Sigh!
I love their family breakfast...so sweet! From Jasper and his adorable potty mouth to the simple gesture that spoke volumes to me of Edward simply cutting Bellas food while she held her little angel...oh, my! And I loved how it came to her and she figured it all out....that whole part about a broken vase...that was so beautiful and perfect!! And then his line...ugh! Make me cry! :P
I know we have the awesome epilogues to come...but to think the main story is almost done. :( I'm going to be SOOOO sad...I've been with you and the story since practically the beginning...I think I came to it around the 4th chapter or so....WOW!
Absolutely looooved it!
Author's Response: Isn’t it odd how something as small as cutting her food for her brings her to this realization? It’s the small things.
I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
beautiful..just one request: please make the last chapter, presumeably Edwards, LONG. Thanks..sniff sniff and sigh..
Author's Response: It has been written for over a month and alas all of the chapters in this story are roughly the same length. The first chapter of the epilogue is a bit longer, but the chapters are short for a reason.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
GAH! I am so excited to read the next chapter! I loved the vase analogy. :)
Thanks so much for updating.
xo
Author's Response: I am excited for you to read it.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Thank you Thank you Thank you....I'm so glad Bella realized that she made mistakes too. Hopefully they can both work together to rebuild their relationship even if they only end up as friends. I loved this chapter and I so sad this story is ending soon.
Author's Response: I think Bella understood she made mistakes all along, but due to everything going on with her, she just couldn't put it all together coherently for him until now.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Gidget (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
i love progress. great chapter.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Lovely metaphor with the vase.
I really liked the big family meal. And Jasper's attempts not to swear were hilarious.
Author's Response: The vase just sort of popped into my head - I'm glad it worked!
Poor Jasper had such a hard time containing his potty mouth. Alas, he'll learn...
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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