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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: EmmettCullenLover (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

wow this story is awesome, but that girl is severely messed up in the head... poor edward I'd be scared to If I were him... so far its an awesome story and I'm sure the rest will be too... great job..

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, EmmettCullenLover!  Emmett gets to speak a few words in this might enjoy that!

Thanks for the stars!


Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I love the kissing. Very hot. Put some more please!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  There will be more kissing...I promise!

Thanks, so much, Lespino1 for reading and rating my story!


Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

Great stuff; I only wish this story wasn't only PG-13!  Can't wait to see how Edward decides...

Author's Response:

LOL...I just finished a higher rated oneshot...going to post it soon...but my girls keep threatening me with the amount of kissing that is already in this one...LOL

Yes, what will Edward decide?  I have my theories... ;)

Thanks, so much, Terenthia, for reading and rating!


Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

Aw, someone like Edward should have heaps of friends!  :)

What a great kiss!  Whew, very nice indeed!  I want to go find myself a vampire...or rather somehow turn my husband into one!  Ha ha! 

I'm happy to see that Edward is really moving towards becoming a vampire and that Bella isn't as angsty as Book Edward was about it! 

Lovely chapter, Kathie!  I look forward to the next one.


Author's Response:

Yes, he should! We'll be his friends, okay?

I'm so happy that you liked the kiss...much easier to write than THAT lemon!  If you figure out how to make your own Vampire Edward, do let me in on the secret!

Thanks, sweets!  I appreciate your support so very much!


Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

rent the house? I want to move indefinitely to that house! Just amazing...

does it come with an Edward??

Anyway, hope we get EPOV since I had no idea what is coming through his mind right now... what does he thing Bella is and what has he decided to do when he knows the truth...

You know something funny... I always knew the painting would be the starting point for the difficult conversation they are about to have, since when you first introduced the paiting to the story... Nice!

Author's Response:

have I told you yet how much I'm LOVING your reviews?  Well, hear me now!  I love 'em!

Yes, that house!  Wow!  Wouldn't it just be so much fun to hang out there for a week or so?  Add in an Edward and I think it would be worth the rent!

There will be EPOV...soon!

Ah, that's coming full circle!


Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

OK, it is getting better but you know my rule, no exchange of body fluids, no kiss!But yeah, definitely more progress!

I love the idea that they are going to Colorado together so they can get to know each other.

Author's Response:

So...I need to add SPIT to their it!



Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Amazing story! I love it! I'm addicted! Update soon, please! i beg of you!

Author's Response:

Thanks, again!

The next chapter is already in the should be up soon!


Author's Response:

Thanks, again!

The next chapter is already in the should be up soon!


Author's Response:

Thanks, again!

The next chapter is already in the should be up soon!


Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

I am not counting this kiss Katie. Unless there is some serious exchange of body fluids I am NOT counting as a kiss! Let's call it progress. Yes. There was progress...

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

I hope this doesn't offend you but I think Bella should retire from the protection business. I mean, two stupid humans were able to get to Edward under her nose like that! Imagine what a vampire would have done! She is right for being guilty. She has failed Edward. Yeah yeah, she has saved him from burning to the bones but should he had been in that house in the first place? I'd say no.

Call me harsh but the truth is there are situations that are not under our control and sometimes there is nothing we could have done to prevent bad things to happens. That was absolutely NOT the case when it comes to Edward's kidnapping. There were a track load of shit Bella and her team could have done to prevent this shit to happen.

Author's Response:

Your review didn't offend me...made me chuckle though...

You are right...they should have done something ELSE...BUT then where would my story have been?  Short and boring... ;)

Of course, we knew all the facts about the kidnappers...sometimes there has to be a few *dumb* that the story could unfold...

Forgive me?


Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

WHERE THE HELL IS BELLA?? Some bodyguard she is huh!! Poor Edward!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

As a mother, and I am sure you are a great mother, you need to have a serious talk with your daughter... I am sure she is young but seriously, Jacob's team?

I am always shocked to hear that there is even such thing as Team Jacob! How this is even possible, for the life of me, I won't ever be able to comprehend.

Now, back to the drama... Bella and her team, very disappointing..

she should have asked someone to keep an eye on Edward as soon as she realised that there were two of them. Instead she decided to interrogate LM aka the crazy b****! No way!

Anyway, now poor Edward is bleeding. That can't be good!

Thank God next chapter is already here! I'd die if I had to wait weeks for the outcome! ;-)

Author's Response:

I know! Team Jacob? What are they thinking?  Well, actually they are TEAM SETH...and THAT I can live with...LOL

Ah yes, Edward bleeding...weren't you glad that you got to click NEXT?

Thanks so much, Moni...your reviews really did make my day!


Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~


Gosh! Aren't they nuts?? I think only vampires would be able to deal with them...

Now, down to the good stuff! Bring it on!


Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

that was sweet.. poor Eddie, having bad dreams! And yes, I thought crazy LM had managed to go through with her plan.

Now, I think I know who MAMA is!! But I will keep it to myself. If am right Edward is in greater danger than we know cause MAMA is truly hardcore.

I had a hint last chapter with Alice's vision of red...

Am I going in the right direction here??




Author's Response:

Nope...I'm thinking you thought it was going to be some RED head... ;)

But now you know!

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

*lol* Your hubby is so supportive... I think mine will just roll his eyes. :D It's a pretty funny chapter - Emmett is hilarious, getting smacked upside the head by all the girls. I think he has a head smacking fetish. Edward is taking everything well, and I love seeing him in canon Bella's role finding out about vampires and watching it from his perspective. A very sweet chapter.

Author's Response:

Well, when it came to help with a KISS, he WAS pretty helpful...but if he mentions asteroids popping any vamps on the head AGAIN, I'm smacking him!

I'm glad that you are enjoying my twist...Edward seems pretty calm about the whole thing...much like Bella was!

Thanks for your support, HeavenDust!


Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

First off, isn't Edward a cutie trying to protect the hardcore vampires?? If he only new what littlr Alice is capable of doing... haha

What is missing from the scent? Maybe she has been wearing the same panties for the past 2 weeks... well, removing them would change the scent a lot!



Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

Good chapter!  Keep going!

Author's Response:

Thanks, OzNimbus...the next chapter should be up soon, it's already in the line-up!


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

hehe Edward's enjoying himself entirely too much :)

His abilities being so strong already would suggest that his post-Change power will be quite a bit more impressive (and consuming) than "canon" - it'll be interesting to see if he can even do things like place suggestions into people's minds, perhaps? That could be very useful with regards to derailing any humans who start to notice the ever-frozen Cullens :)

Author's Response:

LOL...Edward was having quite a bit of fun here...

Hmmm...that's an interesting suggestion...we'll see!

Thanks for your support Daylen!


Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

hummmmmmmmmm something is starting to happen between these two. And if Bella is weird so is Edward sniffing her!! Haha

But now, who can blame Bella? Shirtless Edward sleeping a few doors from you? I am just glad she is following her instincts...

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

I loved this chapter. I liked the list of good things about being a vampire. Looking to the bad things list and what Edward's reaction to it will be. And Bella's reaction to Edward's reactions ;-)

Great chap. Looking forward to the next one.

P.S.: Thanks for updating so often.

Author's Response:

Makes me happy to hear that!  I rather like the list of *cons*...which should be up very soon!

And you are more than welcome on my updating schedule...

Thanks for your support, ON!


Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

Lol - YAY hubby!! lol one problem - Wo was narrating :P hee he - loved this chapter lol - but careful Edward - what goes up must come down (ooo-er!!) lol Ten Stars :)


[not really reviewing - writing like you told me to! - this is a figment of your imagination!)

Author's Response: are funny! Are you WRITING?


Reviewer: Besotted (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~


Great job! I am enjoying this story immensely! Thanks for writing!


Author's Response:

Thank you Besotted!  I appreciate that!


Reviewer: Thank God For Deliverance (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:20 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Nah, I don't need the astriods. It must be nice to have someone give you ideas... even if they are a little crazy. lol.

Author's Response:

I didn't think so TODAY when hubby was giving me some real CLUNKERS...LOL...sigh, he once again mentioned asteroids!



Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

Great chapter! That list was perfect = )

Can't wait to read the next one with the negatives and his reactions to them.

Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Ah, the drawbacks are coming...they are in the line-up right now!

I hope you enjoy them too...


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

Awesome chapter!!!!So glad the "cousins" are gone.  The kiss is great!

Author's Response:

Oh, me too!  They came, they figured out his gift...then they HAD to leave...LOL



Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

what, no wolfskin rug!  LOLOL!!  great chapter.

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