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Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 32~~We're Going to the Chapel~~

WOO! Wedding day, oh yeah! I wanna see Tanya get really jealous!:) Beautiful dress, you must have an eye for fashion like Alice! Edward in a tux, pretty good, Carlisle n a tux, OMIGAH, Emmett in a tux... Gosh im panting! hahaha, great chapter, love the Esme Bella moment!

Great job!


Author's Response:

I know!  All those hunks in

Thanks for reading, MJ...


Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 32~~We're Going to the Chapel~~

Bella's dress is indeed beautiful, it's simple and elegant; and suits her to a T. Oh, I so can't wait for Edward's transformation! I just realized that I'd never read a fic where Edward is turned before. I hope you will include his POV during the transformation process... I can't believe that between your story and 'The List' by Laura Cullen, I'm going to witness two significant events in fiction; one by Edward and one by Bella. I'm so looking forward torward to that!

This chapter is really sweet - the rushed atmosphere is tampered by the love these vampires and human share and I'm just melting into a puddle of goo...

Thank you for updating!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you like the was actually a LOT of fun searching for it...It's a Jessica McClintock...

Ah, the transformation...coming in TWO chapters...and there will be an Edward POV for it... ;D

I'm a little annoyed at the Nomads for making us rush into the wedding, but Bella is pleased that there isn't a LOT of time for things to get out of know...ALICE!  LOL

I'll be getting the next chapter up into the queue tomorrow!

Thanks, so much, for reading, Heaven Dust!


Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Hey Katmom:

Glad you got your story on I have two places to read this spellbinding story...Love your work...

Author's Response:

There you are! 

Nice to see you here...


Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

gotta love a psychopath!

Author's Response:

LOL...she was SO much fun to write!  It was actually just a bit scary how much FUN that was...mwhahaha!

Hope you enjoy the rest!  LOTS of NEXT buttons for you to click!


Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Hey Kathie:

I'm writting in a hurry here...but anyway. I just wanted to tell you that I hope your daughters know how lucky they are to have you as a mother. I would so love that my mom and I shared the same passion for writting. But as we don't, at least I have a couple of web moms that take care of me and my crazy story cravings online. Thank you so much for sharing this incredible story with the whole world. I'm only a freshman in highschool, so I can probably pass for one of your daughters too...would you siber adopt me????? ****pout**** ha ha ha. No just kidding. but seriously, keep writting, this just keeps getting better and better.

The Best of Lucks (for you and the whole gang):



Author's Response:

Certainly...I'll take you under my wing too!  My girls are 18, 16 and 13....ah, fun times!  LOL

My mom doesn't like Twilight either...LOL, good thing my girls do!


Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Great story. So looking forward tomore of it. I hope they get the chance to marry. Update soon. =-D

Author's Response:

Thank you PLV!  I appreciate you taking the time to read...and those lovely stars too!

Weddng coming up!


Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

You are very welcome XD! And yes we do! It is beautiful!!

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Ooh, this is getting good again.  Thought perhaps the whole kidnapping thing was it and they would just get together and Edward would be changed, with a bit of angst during his transformation and then that would be it.  But now we have more excitement to look forward ... can't wait!

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you somuch LizzieMaco9....Had to keep things angsting just a small bit...

There is a bit more excitement to come...

Thanks so much for reading!


Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Hey Kathie:

Sorry that this is my first review in 8 CHAPTERS! But is just that the story is so good that I simply can't stand the idea of stop reading. Not even to review. What with all of those cliffhangers! You are a great writter, I hope to see much more of your work. Because I truly enjoy reading it. I hope that the muse that possess you right now, never leaves your side.

The Best of Lucks:



Author's Response:

What a lovely review, Aly!  Thank you!  Being in too big of a hurry to READ is an excellent excuse...and aren't you so happy that you have a lot of NEXT buttons to click!  Hope you continue to enjoy it!

Thanks, also, for the lovely stars!


Reviewer: LaRosada (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

I'm a new reader. Just began reading the story tonight, in fact. I just wanted to say that I loved that Robert Pattinson line. I laughed so hard I nearly woke my family. Lol.

I'm really enjoying the story so far, lucky me there are many chapters ahead. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you! Try not to wake the family with laughter... ;)

I hope that you enjoy the rest of it too!


Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

I like how you're incorporating canon into the story-- good stuff all around!

Author's Response:

Thank you, riverspirit! (Lovely name, by the way)

I also like it when I can slip some canon stuff in there...nice that you noticed it!


Reviewer: Mollieeee (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Heyy :')

Oh My Word. This Is Amazing, You Must Update.

I've Been Reading It All Today and Most Of Yesterday As It Is Now 30 Minutes Past Midnight.

Favourited. ;)

Please Update. :( Pretty Please?


Author's Response:

Thank you Mollieeee!  I'll be putting the next chapter up today...and hopefully it will get validated quickly...

Get some rest!


Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Holy Shindig, Batman!!

I'm so looking forward to the battle!

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you SarahBella!  *Batman*...I can see a resemblance...LOL

I'm getting the next chapter into the lineup tonight...


Reviewer: ForThe Love of Edward (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Ohhh I wish you would have left her identity a secret! But oh well, Lauren is a itch anyway, nice carryover there!!!  "Mama", for some reason, reminds me of Adam Sandler's mma in The Waterboy!

Author's Response:

Sorry!  It just worked out that way...Lauren really did have some issues...I haven't seen that movie, but will take your word for it!

Hope you enjoy getting to click NEXT so many times!


Reviewer: clobub (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

wow wow loving this new chapter!!

i was reading the "two men and a woman" part and i just squealed out loud, im so excited!!!

though i am intrigued as to when jacob may make an appearance, although i am definitely team edward all the way!!

why dont you have emmett make the cake for the wedding?

and i wonder what would have happened if bella would have had her chance to get edward alone during the game :-)

thanx for the amazing chapter!


Author's Response:

Thank you so much clobub!  There will be a Jacob appearance...WOLVES!

Emmett wanted to make the cake, but he had other bachelor parties... ;)

Yes, Bella and Edward alone during the game...LOL...I'm thinking they would have made some use of it!

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

mmmm mmm mm... FANTASTIC chapter (although that goes without saying on this story.) Cannot WAIT for the wedding and the change and VAMPIRE RUMBLE! YES!

Love the ring, I want one too = )

Author's Response:

Eidelweiss...I think we BOTH need one of those rings! 

YES, lots of STUFF coming up...and I hope that you enjoy chapter going into the line-up today....


Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

fun chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks, smisa!  It was fun to write this one...


Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

As always, I am completely captivated by this.

It looked like they had a very enjoyable game of capture the flag.  Even if it was brought to an abrupt hult.

Yay! they're getting married.  Faster than they had planned, but they love each other and even if it's faster, it's what they want.

So is it James that they get to kick?  Er... Kill?  Please say yes.  I can't wait to see him taken down.

Oh, I'm looking forward to seeing their wedding.  I know the change is going to be hard (please say that the hint of it not going well, was just their bad thoughts).  I can't wait to see Edward take a piece out of James and teach him not to hurt his love.

Author's Response:

Oh, that's so nice to read, Aille...thank you! 

The game was fun, even with the scary ending...hmmmm, James?  Maybe  ;)

Shhhhh....the colors for the wedding are DEEP GREEN and GOLD...for his eyes now...and later...

Thank you so much for your lovely review...and those stars too!


Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

okay, so I read the entire story in ONE afternoon...And I am almost bouncing around as much as Alice to get to know the outcome!

Pleaaaaaaaaaaase update soon? :-)

Love from belgium

Author's Response:

Thank you LitlleMissCullen!  Wow! That's a lot of reading!

The next chapter will be in the line-up this evening...and hopefully up soon!

I lived in Germany for three years, in Geilenkirchen...Flew in and out of Brussels a couple of times...

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Do you think Bella would mind if you know... i just tried it on, gave it right back? I'm ready for vampire eward!!! And i gotta tell you... i had a little trouble when i frst read this chapter becuz i live in so many au stoies i cant figure out which universe im in! Hahaha, but i reread he last chapter and that go me back on track! BABY MICHAEL IS SO CUTE! i love him! And capture the flag.... awesome!!!!



Author's Response:

I don't think that Bella would mind...Edward let Alice try it on!

We'll see if/when Vampire Edward comes out to play!

I'm glad that you enjoyed the baby and the game!

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: Mollieeee (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

I Swear If You Kill Edward Off, I Will Regret Reading This.

But If You Dont I'll Love You For Keeping Me On The Edge of My Seat.

:) Still Readin and Lovin It

Author's Response:

LOVED that review!  And so happy that you could click NEXT to see how it all played out!


Reviewer: Mollieeee (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Hahaha. I Guessed Right.

Physco Lauren and 'Mama'. ;)

Seriously Good Man (Y)

Author's Response:

YES, you did guess right!  Pixel cookie for you!


Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

You certainly know how to blend humor, romance, and tension!

Author's Response:

Thank you, wantmoretwilightnow!  I really have tried to make this a blend of all those components...glad to hear that it's working!

Thanks for the review and the stars!


Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Stupid Tanya. I seriously dislike her already.

Author's Response:

She really was easy to dislike, wasn't she?  But she didn't succeed!


Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

wow that is uick

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!


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