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Reviewer: dazzeled (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

ok i know that out of all the things i could say about the story this is the weirdest but its a pet peeve of mine so sorry but i just have to say this bears DO NOT HIBERNATE!!! they CANT they  are too big. ok im done with my hibernaiton rant but besides that great story although i do wish that tanya had made a bit more of an effort with edward and had partially suceeded



Author's Response:

You are right, they don't hibernate fully...but they do sleep for very long, extended amounts of time in the dead of winter.  They finally start moving around more when spring, and the food they need, starts to stir...

Some guy recently snuck into a *hibernating* bear's den...and the thing smacked him pretty good!  I guess he did that because the fact that they aren't actually hibernating isn't common knowledge...

Sorry that I didn't let Edward get groped by Tanya...that sounds like a premise for a story...I'll read it if YOU write it... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Oh no!  Brutal! 

 

I like!

 

Yeah, died when I saw Mick St. John.  VERY nice touch.



Author's Response:

NOW aren't you REALLY glad you got to click...NEXT?

Oh!  Check out the reviews for this chapter...I put a lovely shot of Mick in there....sigh...he's SO gorgeous...and has a new show coming on in the fall....No, I'm NOT his press agent....LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

I just started this story, so I have some catching up to do ... And maybe you'll answer this later on, but I'm curious: How did Bella turn?  It was after Esme turned, so she didn't just replace Edward as Carlisle's companion.  It's all fascinating to me.

I love this take on the story!  I can't wait to find out where it goes from here :-)



Author's Response:

Welcome, jfk06...Yes, the story of Bella's change will comes in one of the next chapters...aren't you glad you can click NEXT so many times? ;)

Thanks so much for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

So did you do research on psychopaths? :) 

 

Jasper is a dear; I've always rather liked him.  Nice interrogation.  Lauren certainly seemed to think so.



Author's Response:

LOL....no, I just let my INNER NUT CASE out....which rather scares my family....MWAHAHAHA....

;)

I do love Jasper....and, as one reviewer said...he could interrogate me anytime.... :D

I can't thank you enough for ALL your lovely reviews...

Kathie

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Lauren!  Why didn't I think of that? *slapping self on jaw*

 

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Charming chapter.  The bodyguard/client relationship is always a good one. *grin*

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

*shrieks at volumes unknown to fangirl joy*

HOLY CRAP!

YAY!!!

 



Author's Response:

So?  Good?  LOL....

What ELSE could he have chosen?

But when...hmmmm.....when?

My hubby said that when the asteroid hits....sigh...

Kathie

Reviewer: Thank God For Deliverance (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

dang!this is great!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

That's a great pen-name, Thank God for Deliverance!

Kathie

Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

omg you cant leave it there i want more more more i tell you hahaha  i am so addicted to this story. i think this is because it is so different from  everyone elses well done keep up the good work. cant wait for the nest instalment xx



Author's Response:

I'll be getting the next chapter in the line-up today...Makes me happy to hear how much you are enjoying it.

I appreciate your kind words...thanks so much!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

akkkkkkkkkkk Cliffhanger NO!

Wow. What a great chapter. I loved all of the perspectives, it was really interesting to read from Alice's POV and Emmett's  --- I suprised myself by really enjoying Rosalies' perspective the most. =-)

It goes without saying that I cannot wait for the next chapter... I am an E/B fan but even better is the balance of human/vampire and then vampire/vampire. Even if it doesn't happen for another 20 chapters, I like the promise of something happening. I hope Bella doesn't go so emo like Edward about changing, but it appears from your Bella-perspective that she would be ok with it.



Author's Response:

So, not so much a Rosalie fan?  I'm glad that you enjoyed her anyway...

I'm actually working on chapter 36 right now...I was stuck, but FINALLY it is flowing a bit better....Jacob makes an appearance... ;)

I think this Bella isn't quite so DARK as SM's Edward....but she is going to give HIM the choice...and she's going to lay it all out there....so that he can make that INFORMED decision...then we'll see just how far he is willing to go...

I have faith... ;)

Thanks so much, Eidelweiss!

Kathie

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

this is really getting interesting.



Author's Response:

Thanks, smisa!

More to come...

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Another AMAZING chapter!



Author's Response:

Ahhhh....thank you twilightfan1969!

Kathie

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

more Edward/Bella stuff!!!!! PLLLLLLSSSSSSSSS!

~ B



Author's Response:

More to come, Blondie!!!  Soon....

Kathie

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Oh she is extremely creepy.  And she has an enabler.  EW.  I like.



Author's Response:

LOl....yes, a tad on the CREEPY side...

And it really is a lot of FUN to hate her, isn't it?

Thanks for reading AND reviewing!

Look how many more NEXT buttons you have!

Kathie

Reviewer: jasonandbrandy1999 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

awesome. Thanks for continuing to update.

Author's Response:

You are very welcome, Brandy!  I'm working on chapter 36 now...and will get the next chapter in the lineup today...

Kathie

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Lovely.  I like the family and thier caring attitudes to each other.  And, Alice reaction to Tanya comment about Jasper was dangerous and funny.

Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Queendel!  I did love Alice launching herself at Tanya...that could have been ugly if Emmett hadn't been so quick!

I'll be getting the next chapter into the line-up this afternoon...so hopefully up soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

Just started reading this today and am enjoying the story hugely.  

Oh, it's FUN to write for bad guys. Enjoy it... lol  Even if it makes you nuts. :D

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Alice thinking about her Sweet Soldier put such a HUGE grin on my face!

I totally loved Rosalie's POV! Okay, I want to rip off at least one of Tanya's arms. She just doesn't stop! Yes, I have to agree with her that Jasper is hot, but still! She's evil! Rosalie's last line in her POV was perfect!

So, Alice's visions about Edward are getting more frequent and clearer! Awesome! Alice's description of Bella and Edward together was so sweet! I liked having someone else's POV about that!

I loved Emmett's POV! You have a real talent for getting into each of these characters! Emmett always makes me laugh! I just love him!

Edward calling Aro "this Aro guy" cracked me up! Emmett's still wanting a cape. lol! I just loved it when Carlisle called Edward "Son"! YAY! Edward wants to be a vampire!

This whole chapter was just amazing Kathie! I loved every word!

Val



Author's Response:

Ah, you and Jasper...get over it girl!  He's MINE....oh...wait...guess not!  LOL

Our Pixie is getting better glimpses into Edward's future...I think that you will like what she sees... ;)

*This Aro Guy*...I wonder if that would make a good story?  Hmmmm....I'll have to think about that...

Thank you, Val...your words are precious to me...Mwah!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow!!!! That was amazing! You did a wonderful job on this chapter and with all the different POV's too! Anyways, loved it and I really hope that the verdict is that they will change Edward and the Volturi won't have to be involved! But, doesn't matter. Even if Edward never becomes a vampire, and the Volturi all, this will still be my favorite story and one of the best written stories that I have ever read.

Author's Response:

Thanks, ForbiddenFyre!  I'm glad that you could tell who was who...

I appreciate your words so much...

Ah, the Volturi...those guys are just nasty...."Just who is this Aro guy?"  I'm sure that Aro would like to take him out just for that...LOLOL

I'm so happy that you are still enjoying it...the next chapter will be up soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Cool!!!! I can't wait for Edward to be a vampire!!!!!! At least he doesn't have family he'll be leaving behind..........



Author's Response:

Yep, only Mike, Jessica...and the baby....

Now we have to see WHEN....

Thanks for reading, sherylb!

Kathie

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

thats sweet:) Keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thanks, JuliannaOphelia!

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Wow! Edward doesn't mess around does he? Thank you for the quick update I was waiting for this. 



Author's Response:

Nope...he really wants to know all about the options, the pros and the cons...good for him!

Thanks so much for reading...the next one is in the line-up...

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Amazing chapter, Kathie!

I love the interaction between Emmett, Edward and Bella!  Very playful and full of affection.

Tanya...ugh, what a piece of work!  So glad that Kate told her off, she deserved it!  Though she did show some remorse...

Looks like Edward has decided to become a vampire!  Whoo hoo!  I'm all for it!

And congratulations on the nominations!  No one deserves it more than you!  I will be voting for sure!

 



Author's Response:

Hey! Welcome back!  I'm glad you like the playful moments...they've had quite a bit of angst...time for some fun!

I think he's made a GOOD choice!

Ah, thanks...I appreciate the nominations very much!

Kathie

Reviewer: clobub (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

can i just say love that you have added mick st john in - i was gutted when they canx moonlight so thank you for bringing him back for a cameo

and seriously bella better kick lorenas butt!!

xxclobubxx

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

awwww!!!!!!!!! im pretty sure that is all i say when reviewing on here. lmao



Author's Response:

I'm glad the chapters make you feel that way...awwwww is a good response!

Kathie

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