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Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:44 PM · On: A Leap of Faith
Nice
Author's Response: I have to say you are a person of few words, but it makes me smile. Thanks for the comments over the chapters :)
Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:13 PM · On: A Leap of Faith
Oh, that was beautiful. I'm an addict, I'll admit it. More please!
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:14 AM · On: A Leap of Faith
Honeymoon eh? Gonna increase the rating? ;)
Author's Response: Oh yes! The rating will change, but I have to admit it will still be below NC-17 -- probably R. I just am not the descriptive lemon kind of girl -- especially when I love my characters. Check out my other story (Honeymoon Sweet) and you'll get the idea of what C&E honeymoon will be like. The Twilight men are just too gentleman-like (except for Emmett I imagine).
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Homecoming
very good.
Author's Response: Thank you for your multiple reviews. My focus for the whole story is on emotion. So I am glad that came through along with the sincerity of the characters. Thanks.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Choices
its hard to see her gut wrenching gried and emotion
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:26 AM · On: The Chase
I love to see the beginning of the relationship....boo charlie
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Secrets
Esme is beautiful physically and ideally
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Transformation
I enjoy this chapter..i didn't like Esme losing control of herself but since she is a new born I see it as fitting.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Resurrection
I love the rationalization of Dr. cullen and the fact that you included the suicide prevention info...good job
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Ashland, Wisconsin
this brought tears to my eyes. Your a very good author if you can do that.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Dr. Carlisle Cullen
Carlisle's thoughts are also very well defined. I love it.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Esme Anne Platt
Its sad to think Esme with all ther love had to suffer. You brought that feeling out very clearly
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:04 AM · On: First Meeting
Very good. Esme is so bright.
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Resurrection
Wonderful done! It rings so true to the facts we know!
The story of Carlisle and Esme has always kept me wondering.
Reviewer: hershortness (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Secrets
I love this story! This is the best Carlise and Esme story I have ever read. Thank you for such sensitive interpretation of these wonderful characters. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Homecoming
Wow i love this story i cant wait to see what happens next :)
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Homecoming
YAY! That seems to be the appropriate word right now. :)
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:38 AM · On: The Chase
Oh no! How did he find her?! Evil, evil cliffhanger....
But that means I just have to hit the next button now! :)
Reviewer: snoopykota (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Homecoming
Okay so my comment isn't very original, or insightful, or profound but here it is: Awwwww!!!! :)
Author's Response: It's a great comment! Thanks for taking the time to leave it!!
Reviewer: MercedesBaybee (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Homecoming
More, please.
That is all I need to say.
:)
Reviewer: monipulator (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Homecoming
UMM is there more??? can u write more?? please?? with a cherry on top??
Author's Response: Yes, I've got more in my head and some on paper. But the pressure is on to get it right!! Stay tuned....
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Homecoming
awww, how sweet! they're so cute! what's gonna happen next?
Author's Response: Nothing but love, baby!
Reviewer: the mom (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Homecoming
I enjoyed your story. It was especially fun to read it on Mother's Day. I have some similarities to Esme. I was married to a cruel person, and partially due to his actions I was unable to have children. After quite a few years as a single woman I married again. My husband had custody of his three children and was lucky enough to become their "second mom" and raise them. Now they are adults and two are married. I have also been able to become close to my children's half siblings and they have also become like children to me. I know about the joys of motherhood and what it is like to love a child unconditionally even though the biological link is not there, so I identify with Esme. My husband and I have seven grandchildren now and we just returned home from watching our son graduate from law school. Like Esme, I found how to accept the blessings of life even though it has turned out differently than planned. Keep up the writing and enjoy your family. The Mom
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your candid and kind comments. I certainly tried to portray the emotions of an abused Esme accurately. I try to write from experience, and have not experienced an abusive relationship, so I did not go into as much detail because I didn't want to pretend to know what that would be like. However, I did work in assualt prevention and knew a little about how survivors felt. I have however, experience post traumatic stress syndrome, infertility, loss of an unborn child, and subsequent depression, and a evolving relationship with God. You are right how life isn't necessary what you expect or plan. I have now learned that is part that teaches the best lessons. I was amazed how much of my life experience I could fit into a story. It was very theraputic. I am so glad your story had a happy ending! I promise this story will have one too...
P.S. Law school! Awesome job, mom!
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Homecoming
Please tell me there's more. : )
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Homecoming
Awww! So cute! *squee*
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