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Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Please post NOW!!! I have to know what Edward's reaction is.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

it was good



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it.  The next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Ok so I'm so glad he knows but now i need to see his reaction...UD UD UD UD

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Ok so I'm so glad he knows but now i need to see his reaction...UD UD UD UD



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: mayian2 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Eeeeeek!  Thats all I have to say.....*breathe in...1...2...3..4....and out...2...3...4....*



Author's Response:

LOL!  Keep breathing!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Finally! OMG he is going to shit a brick!!!!!!!! Well he kinda already is but still........PLLLEAAAASSSEEEE UPDAT ESOON! I'm dying! Your chapters are teasingly short as it is & i can't take the suspense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A SHIRTLESS R PATTZ ON TOP!?!?!??!?!



Author's Response:

Damn you know how to motivate me!  Did RPatz agree to this?  Coz Hell to the Yes!

I submitted it last night!

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Oh you evil... you built us up... and then cliff hanger.  Please say you are putting another chapter up soon.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: erikaluvsedward (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Nexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxt chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Edward11 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Ok the in the previous chapter notes you confirmed you would not have her lose the baby but this last line seemed to be in past tense? did they deliver the baby? or did you have a change of heart?  I know I know all will be told in the next chapters so please for all that is holy please update soon

Reviewer: Edward11 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Ok the in the previous chapter notes you confirmed you would not have her lose the baby but this last line seemed to be in past tense? did they deliver the baby? or did you have a change of heart?  I know I know all will be told in the next chapters so please for all that is holy please update soon



Author's Response:

LOL!  I did not have a change of heart and it *will* be explained in the next chapter.  Which I submitted last night!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Aaaaarrrggghhh! Please... need update ...

Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

WE ARE WAITING!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: nannanutbread (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

you are brave...i won't hate though, just get it to us fast! please?



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Ackkkkk WAS????  I hope she didn't lose the baby... Can't wait to see Edwards reaction...



Author's Response:

The baby is fine.  I'll deal with the *was* comment in the next chapter.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

yes, I'm cussing you with the rest of them for leaving us hanging like that!!  cruel cruel author! :)



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted 18 last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: maria111 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

oh my god i found out today this fan fiction and stayed till late the last 2 hours to read all the chapters,its 4 in the morning and i am working in 2 hours haha!i am reallTHAT excited to see edward aw 



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh!  I hope you get some sleep, but i am so glad you liked it enough to read it straight through!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

omg....such a huge cliffie! lols

ur good at cliffies... i might have mentioned tht before :P

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  But I rectify them quickly!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: ginbelle (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

i just read it and im begging you continue it now!!

pleasee just hurry

amazing story, just...wow

xoxox



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I submitted 18 last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: freesiagirl171 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: BrownEyes11 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

I'm so sorry about your friend, and I'm happy for you about the baby. I hope all is well soon. Keep up the awesome work!



Author's Response:

That was a rough week for me.  Thank you for the support!

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Liked hearing this from Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so glad you already have it written. LOL. You're doing a great job. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  You'll get another whole chapter worth of Edward shortly!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BrownEyes11 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

So good. I can't wait for more. Lately I've been having trouble finishing stories, but there's no trouble here at all. I just want to keep going and see what's next. More Bella...excuse me, *cough cough*, "Marie", please!



Author's Response:

LOL!  There are 32 chapters pre-written, so there's definitely more to come.  Not to mention, I'm not done at 32!

Thanks so much for the reviews!

Reviewer: ABH (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Excellent.  Please hurry w/ Edward's reaction.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Ellie!

Hey Girly!  So, I read everything ya sent me last night!   I'm all caught up!  Now, onto Chapter 17...Yikes....heart-wrenching...ugh...just want to wrap my arms around Edward!  Love it girl!

XOXO

-Whitney



Author's Response:

You read it all without Prozac and Rum?  Damn, you're superhuman!!!

I know, you want to kick Edward and hug him through the story to this point.  By the end of 18, you just want to cuddle him close and then book some therapy!

Thank you for reviewing and for supporting me in all the ways you do!

Reviewer: OCD - ObsessiveCullenDisorder (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!!!

I actually screamed no at the screen..... please tell me we dont have to wait long for the next update..... I've chewed my nails to the point of no return.....

Please update soon.... I dont know how much more waiting I can take....



Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

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