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Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
Wow, that was amazing! So well written and so incredibly hot.
Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Edward's Room
Awesome!
Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
Probably shouldn't have just read this at work.... now I am too ready to get home to my own hot hubby.... You are a wonderful writer. :)
Reviewer: amorvincitomnia (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Edward's Room
So, i am reading this stoiry because I am patiently waiting for the wedding chapter of "The List." This is an excellent story, and I am glad that I bothered. I really appreciate your style.
Thanks for the time you spend on you work. (Still dyi ng to read the wedding chapter of the list, and the BLOOD!)
- AmorVincitOmnia
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
ths was a great story. Absolutely what was missing at the fade to black!
Reviewer: tookool2c (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
More! More! More!.....pretty plz? =)
Reviewer: Tayci (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
Very well done! I enjoyed this. If only we could all have our own Edward to please... lol
Reviewer: foreverswt16 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
Holy fuck! This was so intense, I loved every word of it!
Reviewer: foreverswt16 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Edward's Room
Frken amazing! So erotic and well written. I totally love your work and I want more!
Reviewer: cvap100 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
Great job really. I can not critque well I am a horrible writer. But I just read "The List" straight through. Now I am all excited for the next chapter. You are extremely talented.
Reviewer: ShouldaCouldaWoulda (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
Ummmm, I can't leave a long review because I need to go right now and see what Mr ShouldaCouldaWoulda is doing *wink* *wink*
Great Inspiration........ o.... um......I mean story
:-)
Thanks
Reviewer: TwilightMundi (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
This is great. I love seeing Bella and Edward having great nasty sex.
Reviewer: syrXrys (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
All I can say.. is that THAT was hot. H.O.T. HOT. I need a cool drink and if I smoked I'd light one now. Haha. :) Thank you for writing that.
Reviewer: syrXrys (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Edward's Room
This is great! By far one of the best wedding night fics I've read on this site. I love your attention to detail and how it's all so believeable. I'm sure you know how some stories you read they just don't seem plausible; well this could happen except for the whole vampire part. Right? ;)
Reviewer: inulover07 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
nice.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
One of the best for remembering that he'd struggle for control the whole time. I like, but am distracted by the stories that let him get too human in his control too fast/completely. This was a much better balance. And totally hot to boot!
(my husband may want to thank you later as well!) *wicked giggle*
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Edward's Room
Powerful.
1st night at the house in case he bit her, I'm guessing.
I'm with you, that as a mature reader I was extremely disappointed in the whole "fade to black" routine SM pulled with those oh so anticipated scenes. I get that it was necessary for the age group being targeted and possibly for her own moral comfort zone, but darn! Thank-you for sharing your wonderful musings with us all!!!
Reviewer: BeCullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
These chapters were great. Good job.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Edward's Room
I like that you had them make love on their actual wedding night-like it should be- instead of sitting on a plane, like in the book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: northernlight (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Edward's Room
Well this is a great story, I can't help but be very excited for what might happen on the wedding night of your other story the List.
The only thing I was missing (my face is going very red as I type this) is a little more detail of Edwards Release I was a little confused if he finished. You write it so well in the List I missed your detail. but still loved the story I have to agree SM was missing a little smut.
thank for the story
Reviewer: keekee223 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
Wow. That was pretty intense. I liked it, a lot. Bravo!
Reviewer: neonsparkle (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Edward's Room
Very tastefully done...sexy as hell but not overly graphic. Liked it very much!
Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
wow,it's really amazing.you should be a writer girl.
Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon
wow,it's really amazing.you should be a writer girl.
Reviewer: edwardfan1 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Edward's Room
Awesome as always. Thanks
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