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Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

It's sort of like a hill, instead of a cliffie..

Author's Response:

A hill is much better than a cliffie...right?

Thanks, SarahBella...for reading and the lovely stars...


Reviewer: clobub (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

oh my good lord she had edward sign marriage papers?! oh my lord!!

i love that the stalker is lauren - fantastic choice! and awesome pov!!

cant wait to read on :-)


Author's Response:

Ah, poor Edward!  He really should LOOK at what he's signing...

Thanks...glad that you like Lauren as the stalker....

Ah, and you still have a NEXT or two to read!


Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

Loved it!!! I haven't been able to read in awhile so I had a few chapters to read at once. Anyways, this was as wonderful as the rest of your story. I love how Edward's meeting with the Denali clan went down. Also, I can not wait to until Bella makes Edward a vampire!

Author's Response:

Oh, ForbiddenFyre, I'm so happy that you loved it!  Oh...and getting to read more than one at a time is always fun, isn't it?

So, you think that Bella will change him?  She's not going to dig her heels in and whine:  NO!  ?????

We'll see.... ;)  ;D

Thanks for the review AND the stars!!!


Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

Loving your story so far.  I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.

Author's Response:

Thanks, kalo797!  I'm happy that you found us here....Look at all those NEXT buttons you get to click!

Hope that you enjoy the rest...

Thanks for the stars!


Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

I really enjoyed this.  C=  I like the concept of Bella being the vamp instead, and I love the idea of their bodyguard service (though, really - how'd I know it'd end up with Lauren being the stalker?  xD).  And speaking of Lauren: I love that you have Mike and Jess standing as Edward's old school friends; such a refreshing change from the Vile Mike Newton and Uberbitch Jessica Stanley.  But I gotta say: one of my favorite bits?  Bella's mindset on changing Edward.  That always bugged me in the books, that he was so stubborn about that; kudos for making Bella respect that it's Edward's choice, and if he wants to give her that forever as much as she wants it than so be it.

I was a little put off by Tanya, but that's only because I have Tanya issues anyway.  (I get that it's the norm to make her uberslut, but it does piss me off a little when authors do that.  Yes, she was attracted to him in the books.  Yes, she did make pushy advances.  But she never came off as Bitchy Edwardizing Whore, and that's sadly the stereotype she's given in so many fics.  So yeah...your Tanya bugs me a bit, but that's because Tanya's character as generally dealt with by fans/ficcers bugs me a lot.)

And random, but I do gotta admit that the fic - especially the "Let's go to Colorado!" bits - had me singing John Denver.  =D  ("In the dawn I hear him hummin' some old song he wrote of love in Boulder Canyon...")  Oh - and your hubs's comment about Jacob the Rug?  Cracked me the hell up - nice one!

All in all, very enjoyable fic.  Nice twist you've got here.

Author's Response:

WOW!!! Veritas have totally blown me away with your review...Yes, Bella's mindset is a bit different.  Why not let him make up his mind?  I'd hate all my decisions to be made for me.  I have three daughters and I'd hate to have their decisions made for them too, so that's where I was coming from for this.

Yes, Tanya...when her name is mentioned in a story, it tends to send a shiver down the reader's spine.  Same with James...and in some cases, Jacob.  Got to have the *bad guy*...You should read gleena's THE COLD WAR...her Tanya is different....and I'm actually LIKING!

John Denver is actually on my playlist...and in my van...and if I had an mp3 player it would be there as well.  I got to see him in concert three Alaska...loved that guy...

So, you liked my hubby's story idea?  Entropic Kitten wrote one at ffn....The Fur Rug....I laughed and was glad that I wasn't drinking anything over my computer at the time...!!!

Thanks so much for your review and the really made me smile today!


Reviewer: clobub (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

lovin the story so far - im so excited to keep reading!!

i wonder if edward would have been nicer to bella in the beginning of the twilight book if he had de-sensitized himself. hmm . . . something to consider!

thank you and will try and review as often as i can!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, clobub! Hope that you enjoy clicking all those NEXT buttons!


Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

I love this chapter Kathie! Edward's reaction to Tanya was great! I love that he felt the need to stand up for Bella when Tanya made the comment about her not doing a good job of protecting him and the "our own home" part. That makes my heart very happy!

Eleazar bringing up Edward's gift was very cool! I loved it! I can't wait to find out how Edward responds to the talks about the pros and cons of vampire life.

Author's Response:

Hi Val!  Yes, he stood up...could have lost his head...and it wouldn't knit back on!  LOL But he's a nice guy and really had to do that for his girl...

Coming soon...the pros and cons!

Thanks for the lovely stars too...


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

I think Edward's going to choose to be Changed, of course - since he's almost certainly going to realise with or without the shield, what Bella would do once he passed on. Letting her end her existence is something he'd go to any length to prevent.

It was kind of funny to see Bella growling at Tanya, and Edward showing his fire :)

Author's Response:

So you think he'll choose to be changed?  But would they change him *in cold blood*?  Or wait until an asteroid (or van) hits him?

Ah, questions.... ;)

I rather like Bella GROWLING... ;D

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

fun chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks, smisa...there more fun in the next one!


Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

loooved this chapter. The interaction between the Denali Coven and Edward and  Bella was great ;-) Love that you keep Kate and Garret (I heart Garret).

Great work on this chapter can't wait for more. Will Edward propose while he'S human or as a vampire?

Author's Response:

You heart Garrett too?  There was something about the boy in BD that I liked very much...

So you think that Edward is going to propose? a human or a vamp?  Ah, that is a good question!

Thanks, ON, for reading, reviewing and the stars!


Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

Me thinks he may do a Bella :) lol - loving it  still :) and anyhoo Alice saw it so it is right for it too happen :D another great work of art from you :D Ten stars!


Author's Response:

Oh, what lovely words! Thanks so much, NIAIS!

Alice's visions are based on we will have to see what DECISIONS are made in the future... ;D

Thanks for the stars too!


Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

awww poor you! my friend who don't like/understand twilight are the same **sigh**

Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

I love this story!  The pure love between Bella and Edward is so beautiful!  Please post more soon!

Author's Response:

Welcome Lightgirl!  I'm so happy that you are enjoying this!

The next chapter is in the's called OPTIONS...and starts with Alice's POV...

Hope you like it!


Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

I enjoyed reading this chapter. I am always curious about the Denali coven/group. It would be cool to meet Garrett and see him interact with Tanya. Just a thought. 

Author's Response:

There will be some mention of Garrett in the next chapter...Kate seems to be pretty possessive!

The Cold War, by gleena, has a lot of TANYA in it...and Kate and Garrett might want to check that one out...

Thanks for reading, Emma Austin!


Reviewer: julnsmokey (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

I love this chapter!

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

yes, i wonder. oh & when he turns vampire can there be revenge on slutsicle the ice queen of hookers? hehe thanks.

~ B

Author's Response:

LOL...ah, another TANYA hater?  There seem to be quite a few of us...

She will be in the next chapter, and I think you might enjoy it!


Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

Really good chapter! Im glad tanya didn't get her grubby hands on him. I like that Bella wants to give Edward the choice.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, branlc!  Ugh, I'm glad that Tanya didn't get him either...he was pretty good at deflecting her...and then Bella helped...otherwise she would have had to de-germ him!

Yes, a choice for Edward...I wonder what he'd choose?


Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

What  good chapter! Way to stick up to tanya, YA! ok, just want to aplogize in advance; I will be flying out to L.A on saturday t be at Michael's private funeral on suday, and i will probably be returnin late monday.... So if any chapters come out between those dys, SORRY i wont review unti i get back, BUT I WILL REVIEW! pinky promisE! Another great chapter!!! Claps for you

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review mgb...He really did need to stand up for Bella...good thing that Tanya was surprised...and didn't knock his head off!

Travel safe...


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~


Ok --- I am calming myself down a little. I would like to place my request for the number two choice, Love Bella after being changed into a vampire for the rest of eternity... cause yeah. Edward just being non-vampy and the whole "when you die I die" thing is just too gosh darn depressing. = )

Anywhoo - goes without saying how I love this story --- fantastic as always, and I am always so excited to see an update! = )

Author's Response:

LOL!  Excellent choice...

Yes, I'm not into the whole *die when you die* thing...

Remember?  I'm all about the HEA...eventually! ;)

I've got the next chapter in the line-up:  Options!

Thanks for reading and the lovely stars, Eidelweiss!


Reviewer: jasonandbrandy1999 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

This was great. Thank you for not letting things get carried away with Tanya. I cannot wait for more.

Author's Response:

You are very welcome...I can't stand her either!!!

More *Fun with Tanya* in the next chapter...and it is FUN...

Thanks for reading and for the lovely stars, Brandy!


Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

Edward should definitely go for love Bella for eternity as vampire! 

And good for him on resisting Tanya!  Not an easy feat, even with Bella's shield, I'm sure!

I'm also really enjoying the realization of Edward's potential gift.  That's a great addition to the plot! 

Great work, Kathie!!

Author's Response:

Yeah!  Good choice!  Also, resisting Tanya is a good thing...

Glad you like his potential gift...I do too!  We need a good mind reader... ;)

Hope you had a great vacation!


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

Thanks for this fun chapter....and PLEASE continue to keep Tanya away from Edward!

Can't wait for HOT, vampire Edward!

Author's Response: think that Edward would be a HOT vamp?  You might just be right...

More fun with Tanya coming up... MWAHAHAHA!

Thanks, sherylb!


Reviewer: alicia (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

that painting kind of looks like the chick who plays victoria in the movies

Author's Response:

That's what my girls said!  BUT when I did my google search it was the only one that I could find...Check out the reviews for this chapter of my readers found another one from the same time period...and if I had found THAT one, I would have used it...although the LOOK on this girl's face fit my story much better....

Thanks for reading, Alicia...


Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Interesting twist with Tanya. Fan fiction always makes her a villain.

Author's Response:

Thank you, dh_director....for the review AND the stars...

Go read:  The Cold Wars, by gleena....there's a pretty nice Tanya in that one!


Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Very good, I love this story!

I hope Rosalie kills Tanya this time...

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, SarahBella!  Rosalie may just have to do that!

I'm glad that you are still loving it...

The next chapter is in the lineup...hopefully it will be up soon!


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