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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: clobub (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

what a total cliffy!!!

do bella and edward get together before he is turned??

does jacob come into it?? maybe as edwards friend who then hates bella for taking him away?

as always a great story and will be voting for you when polling is open!!

(and at last im caught up :-D)


Author's Response:

Answers will be forthcoming! 

Jacob does show up at some point (Chapter 35 I think?)...I don't think that Edward will consider him to be a friend...LOL

Thanks so much for reading and your enthusiasm, clobub!


Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

I loved this chapter. Great work on it. It's great that Edward knows everything ( or at least nearly everything) now. If Edward wants to be changed (which I think he does) I wonder how much of a tantrum Bella will throw. Will she make a big fuss about it like Edward did in the original story line?

Great work. Looking forward to the next chapter. Love tthat you update so regularly.

Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you loved it!!!  Do you think that this Bella seems like the tantrum sort?  Uh oh...superstrong woman having a hissy fit....Hmmm...actually that might be fun!

Thanks so much for your support! The next chapter is already in the line-up...coming soon!


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

so much ground covered... looks like we're laying the groundwork for problems with the Volturi from this point onwards.

I do hope that Bella is going to be the one that Changes Edward when the time comes, and not anyone else, regardless of good or bad alignment, I just like it for sentimental reasons :)

Author's Response:

Let's see, Bella or Carlisle?  Hmmmm....Carlisle doesn't have that singer thing going on...decisions, decisions!

Thanks for reading, Daylen!


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Oooh, do the Volturi know about Alice?  I'm guessing not... especially if they don't know about Bella.  Things could go south quickly for the Cullens if they find out about any of them.  If Edward really has decided to turn, I wonder how he's going to explain to the Newton's what's happening...  Heh, I just had an image of the Cullens wearing those masks they have in the movie Mission Impossible so they can pretend to age ;-)  *Julie's imagination runs wild*

And it was very easy to tell who was who.  You did a great job! I love multi-view chapters :-)  It's so fun to hear everyone's thoughts!

So, I've caught up now.  No more nexts!  *sigh*  What am I going to do with the rest of my evening??

Thank you again for the wonderful story!  I can't wait to read more chapters :-)

Author's Response:

Yes, sad to come to the end of those NEXT buttons! ;)

The Volturi don't know about Alice...Bella or this point in time...

I'm glad my differing POV were easy to recognize...

THANK YOU for all of your lovely reviews!


Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Bella is some hot chic as a bodyguard huh?

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Yay!!!!  Good chapter and I got who each of the different POV were from. I loved that Alice tried to attack tayna.

Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the romps through those assorted POV...they were so much fun to write!

Yes, little Alice...and Tanya...she's small...but very FIESTY!


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

HAHAHA, your family is awesome ;-) 

I'm so glad I was able to help with your writer's block!  I really love this story and am looking forward to more chapters!! :-D  All the way up to 36??  Craziness.  If you ever get stuck, I'm happy to send some excitement your way ;-)

... WOLVES?!  That's going to be amazing!  I can't wait!

Ooh, Tanya.  Up to no good, is she?  *glares at Tanya* Stay away from Bella's Edward!  Not yours :-P

Author's Response:

I passed your comments on to my family...they all took a bow...LOL

Yes, some point!

Tanya...she really was a bad girl....

Thanks, so much, for reading and your support, jfk06!


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Mm, everything would be better with Edward around!

This story is in such a happy place -- I love it!  Only 3 more to go until I'm all caught up.  *sigh*.

BTW, since we've been reviewing back & forth all day: Hi, I'm Julie! :-)

Author's Response:

Waving...HI Julie!  Ihave to say, your reviews have helped me with a case of writer's block...seeing your enthusiasm has helped me tremendously.  I have just finished (drum roll please) Chapter 36!!!!  Hurray!!!! killed me too... ;)  Writing WOLVES was hard!  LOL


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

Wow, what a beautiful mansion!

I must admit, I'm a little nervous... Edward is going to find out who Bella really is!  And he hasn't had Jacob to clue him in beforehand.  Ooooh, boy.  Okay, I'm excited too :-)  Yay!

I don't think I've mentioned it yet, but in case it wasn't obvious, I'm loving this story!  It's incredibly well written and thought out.  I'm really impressed :-)

Author's Response:

Isn't it pretty?  I'd love to wander around in there....and I bet the view is fantastic!  Of course, it would be nicer with Edward there... ;)

Thank you so much, jfk06...I'm so happy that you are enjoying this so a writer, that tickles me a LOT!


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~


That was such a sweet chapter :-)  Thank you!

Author's Response:

Whew!  You are welcome...


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

OH. MY. GOD.   His hand!!

Author's Response:

I'm ducking here....KEEP READING!!!



Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

I may be against scapegoating Tanya, but I did laugh my ass off at Alice's "NOT MY MAN, BITCH!" moment.  xD  Your Tanya really is a little trouble maker, isn't she?  xD  (Loved the Rose POV, too; nice grip on her.)  Also love Alice's note on how she had seen Edward forcing away Tanya's gift before Bella could shield him; wonder if she's gonna bring that up to Carlisle or Bella?  (I'm sure Bella'd love to hear that one.  C; )  Also love how Bella's still worrying over him, when it's been pretty obvious his choice has been made.  I love your Human!Wardo; he' such a sweetie.  <3

Author's Response:

Glad you found the IRATE PIXIE to be worth a laugh... ;) by Gleena has a pretty nice does:  the second section of this story, LOST 2...has a Tanya that I came to enjoy very much...not to mention MICHAEL...

Thanks for reviewing, reading and those lovely stars, Veritas Found!



Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~


Author's Response:

Oh my!  That's a great review...sums it up nicely actually...


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

I'd say Mama M is even more so.  Holy crap, she's crazy!

And teasing us with an *almost* ExB kiss!  So mean :-/  Guess I'll just have to click next ... a real kiss can't be that far away!! ;-)

Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Hmm, is the missing scent Mama?

Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Yay!  Bella's changing story!  It may not have been crucial to the story, but it was wonderful icing :-)  Thank you.

Author's Response:

You are very welcome...I saw it and had to add it...

I'm loving your reviews!  Thank you!


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Ooh, his parents had a painting of her!  That's just hysterical/awesome.  I can't wait to see how this turns out. *goes to click next*


Author's Response:

I like thinking about his parents seeing Bella...she sat with them in their breakfast room on a daily basis...I like that!


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Wow, she has a crazy mama!  Either that .. or this is all turning very 'Fight Club' ;-)  I wonder if Lauren ever sleeps..


And yes, having all those 'nexts' is awesome! :-D  I'm going to click it right now ;-)

Author's Response:

Yes, the two of them really ARE nuts...ugh...but so much fun to write...MWAHAHAHA!



Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

I love the multiple pov's in this chapter...and you are just a little too good at these closing lines! 

Author's Response:

I'm so happy that my random POV worked...whew!

I really try to come up with GOOD closing lines... ;D  they are better than BAD ones.... ;)

Thanks, wantmoretwilightnow! For reading, the review AND the lovely stars!


Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Ah, every young man's dream: a gorgeous woman says, "...I want to try something..."


Then he has to go and blow it:

"Well, if I can’t have you right now…how about those pancakes you mentioned?”


Sorry. That KILLED me.  Of course, if he wants them both with whipped cream and a fruit topping, that'd be good...





Author's Response:

I know!  Pancakes or Bella...hmmmm....but he does have those HUMAN moments! to keep his strength up!  Fo later....LOL


Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Nice Q&A! 

What about venom being, like, painful?  Not just paralyzing?

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

My son (he's fifteen) reads my fanfics, too, and generally editorializes.  Aren't kids just so much fun?

Nice chapter!  Edward is certainly very calm about all of this.  Worldly fellow, fluent in Italian?  Very nice.

Author's Response:

Ah, I missed this review the first time through! Sorry!

Yes, a bit worldly with his fluent Italian!  At least about music...LOL

Does your son read what YOU write, or what YOU read?


Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

I love the Telluride house!  Stunning! 

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

...bourbon that I had drunk earlier decided to try and make an appearance.

Heh. Shouldn't that be REappearance? ;-)



Reviewer: dazzeled (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

ok i know that out of all the things i could say about the story this is the weirdest but its a pet peeve of mine so sorry but i just have to say this bears DO NOT HIBERNATE!!! they CANT they  are too big. ok im done with my hibernaiton rant but besides that great story although i do wish that tanya had made a bit more of an effort with edward and had partially suceeded

Author's Response:

You are right, they don't hibernate fully...but they do sleep for very long, extended amounts of time in the dead of winter.  They finally start moving around more when spring, and the food they need, starts to stir...

Some guy recently snuck into a *hibernating* bear's den...and the thing smacked him pretty good!  I guess he did that because the fact that they aren't actually hibernating isn't common knowledge...

Sorry that I didn't let Edward get groped by Tanya...that sounds like a premise for a story...I'll read it if YOU write it... ;)


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