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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: Mollieeee (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Heyy. Ooooh Only Just Finished Chapter Six and I Cant Wait To Read The Rest. :D

I Think I Have A Hunch On Who It May Be Just Through The Initials and The Blonde Hair. I Think Its Described As Corn Something In Twilight.

But I Think Its Lauren Mallory, May Be Wrong.


Author's Response:

You were right!


Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Great chapter!!! Love the ring! Very excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I think we all need one of those rings...I may ask for it for Christmas...I really should have looked at the price!

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing, branlc!


Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

*melts* Awwwwww.... it's an edgy sort of romance in this chapter... they couldn't take their own sweet time about this because of the damn nomads. But I can't still help but feel thrilled! Alrighty... thank you for this update!

Author's Response:

Yes, things are making them move forward quite rapidly...but I think they are ready for at least SOME of the steps...

You are very welcome for the update...and I'll be getting the next chapter tonight...and hopefully it will be posted quickly...


Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Exciting update. Looking forward to Edward and Bella's wedding, Edward's change and awakening, and the fight with the nomads.

Update very soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you,Queendel!  Yes, lots happening soon...the wedding colors are going to be Dark Green and Gold...for Edward's later...

Thanks for the stars too!


Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What the f¨¨¨¨¨¨¨ck! She's smashing his precious hands?

Sweet jezus, bella needs to come ASAP.

Author's Response:

Oh my!  Aren't you so glad that you got to click NEXT, and not have to wait!  I think you'll be pleased with the next chapter!  At least I HOPE you are!  Keep reading!


Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

So I'm guessing the difference in scent is the mother/daughter's scent...I am anxious to find out though! Can't stop reading haha.

Greets from belgium

Author's Response:

You were a very good guesser!

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Awww Yeah I want one too! It is absolutly beautiful! Loveing the story XD Oh I voted for you! XD

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading, reviewing...and VOTING!

We all need one of those rings....seriously!


Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

One of my favorite chapters!  And that is a beautiful ring!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, LJ....sigh...I do love that ring too!

I think that we all need one...but I keep thinking:  Gosh, that would be so many bales of hay and bags of horse feed...LOL

I still want it though....LOL


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

haha now that's a game of CTF that I'd like to have played in too :)

Sneaky Esme!!

Of course, now we have nomads on the way, a wedding on a day's notice, and Edward "dying"... drama-a-plenty to come :)

Author's Response:

Esme...yep, it's the quiet ones!

Yes, still a bit of DRAMA...oh, and WOLVES to come!

Thanks for reading Daylen!


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Love it!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you love it, Sherylb!


Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

ahh i dont tanya and her family help them ... that pain in the ass better help with something lol

Author's Response:

LOL...hmmmm, still holding a grudge against Tanya?  She does get a little say in one of the next chapters...LOL

I think you'll like it!

Thanks for reading, BlueAngel145!


Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

I have no idea why, but I am incredibly amused that Jessica's son's initials spell MEN.
Newborn Edward will be interesting.

Author's Response:

Oh my gosh!  I hadn't even noticed that!  Good thing it didn't spell something AWFUL...LOLOLOL

Men, that IS appropriate!

Thanks for reading, squarepancake!


Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 30~~Roommates~~

I can't wait for another chapter! I'm going to be voting for you tonight for the Indie Twific Awards! I hope you win!


Author's Response:

Thanks so much Baela!  I appreciate you reading...and voting!


Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I know what you mean... I have to write in order too LOL otherwise there would be gaps in the story.... I am loving this story it is so cool and so different lol... I may do that sometime... I'm writing one right now... well trying too.... I'll get a little wrote down then I could send it to you? See what you think lol...

Author's Response:

Sure, that would be great...I look forward to it...


Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I bet... I would so love to but I never can finish it and I hate writing details LOL I get very inpatient when writing. I wanna hurry and get to the good stuff LOL But I get these idea's and I can play them through my head. See every detail of what the people or places look like but... I just can't write it down... Oh read the next chapter! Yayness!

Author's Response:

I hear you...I could hardly wait to write Bella meeting Edward...but had to do the other chapters FIRST!  LOL...I write in order...not skipping around...

LOL...feel free to share your ideas with me...LOL...I'm always willing to look over new stuff!


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 30~~Roommates~~

The next chapter sounds promising =]

Author's Response:

The next chapter is in the line-up...and I hope that you will like's called CAPTURE THE FLAG...Edward is going to be the flag...LOL


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 29~~Drawbacks~~


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

I loved LOVED them sort of exploring each other with that kiss. It was both hot and sweet.

Author's Response:

Whew...that was fun to write too...once I got passed the UH OH factor...LOL


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~


And yah! No more Denali's!

Author's Response:

It really was time for the cousins to MOVE on!

But the scene with Tanya was one that I had *seen* from the very beginning...but then it was time for her to LEAVE...LOL


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Lots and lots of things to say.

First, I love your family! They're freakin hilarious!

Second, Holy.HALE. I didn't even think of the Denali's! And Tanya making a play for Jasper! Is she out of her mind? Alice is ferocious when need be. Come on, Bella, you can do it, channel your ferociousness too! lol

Edward was all cute when Bella was trying to explain to him how dire the situation is.

Him being a virgin TOTALLY shocked me. Not that I thought he was some kind of man whore but I just never doubted his... experience?

However, I don't doubt his performance ;] Him being suggestive about breakfast, inviting Bella inside the bathroom and claiming her mouth taht way up against the wall leaves little doubt about Edward's .. feelings and performance ;]

Bring on Rose and Alice... HALE YEAH!

Author's Response:

My family really do think that they are FUNNY...and sometimes they are....but I'm rather tired of the *asteroids hit the vamps on the head and they all die* comments....LOLOLOL...except, maybe I should write a story about the FUTURE and the vamps save the world...from asteroids.... ;)

What was Tanya thinking to make a play on ANY of those guys?  She doesn't appear to be heavy on the brains...

Yes, sweet, clueless Edward...LOL....

He is clueless, but he is in love, so I think that it won't be important that he is, ahem, inexperienced....

He was raised by a moral code, and Bella was raised in the time frame of being moral...AND neither one of them had found someone that tickled them *that way*....

LOL...Rose and Alice will be able to take on the Denali's...quite well, I'm sure!

Thanks, so much, for your lovely reviews...they made my day!


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

"Edward... oh, Edward."


So, I'm guessing when I read "I love you, Edward" in Bella's POV a few chapters ago she was only saying it in her head? since Edward seems unsure of her love.

The whole morning scene was so very cute... the IHOP commercial reference was  hilarious!

Could our visitors be the REAL bad guys? Or a visit from of favorite vegetarians?

Author's Response:

Yes, she hadn't said it outloud to him yet...SHE had realized it, but no words had been utttered yet...

IHOP....we are thinking that we need to make a visit there...for research purposes...LOL


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

I agree with you on the Math thing and anyone who actually goes back to the beginning of this chapter just to count the numbr of questions is just OCD.

I liike the way this chapter played out =]

Author's Response:

LOL...I had had a problem with Bella's AGE in an earlier chapter...and realized that I had done the math I was worried about the questions...but I *think* that I got the count right!


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

Aww... This is my favorite chapter so far too!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you liked this one too!  It really is one of my favorites...right up there with 35... ;)


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

Keeping it short STOP Next chapter is it STOP Love the house STOP


Author's Response:

That was a great review!  You made me laugh!


Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

YAH for kisses! Way to be suave, Eduardo *smirks*

Bella, I like surprises too =]

Author's Response:

He really does keep her on her toes, doesn't he?  Surprising her all the time....he needs to wake up though...


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