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Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Honeymoon, Part II

je reve toujours d'un amour comme cela. j'attends qu'il arrivera bientot - j'espere...

 

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Honeymoon, Part I

good decision!!

again, beautifully depicted.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Plans, Prayers and Promises

awwww that was nice and intimate.

was surprised at the wedding band being platinum - a relatively new metal to jewellery but not freely available.  that makes the wedding jewellery all the more special!



Author's Response:

Wow!  You are quite the voracious reader!  And a very kind reviewer!  Thank you for taking the time to respond to all the chapters (I saw you read Honeymoon Suite also).  My C&E story doesn't toy around -- I know that now after looking at my Twi-friend's C&E story -- she's planning 50 chapters!  I just couldn't wait to get to the good stuff!  I did research their rings and platinum was the prime choice at the time.  Believe it or not, when I was researching 1920 jewlery, one of the jewelers that popped up was 'Cullen Jewlery'.  Freaked me out!  Needless to say, I used the info from their site!  We're they calling white gold at the time?  I remember my mother-in-law mentioning that.  Again, thanks so much!  I will reply to your review on Honeymoon Suite.  I think a friend of mine might be starting a thread -- don't know what that is, but she thinks it'll be fun!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Flowers and Forever

nicely pitched.  you have an innate sense of what is needed in such scenes.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:07 AM · On: The Dance

just right.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:02 AM · On: A Leap of Faith

that was simply beautiful.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Homecoming

at last!  how nice was that.  not too much dillydallying and toying with the readers' emotions. for that I thank you (and Edward for his polite nudge).

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Choices

absence makes the heart grow fonder?

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:45 AM · On: The Chase

hmmm I was wondering when the boot was going to drop!  meanwhile, a nicely paced and gently phrased initiation into the romance.  am I too much of a romantic to hope that Carlisle will win this battle against evil lol?

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Secrets

in answer to yr end questions, yes I did!  that is why C&E are soulmates lol

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Transformation

wonderful writing and descriptions.  sensitively handled.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Resurrection

you are such a beautiful purrson for putting the link to the telephone number at the end of your chapter.

such a poignant piece of writing, such a hopeful piece of writing too.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Ashland, Wisconsin

amen to that!  poor Esme.  well we knew it had to happen but the reading of it is still not any easier.  very tenderly done. thank you.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Dr. Carlisle Cullen

Rudy lol that was a good one!!  you are a fabulous writer.  I'm completely drawn in.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Esme Anne Platt

I can feel her horror.  you described it all so well.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:52 AM · On: First Meeting

ahh the dashing doctor and the dazzled daughter!

Reviewer: xDaRkAnGeLx81 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Journey

Wow. I just read all of this story, and it was amazing!  You did an amazing job at capturing both Carlisle and Esme's emotions and thoughts.  It was perfect. :)  Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to more stories from you.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a comment.  Your energy made me smile!  If you can, check out Through Their Eyes, a series I am doing on C&E.

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:10 AM · On: A Leap of Faith

Yay, I'm getting close to catching up with this story.

Brie,



Author's Response:

You are so funny!  Hope the story is not torturing you too much!  Hey, I did my own banner for Through their Eyes -- it's simple but I sooooo love the picture!  Check it out when you get a chance.  Take care!

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Homecoming

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I'm looking forward to getting caught up with this story.

Brie,

Reviewer: bellazoo (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Journey

This is a fantastic story.  Thank you for writing it.  Also thank you for sharing in fanfiction where your missing scences are.  I enjoyed reading into more of Carlise and Esme's feelings.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review.  I found I had many teen followers in ff and just couldn't bring myself to change the rating after they had been such wonderful readers.  I'm glad you enjoyed the more detailed version.  Be sure to check out Through Their Eyes.  I may eventually do a lemon scene just for Twilighted.  Take care and thanks again.

Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Journey

I so loved this story.  The ending with the crest was so perfect; it really shows how all members of the family would want to honor their fgamily bond on a daily basis.  (The addition of the crest was one of my favorite parts of the movie.) 

I am so excited for you upcoming looks into Carlisle and Esme's thoughts.



Author's Response:

Thanks for being such an excellent reviewer.  I was intrigued by the crest in the movies and at first thought it was just another marketing gimick.  So I had fun with making it more than that in my world.  The best part of writing this was placing events and things where I imagined them originating (the crest, Edward's piano playing, etc.).  It gave me a chance to be creative within an established story.  Hope you enjoy glances into C&E in Through Their Eyes.  Take care!

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Secrets

I loved how you showed Esme's and Edward's reltionship slowly blooming. I think when Edward let his gift slip and Carlisle can after him is my favorite part in this chapter.

Brie,

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Transformation

This chapter was amazing I loved it. I can't find the right words to all that I wnat to say about it other then it was a beautifully written Chapter.

Brie,



Author's Response:

Thanks for checking out the story!  I saw on ff that this story was added to one of the communities for winning an award -- must have been your Shimmer award that got me there!  Please feel free to PM me and offer any suggestions on how to improve on this story -- I really care for it so much I want it to shine as much as it can!  Take care!!

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Resurrection

I've always wanted to know more and now I do. I loved the vision you had with this chapter.

Brie,

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Dr. Carlisle Cullen

I loved the interaction between Carlisle and Edward. It was nice to get a glimpse of when Edward decided to take Carlisle's last name.

Brie

 

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