Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
Sorry, I've been giving wrong ratings.
Author's Response: que?
Reviewer: melindadasril (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
Lol!!finally edward found his rival!!So entertaining n make me corious!cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
That's my girls!!!! Cullen thought he was gonna get off,not knowing it was actually Bella who got off the ride.Poor wittle Eddie...
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
Bella is onto him. Wonder how long it will be before it all comes to blows.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
wow, amazing update
though i cant believe we had to wait so long for an update, please dont make us wait that long again, this story is awesome and i love how u write bella in this story
Author's Response: I really didn't mean to make you wait this long. RL really kicked my ass. I'm already starting on the next chappie. Promise it'll be up soon :)
Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
I was laughing the whole way through. Well worth the wait.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
girl's good
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
Oh Bella, you naughty, naughty girl you. I don't think I woulda been able to let go of that glorious cock. I woulda been permanately attatched to it. Forever. Therefore, I must sing your praises for your massive amount of restraint. Props to you and the girls. ;)
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
O my goodness, you have to finish this. Please don't keep us waiting long.
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
Oh Bella, you naughty, naughty girl you. I don't think I woulda been able to let go of that glorious cock. I woulda been permanately attatched to it. Forever. Therefore, I must sing your praises for your massive amount of restraint. Props to you and the girls. ;)
Reviewer: MizzVixen (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
I'm glad you're back. This story is one of my favorites and I wanted to see how it would all play out. Hmmm...and it's getting very interesting.
Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Two Hours of Heavenly Hell
Loved this chapter. Please update soon!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Swine Flu Gym
Gaw, I hope she gets that cocky bastard good! Real good. Real good and dirty. Hehe.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Swine Flu Gym
lol
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The New Girl
Edward - someone is a bit full of himself LOL
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gone Was The Gentleman
hoes of passion” LOL
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Swine Flu Gym
I love how you're such an arrogant prick Edward. But by the time Bella Swan is done with you,you're gonna be branded with this: Bella Fucking Swan Owns Your Sorry Ass. Or Property Of Bella. Whichever makes you feel better at night.
Author's Response: ;]
Reviewer: ilovedwardcullenmost (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Swine Flu Gym
yayyy i'm so glad u updated!
Reviewer: Lion_Lamb32 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gone Was The Gentleman
I love this story! Cocky Edward is my favourite, especially when he doesn't get his way (I'm hoping Bella makes him work to be with her). Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Swine Flu Gym
LMAO @ jasper and Edward! No brokeback shit going on rofl!
Man is Edward planning for bella, it'll be fun to see what she does as well.
Reviewer: vampire-romance (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Swine Flu Gym
haha "edward motherfuckin cullen" love it!!
update soon =D
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Swine Flu Gym
game on
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Swine Flu Gym
What a dirty boy! I hope Bella shows him he's met his match. *grin* Go Bella!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Swine Flu Gym
Well, two can play that game, and as sexy as that cocky S.O.B. Edward is, I think Bella will give him a good run for his money!
Thanks so much for updating. I like your story and wondered what was up with it. I was searching on fan fic for it to see if you had updated there...
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