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Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
AAARRRRRGGGGHHHHHHH! This is killing me...plus i am a tad pissed that he has that whole betrayal thought going on. he is just about to get his ticket punched on edward cullen screw up train of angst. i am so praying you have submitted the next chapter.
Author's Response: I promise! It will be up soon!
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
AAARRRRRGGGGHHHHHHH! This is killing me...plus i am a tad pissed that he has that whole betrayal thought going on. he is just about to get his ticket punched on edward cullen screw up train of angst. i am so praying you have submitted the next chapter.
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Edward is very confused right now, and reacting, rather than thinking. Give him a little bit of a break for feeling like his family kept things from him. They did. Even if I don't agree with him having any right to feel betrayed, I can understand that he would. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
GAH! You and your freaking cliffhangers! I have complete faith in you though and you won't leave us hanging long. Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Telly21182 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
You left it like that?!?! There better be a reason, like you said there is. JK! Can;t wait for the update though - I have to know what Edward does.
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted 18 last night and I do explain why I split them up. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Please read between the lines of the last paragraph of my last review. It was just too damn long to delete and start over again and well hell I have dishes and other shit to do. It should read something like go ahead and stay behind the couch. And then there should only be one "the" in the final sentence.
Yeah, what can I say, angst does this to me.
Sandra
Author's Response: LOL! No worries, love! I knew what you were getting at!
Reviewer: poodleann04 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
This chapter literally made my stomach hurt! I can't wait to see how Edward is gonna react!
Author's Response: You should see it soon! I submitted the chapter last night.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Twilight_Girl_Ox (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
such a good cliffhangerr!
great chapterrr... update soon pleaseeeeeeeee. i need to know edwards reaction!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
AAAHHHH!!!!! You CANNOT leave it like that! Evil! Evil! :)
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted 18 last night and explain why I split it up. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Oh yeah, I had to get up to look through the compost bin for rotting vegetables. You cruel, cruel woman. Can't wait to read the next one...Hold it together, Edward! When will he swoop in as a knight in shining armor and take care of her? He may need some balls, me thinks.
Author's Response: Yes, he definitely needs to grow a pair... and fast. He goes through a LOT of changes in the next few chapters, so hang in there! ::: dodges rotting cabbage :::
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Hey, you got room behind that couch for a sad soul. Shit now I know how Twilight Jasper feels. So here I was at the edge of my seat waiting for the bomb to drop, you know my hand and wrist doing that circly thing like come on...
Emmett's emotion was very strong for me. It's like he wanted to beat the crap out of Edward but really wanted to believe E didn't know but if he did know then he'd have no choice but beat him up and throw him out of the plane.
Esme could only cry and feel despair for what this is doing to her family and Bella and the unborn baby....her grandchild... yeah, her entire family.
Carlisle had the tough job of breaking the news...not knowing what to expect when he finished. How would Edward take this? As if he doesn't have enough stress.
Alice can only sit there...sit and try to soothe him...be there for him...hope he won't sink back into himself so far he can't find his way out.
And Edward, achtaleeba (phonetic), what must be running through his mind. I could literally feel the whole dry throat, can't swallow and the bile tries to come up and no matter what the feeling does not go away. Poor kid just took a hit that he never saw coming and in his already weakened state. Sure he knew something was up but certainly not this. And surely he feels a sense of relief that she is not dead. But still and he has to feel a great deal of self loathing right now. So in his mind does he throw himself off the plane, so Emmett is off the hook? Does he scream out things like BELLA! and What Have I done? repeatedly and become feral in his actions as he paces like a caged animal? Or does he retreated into himself so far that no one can reach him ... lost to himself, lost to those who love him ... how will he ever help Bella from there?
I'll tell you what. You go ahead and tay behidind that couch while I lay on it with a cool washcloth on my head as I ponder various outcomes. I'll do my best to keep the emotional mob at bay. In the the meantime you work on getting the next chapter posted okay?
Sandra
Author's Response: You've really gotten the emotions down. That is exactly where they all are and they *all* are deeply affected by this. I am sure I'd be obsessing over Edward's potential reactions as well, if I didn't already know what it's going to be! Don't worry, you will find out in short order!
I did submit 18 last night, so hopefully it will be up soon!
Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Awesome chapter.
I really love Edward, but I want him to suffer beyond his own self imposed misery and blame. I know that is dark, but he has been 'miserable' in a very cushy mansion wrapped in eygptian cotton or silk (sheets) while Bella has been in hell. Yep... I want his blood, ok... not his blood but I want him to feel it in the depths of his heart, I want him to fully understand what he has done. For that to happen, wouldn't Bella have to reject him?
Sorry, I am just so angry with Edward.... I love this freakin story!!!!!
Author's Response: Trust me, he will suffer at more than just his own hand. But I do like happy endings, so Bella can't outright reject him... well, at least not forever. Stick with me!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BreatheTime (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OMG I can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for updating regularly :D
I love it
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kahllan (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
What a fantastic chapter. I can't get enough of this story! I hope Edward's usual self-blame and hatred doesn't make them getting back together impossible. Obviously he will blame himeself for the whole mess (and I'm not sure he's wrong) but that will not solve anything. Update ASAP please!!
Author's Response: Edward's self loathing will definitely be addressed in 18.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Okay I dont hate this chapter... just cant wait till next chapter!!!!!
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Please don't hate! The next chapter will be out really soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
How could you stop there?!?!!!!! I'm begging, please, please, please update soon. With a cherry on top :)
~Susan
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. I explain why in the next A/N! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: wootmoot (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Wow, that is a lot for him to take at one time. My heart breaks for Bella and Edward. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
I started reading this VERY LATE last night finally turning off the computer near 3 am since I had to be up for work at 6:30 am. I was so excited to see an update this morning so here I am at work reading instead of working and enjoying every word!! Absolutely love the story and can't wait for more updates!!!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh!
Well, thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it and that you took the time to review!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
I promise not to throw anything. again I repeat my mantra...I trust pomme believes in happy endings. Emmett was priceless here, I knew he wouldn't be able to hold back the anger. Edward's self loathing is very believable. I am interested to see his reaction to the news that she is/was pregnant.
Author's Response: You should see really soon!
Emmett is trying *so* hard to hold it back, but it's so difficult for him!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
[very loud screaming] You're killing me here, I need more. I've been waiting for Edward's rxn for too long. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Yup...you better hide missy cuz that's some cruel shit you just pulled. It's coming soon you say...well let me check. not here yet....still not here....so not soon enough for those of us who are perched on barbed wire...waiting...waiting
tick, tock sweet cheeks...tick...tock.
I'm only going to throw small soft objects, because you are so amazing at what you do, and I know it will be worth the wait. So dodge the pillow and the teddy bear...but be on the look out for my brand new patent leather mary jane spikey hills if you don't dealer...muy pronto! ;)
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Oh no! Not the mary janes!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Oh you are just plain ole mean!!!!! But of course you know we love it and can't wait...oh please don't make us wait too long!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Oh Goodness....intro to angst city on the fucktrain!! WHOOT WHOOT!!
Love this chapter! The last line is SUCH a good cliffy.
I will go see what measure of comfort I can offer on the thread until you get home tonight.
XOXOXOXOOXOXOX Jess
Author's Response: You are amazing, chiquita! I could do NONE of this without you! I never would have even posted!
You rock!
And I am so proud of you and your story!
Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
No offense...but I HATE YOU!!!!!! How can you leave us, you LOYAL fans, hanging like that?????? Thank God I had to keep answering the phone at work while I was reading, or would be bawling like a baby!!!!
I can not wait to see where you take Edward on this. I am not sure if he will be mad at him or his family, then mad at himself for being mad at them! Geez! I love Ememtt in thit too BTW, he is such a great character that doesn't get enough attention! I love it!
Author's Response: LOL! No offense taken! I explained why I did it in the A/N of 18. Which should be out soon! Thank you for the reviewing!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
I certainly hope you're proud of yourself for leaving thousands of people on the edges of their seats, pleading with their monitors for one more line! I've been loving this story, Edward makes my heart ache. Can't wait to see what he does now!
Author's Response: Oh, you will *definitely* ache for him after 18! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: bandcampblonde (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
that was so mean! you can't leave us with that! Update, please!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted 18 last night. Thank you for reviewing!
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