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Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:22 PM · On: I Wonder If It Will Upset You
I am reviewing. and If you do not update soon I will be very disappointed... Excellent work.
Author's Response: next chapter is up!! hope you like - thanks so much for the feedback x
Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:05 PM · On: This Is Enough
.... OMG. u made me cry. YOU HAVE A GIFT. If it werent for your britishisms, I would think you are SM urself... Thank you for writing this. It is beautiful.
Author's Response: BRITISHISMS!! LOL. i jolly well tried as hard as i could not to put them in there but guess some have slipped in... thank you so much for the wonderful encouragement! x
Reviewer: Cepstein1980 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Bella, I Think You Should Go Inside Now
I was finally happy to find a continuation of Midnight Sun that I actually enjoyed. Thank you.
Author's Response: No problem - thanks for the review (and sorry this reply has come so late) x
Reviewer: waitfortheraintofall (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:32 PM · On: I Wonder If It Will Upset You
AHAHA. I cant wait for the rest! POST SOON ;D
Author's Response: It's up!! Keep enjoying, thanks for the review! x
Reviewer: Ibelize (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Just Remember Rosalie, Not Another Word
Very good, you added a little friction between the charachters at hand and it went down nicely! You have a very good pace for telling the story line. :)
Author's Response: thank you! i worry that it's getting a little slow sometimes... but your encouragement just keeps me going! x
Reviewer: misha2607 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:28 PM · On: I Wonder If It Will Upset You
great job!!! More please!
Author's Response: have literally just posted the next chapter, thank you so much for the review! x
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:10 PM · On: I Wonder If It Will Upset You
Love it. I'm not sure if you know that the back story for Esme and several other characters is posted at the Twilight Lexicon. they've been put together from several emails and interviews that Stephanie Meyer did. this info could help you with introducing the others stories. but the writing is good and i love it. keep it coming please!
Author's Response: thank you so much!! Twilight Lexicon is brilliant, an invaluable resource to keep referring to from now on. I've changed Esme's backstory to suit... hope you enjoy! x
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:49 PM · On: I Wonder If It Will Upset You
You really just channel Edward, it's spooky! Not much more I can say, except that I am truly enjoying your version and especially the parts where you can really divert and put your own thoughts into it-like the fashion of the 80's!
Author's Response: Yeah I really like the idea of Alice and 80s clothes, definitely my fave decade clothes-wise! thanks soooo much for the continued feedback x
Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:12 PM · On: It's The Colour Of Your Eyes Today
this is as if I am continuing off exactly where SM left off. You have a gift. Thank you for writing this.
Reviewer: jswham (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 02:23 PM · On: I Wonder If It Will Upset You
Wonderful. Only thing is Esme's ex-husband did not die at war. He was an abuser and she ran away from him so she can give her baby a chance at a normal happy life. SM said so herself. The information is on twilight lexicon. http://www.twilightlexicon.com/?p=22
Also, Edward's father was a lawyer and his family was moderately wealthy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much - can't believe I didn't know about Twilight Lexicon before! I've amended the details of Esme's marriage. However, even if Edward's father were a lawyer he still would have been drafted and gone to war... thanks for the feedback x
Reviewer: Morgan76 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:38 PM · On: I Wonder If It Will Upset You
Loved it and cannot wait for the next chapter which is one of my favorites. If I may, one small correction...it's "intents and purposes" not "intensive purposes."
Author's Response: you may - that's been amended, thank you so much! x
Reviewer: quirkyquad (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:49 AM · On: It's The Colour Of Your Eyes Today
Very good so far! I like your writing style. Looking forward to hearing more about Billy's thoughts.
Author's Response: poor Billy, he just has no experience of teenage girls! hope you enjoy the rest x
Reviewer: lovebunny (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:40 AM · On: This Is Enough
ah this is so very wonderful!!
Author's Response: ah i love you bunny! thanks for the support x
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Bella, I Think You Should Go Inside Now
Well done! I really like it.
Author's Response: thank you sooo much for the feedback! x
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:05 PM · On: This Is Enough
wow, I have to say that this chapter is the best among all of the previous chapters you'd written. GReat work!
Author's Response: thank you, i wish there was more meadow in the book, i could literally write it forever! x
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:05 PM · On: This Is Enough
wow, I have to say that this chapter is the best among all of the previous chapters you'd written. GReat work!
Author's Response: thank you! if you like this then read chapter eight, it's my favourite! :) x
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:03 PM · On: This Is Enough
*grin* I especially liked the part where he was trying to commit their first kiss to memory
Author's Response: he'll never forget it! and neither will Bella (hopefully) - thanks for the feedback! x
Reviewer: joanw (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:43 PM · On: This Is Enough
Another wonderful chapter. I can hardly wait for more - please keep writing. You truly have a gift!
Author's Response: you truly rock my teeny world, thank you SO much, i've already posted the next chapter. x
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:17 PM · On: This Is Enough
Are you sure you're not Stephenie? Just checking.
Author's Response: if only i could take credit! thank you SO MUCH for the review. x
Reviewer: misha2607 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:24 PM · On: This Is Enough
That was great! I can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the story. Keep it up!!
Author's Response: hurrah! the rest is coming soon (have written most but i have quite a few chapters still to do...) thanks so much! x
Reviewer: themooncat (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Bella, I Think You Should Go Inside Now
great writing! You really do it justice :) please writre more can't wait xxx
Author's Response: i've just posted the next chapter, enjoy! thanks for the review! x
Reviewer: aussievamp (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Bella, I Think You Should Go Inside Now
loved it LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! SIGH! Thank you!!!
Author's Response: YAY! thank you so much for reading! x
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:28 PM · On: This Is Enough
i can't wait for more....this is very GOOD
Author's Response: it's coming soon! thank you SO much! x
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Everything About Me Invites You In
i really enjoyed this.... i am so looking forward to more..
Author's Response: more is coming! and the bedroom scene is close after, eeep! x
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:07 PM · On: This Is Enough
You're doing a great job with Edward's POV. No wonder Bella always had the feeling he was trying to say "goodbye" - he was always thinking about leaving (nice inclusion, by the way - this makes his eventual abandonment in New Moon make more sense when we consider how much he might have been considering leaving for her own good since the beginning). It's ironic and regrettable that neither Bella nor Edward really grasped how much they meant to the other for so long - so much pain could have been prevented if they could have been completely open & honest about the depth of their love. Please update soon - can't wait to read more of his angsty thoughts!
Author's Response: It's obvious that every second that they are together is both a physical and ethical struggle for Edward... I've tried to portray it this way, I hope it works. Each of them is so scared of being vulnerable I guess it takes them a while to really admit the depth of their feelings - well love is scary I guess. Thanks so much for the feedback, it really is appreciated x
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