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Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 24

Cool!!!! What a way to make up... :D



Author's Response:

haha, i know, right? thanks for reviewing ;)

Reviewer: lost my mind forever (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 24

lauwhorean is going to make their life a living hell.



Author's Response:

she's certainly going to try...we'll see how that pans out :)

Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 24

heheheh um okkkk i love it love it. marcus is a doosche. fuck you, lauren. MORE!

Author's Response:

hahah, thank you :)  more is coming!

Reviewer: Pixiebitch_dk (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 24

Love that you put in Van Halen. It's already on me playlist. =D

And loved the rougher sex. But your sex scenes are always great. And how sweet was the ending them sitting naked together and him sing to her. Aw...

 

Can't wait to see what's going to happen at their next gig...



Author's Response:

loooove van halen -- glad you approve..there will probably be more, haha.  and--glad you approve of their rough sex. and, i've noticed recently that all their most romantic moments are prefaced by really dirty moments, haha.  don't know what that's all about....needless to say, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 24

I loved this chapter, and I am really rooting fro Edward and Bella to make it in the music industry!  They are a wonderful pair.  Death to Lauren and Marcus!



Author's Response:

thank you -- i think that's awesome.  and definitely death to lauren and marcus ;)

Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update ^^

The chapter was realy funny in the end, ans I like the last trough of edward.

Update asap ^^



Author's Response:

any time :)  i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!  i think the next few should be a bit funnier and less dramatic than this one, though ;)

Reviewer: SDDoo (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 24

Ok, so quick recap: Marcus is a douche, Lauren needs to have her bleach blonde hair set on fire, and Edward needs to fix his verbal filter.  I think I got most of it.  But Edward's "apology gift" to Bella was so freaking adorable!  I can't wait to see the drama that happens when Edward and Bella have to start playing by the new rule.  Sounds like it will get very interesting...



Author's Response:

haha, yeah -- i think that's about right :)  and...the new rule is so fancy, right?  it's like being shoved back into the closet.  fun times abound, i promise!  thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 24

Fuck Yeah!!!  Congradulations on your nominations.



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: 2SHOTS2BEERS82 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 24

awesomeness!!! loved it... cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

thanks!  more next week...same place, same time ;)

Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 24

AMAZING CHAPTER I HOPE NOTHING GOES WRONG WELL sometthing will but dont make it thta bad excellent chapter

 

poor alice had to here that GROSS



Author's Response:

haha, thanks.  no worries--nothing THAT bad is going to happen, i swear :)

Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 24

Good chapter...nights at the bar should get very interesting, some good jealousy sex I am sure, love the rock star comment!



Author's Response:

haha thanks -- nights at the bar WILL be very intersting in the future :)  and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 24

More!

Author's Response:

as you wish :)

Reviewer: YourNameHere (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 24

As always, great job bb!



Author's Response:

aw, thanks :)

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 24

My thinking..... when they have to "socialize", Edward and Bella DO NOT leave each other's side for a single minute, unless it's for the bathroom. I also think that Marcus did this because he heard about how hot Bella is and also heard about Edward and his "manwhore" days and decided he'd try and break them up... with Lauren's help.



Author's Response:

hahah - i like that idea, but i have a feeling that marcus and lauren won't be standing for that...they're such trouble makers...let me tell you, haha.  thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 24

Great!  Can't wait to see what Lauren and crew have in store for all!



Author's Response:

thanks!  it should be fun to watch, right?  oh, and thanks for reviewing, as always :)

Reviewer: Irritable_Grizzzly (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 24

Ugh...so SO nervous about the new rule and I'm quite sure Lauren came up with it. I'm holding you to the humiliation thing and trusting you to make it really good. No namby-pambying around with it, k?

You definitely found a creative way for them to have to go back into hiding. I'm also glad Bella knows that Lauren will try to screw with them, so I'm not expecting any "Lauren presses Edward up against a wall to kiss him, Bella walks in and thinks they're making out and leaves in a huff" kind of things. I know you're above that.

I like that Edward told them and that he showed her the compositions. There are so many stories where they don't communicate and that crap lasts for like eighty chapters all because nobody has the balls to open up their mouth and speak. Glad you've avoided that as well.

I know this was a set-up for what will probably be a stomach-clenching chapter coming up, but I believe in E/B and the strength of their relationship.



Author's Response:

hahah, no namby-pambying around...i promise.  lauren's going to have a fun few chapter, hahah.  ohhh, yes.  --sorry i'm laughing, but i promise you will be too when you find out what happens ;)

also, yeah--the whole misunderstnading thing is pretty played out, so ... we're not going there.  i swear.  and, yay - i'm glad you liked the reveal of his compositions.  i have a book of my own, but i'm too chicken shit to show them to anyone, so...edward got to do it for me, haha.

thanks for reviewing--hope the future chapters live up to your expectations!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 24

great chapter.  can't wait for more



Author's Response:

thanks so much!

Reviewer: Calricjes82 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 24

Thank you so much for the update! It was great, as usual!



Author's Response:

aw, thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: mountaintop (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 24

more, please!



Author's Response:

i'm glad you feel that way :)  thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 24

Marcus and Lauren were mean, yes, but they are going to get a huge surprise. Both Bella and Edward will be able to handle the new arrangement really well. Their evil schemes won't work, :)

I'm certain that if someone, somewhere found a way to produce brainmouth filters, he/she would be not only the world's wealthiest person but probably one of the most admired and thanked. Edward really made a huge mistake with his comment. One thing is to acknowledge what happened before you are with someone, another is to be given such details and by that person none the less. However, this came to show them and us even more, how weill they can manage talking with other people at the bar.

Then of course there is the talk Bella skipped. Everyone agrees on it and their futures. BUt putting on a timeline to your dreams and plans can bring some presure along the way. Lets hope not too much.

Finally what an amazing and romantic way to end the chapter, both of them naked with a guitar.... they are lucky... so so lucky.



Author's Response:

haha--i'm glad you have faith in e/b -- i do too :)  but you're right -- putting a timeline on your dreams makes it super stressful...thanks for reviewing, as always!

Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 24

Damn. I see trouble ahead. Jealousy. I hope they can make it through and be a better couple because of it.. and also maybe learn that no gig is worth them pretending to be anything other than what they are. If they let sleazy club owners try to manipulate their relationship then they will be easy prey for record executives who want to market them as single. But they are together and the songs Edward has written are about the ups and downs of relationships..and that hopefully can be marketed as its own niche without screwing with them.



Author's Response:

they're pretty smart people--i think their downfall is because of lack of communication, but i have faith in them.  i think this will make them a stronger, better couple :)  thanks for giving me your thoughts though, i love hearing them!!

Reviewer: Pixiebitch_dk (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 23

So... I finally got caught up on your story.

 

And I really like it.

 

I'm glad you made Jacob out as a jackass... Because I really don't like him in Twi. so to see him being an idiot in your story.. Yeah! (lol)

And I really like seeing Rosalie being sweet. It makes me smile.

Oh! And Carlisle... talk about ooc...!!! But it's just funny.

 

I love how you but all those songs in the story. I'm a big music fan, so to have my ears opened up to some new stuff is GREAT! I'm europia, so I don't know all the music that's going down over there.

I've made a playlist on my playlist(dot)com accout with the music you have dem listening too/playing. And have it playing in the background when I read your story. =)

 

I'm really looking foreward to see what's coming up on the next chapter.

What the deal is whit the new bar manager...

 



Author's Response:

well, thank you!  i'm glad that you like it!  ...my characters are definitely ooc, but i'm excited that you've been enjoying them none the less.  also, that's such an awesome thing that you listen to the music while reading the chapters.  it's kind of baller.  seriously :)

hope you enjoy what's to come, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 23

 Ok, now that I have LMAO over the hot top scene, my pants no longer fit. ;) Very funny. I have no idea what's going on at The Mansion. I look forward to reading.

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 23

Loved it!

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 23

Loved it!

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