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Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2014 07:49 AM · On: Enough For Forever
very well done... I LOVED it
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 01:10 PM · On: This Is Enough
oh no, don't whine... loving it
Reviewer: SCWillson (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2013 06:55 AM · On: Enough For Forever
Wonderfully done!
I have just a couple minor issues:
1) Since Midnight Sun was narrated by Edward and uses American as opposed to English spelling, Equinox should have continued that. (And yes, I know it's a pain. The only bit of fanfiction I've ever written had an Englishwoman as narrator so I had to use English spelling, and my story was only 15 pages.)
2) In Midnight Sun we discover that Edward has difficulty reading Charlie's mind; he only gets the tone. Equinox has several examples of Edward reading Charlie's precise thoughts.
Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 11:35 AM · On: They Want To Play
Why would a game be named after a bug? At least it's not called roach, lol.
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 04:20 PM · On: Bella, I Think You Should Go Inside Now
um realy? Vampires in Phoenix---no clouds, no rain, too much sun---feeling like you forgot to read the canon story here.
Reviewer: TraciSnow (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Bella, I Think You Should Go Inside Now
I LOVED how you brought up Charlie's heartache and Edward hopes he never makes Bella feel that sort of pain. I know that jacob thinks Bella would have gotten over Edward, but even she told him that she wasn't whole, not a broken car that could be fixed...I don't think she ever would have gotten over him fully. I loved how you brought that into the story. I've read MANY versions of Midnight Sun continued, and even though this is only the first chapter, I have to tell you, that so far I think you have done the BEST! I'm excited about reading the rest! Thanks!
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Enough For Forever
Well done! There's a few discrepancies here and there with some minor spelling/grammar issues, but I thought your continuation of Edward's POV per Midnight Sun was very enjoyable. Thank you.
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Enough For Forever
Just want to say thank you - for sharing this story with us - for finishing what Stephenie started. It was so much fun to read!
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 02:21 AM · On: She's With Us
Your writing is amazing! So true to Midnight Sun, I love it.
In this chapter, I especially liked the idea of James recognizing Alice. This will probably give Edward some things to think about, not knowing who James was thinking about, won't it? - so I'm just gonna read the rest of the story now :-)
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Enough For Forever
love it
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:41 AM · On: An Impasse
love your story amazing work one of my best storys os midnight sun excelent work im in awe of you work amazing just amazing
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:39 AM · On: A Terrible Accident
loveit
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:38 AM · On: Carefully, I Sealed Away My Heart
amazing
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:37 AM · On: You've Taken Half My Self Away With You
loveit
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:37 AM · On: It Won't Be All Right When I'm Not With You
loveit
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:36 AM · On: She's With Us
loveit
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:36 AM · On: They Want To Play
amazing
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Maybe Even Better Informed Than You Are
amazing
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Everything Is Easy For You
love it
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:30 AM · On: It's The One Place We Never Have To Hide
love it
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:30 AM · On: You Are Utterly Indecent
love it
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Don't Go Away Then
love your work
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:28 AM · On: I Wonder If It Will Upset You
amazing amazing
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:27 AM · On: This Is Enough
love your work
Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Everything About Me Invites You In
loveit
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