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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

"Human food was hideous, but the essence of strawberries on Edward’s lips? Priceless…" I like this line.....:)

Loved the wedding...and that Tanya was good..

I noticed that you used the word "abruptly" ---is that  a nod to Stephanie Meyers?  It seems like she used that word fairly often in the books.....

I love that Bella ripped his shirt off.....

Author's Response:

THanks, Sherylb!

Yes, Tanya really did need to behave...she had lots of people looking over her shoulder!

I'll have to think on the abruptly thing...hadn't realized that!

Glad you liked the ripping shirt thing...hahaha, that was fun!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Awwww *sigh* They make me feel all warm & fuzzy sometimes :)
What a sweet chapter. & I'm THRILLED to hear about his hand. Really :) Hurray indeed!!!
He seems to remember a lot. Looking forward to hearing Bella's explanation. Is she really gonna come clean? DYING to know!
Still in love w/the tale your weaving :)


Author's Response:

Thank you Sonia!  I just couldn't have his hand hurt forever...that would have been toooooo much angst for me...LOL

I'm off on vacation, hope to have that I can respond to your reviews!

Thanks, so much, for your support!


Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

Good god, Kathie... you've outdone yourself. The. Best. Wedding. Ever! I love the entire Cullen family - and I'm glad Jasper doesn't have that much difficulty around a human as canon Jasper... so everything's just perfect!

I'm getting really antsy now and can't wait to see what would happen next... I love this story so much. Well done!

Author's Response:

Thank you HeavenDust!  The best wedding ever? Very cool that you think so!

I decided to give Jasper a break on the wanting to drink human angle...he needed a rest!

The next chapter is in the lineup! THE BITE!!!!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

I DO hope she woke up! I hope it took a while too. If ANYBODY deserved to suffer it's that psycho Lorena. She is a whole new brand of crazy. If you're a bad person I'm a downright evil bitch. (& by the way, we ALL have a touch of psycho in us. Gotta be a little bit crazy to get thru this thing called life :))
Anxious to see Edward's reactions to everything once he's coherent. Wondering if he'll remember her sparkling. And PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let his hand be ok!!!

Thx for sharing your awesomeness :)

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

i want so cake! please please please!! (bouncing around like alice) lol luv luv ur stoy

Author's Response:

We'll share that whole cake...the Cullens don't want any!

Thanks, so much, for your support!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

HOLY CROW!!! Grrrrr! She needs to eat that hammer! Am I evil for praying Bella gets to rip that crazy bitch to shreds?
Poor Edward!!!

Love this story. Hard.


Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

Really good chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks, branlc!


Reviewer: Thank God For Deliverance (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

awww. that's adorable and i love how you didnt just smut things up with details from the wedding. that really just tops the story you know? i was thinking bout the astroids and i figured that they could just destroy the nomads. you know? i like that idea. :)

By the way... I would love a piece of that cake... that would be amazing. lol.

Author's Response:

Ah, my children wouldn't let me smut up the story...sigh...LOL

Asteroids and THAT would make a good story!  With them flat beneath one...

Okay, let's share that cake!


Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

Lovely wedding. Great bonding between Edward and his future brothers.

Eager for the change and moreso, the awakening.

Update soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Queendel!  Glad you enjoyed the wedding!

Edward is pretty thrilled that besides getting a lovely Bride...he's got brothers too!

THE BITE is coming up!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Wow. Jasper's PoV was great, and of course I see why u did it that way - but it would have been righteous to let Bella at that psycho. I SO hope she's the one to get ahold of mama.
For the record the way you got Edward away from everyone was fuggin brilliant. I'd wondered how u were going to pull that off. :))

Great job as usual :))


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~


Must keep reading

Author's Response:

Uh oh...and THIS isn't the HARD chapter....sigh...



Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Those two are like the Mad Hatter and the March Hare. Loo-NEE Toons

Still lovin it and too anxious to read more to write more :P

Great job!

Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

*wags finger* You got me...
Yup I was one of the many (I assume) that thought the crazy bitch was gonna get him. Gotta admit I'm glad I was wrong :)
Love how taken they both seem to be with the other.

Your awesomeness continues to astound :)


Author's Response:

My youngest daughter, now 13, was REALLY offended when she finished THAT chapter...LOL


But I do love how they are TAKEN with each other...

Thanks, Sonia, I am loving your reviews!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Wonder if it's 'mama' missing from the scent... Bout all I can come up with... Anxious to find out tho' :)
You really do have the psycho stalker personna nailed. (& I thought my Lauren was whacked lol)
She's made a couple of refereneces to them being together for the rest of HIS life, not their lives or her life... Is her plan THAT diabolical? Or am I reading too much into it?
Awesome as always :)


Author's Response:


Someone's LIFE!  For the extent of it....sigh...

They are a bit diabolical!

I bet you are really glad to be able to click NEXT now...oh, and in the chapter:  TRYING TO


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

hmmm... she seemed to handle that quite well. Looking forward to more interaction between the two of them. The sniffing bit was funny :)
Cool how she ended up sitting there watching him sleep. Seems I remember another vamp in another universe that enjoyed watching a certain human sleep...

Great job as always

Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Awesome :) I thoroughly enjoyed the story of how Bella became a vamp & I loved that it was Esme that found her.
Really excited to see how she handles her time alone with Edward. Wonder if she will be any better/worse at keeping 'the monster' in check?

Never really had any issues w/Mike, like u say he was just acting like what he was. Although I've found myself growing to dislike him since I started reading fanfiction - he's always depicted as a total douche. Gotta remind myself that that's not 'really' Mike. Love the relationship he seems to have w/Jess & Edward.

Another great chappie in a wonderful story :)

Author's Response:

I see you are still procrastinating writing your OWN story...but that's fine since you are reading MINE...LOL

Yes, Mike...he was just a 17 y/o in SM's world...of course, I do love the actor that plays him...

Glad you enjoyed Bella's back story...we'll have to see how well she keeps her *monster* in check...the story does go for 37 chapters... ;D

Thanks, so much, for your wonderful reviews!  And lovely stars too...


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Aha! Well at least he only "recognizes" her from a picture, and she's able to retain plausible deniability. (I do agree w/your girls tho' the picture bares a striking resemblence to Victoria.)
Kind of anxious to meet your Mike, wondering if he got the same sort of 'character makeover' you gave Jess.

Still lovin' this, and since I've spent the last hour banging my head against the wall trying to work on my own story w/o any real progress <insert frustrated  scream> I decided my time would be better spent reading.
(& yes I LOVE that I get to hit Next and keep reading :))


Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 32~~We're Going to the Chapel~~

totally lovely story cant wait to read the rest of it, i hope the love scene is detailed lol

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and rating Vixenjc!

Alas, this story is *only* rated PG 13....but you could go read my KNIGHTS OF HONOR for some, um, more detail!

Next chapter should be up any minute...!!!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Wow... Jess is VERY luck that Rose went home w/her.
Lauren is freakin' Looney Toon - and we're not talkin' about the talking bunny & catchy musical medley sort either. *shudder* Brings to mind S.King's Misery. Yeah... she's whacked like that...

Still loving it & sneaking in a chapter every chance I get :)
Thx for sharing!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

OK - I NEVER thought I'd find myself sayin' this... but I hope Jess and the baby are ok!
Love your Emmett :)
Dying to find out what happened w/Jess - so for now we'll leave it at I SO love this story :))


Author's Response:

So, I've given you a new view of Jess....that's cool!  You are just going to have to continue reading to find out...aren't you so happy that you can click NEXT right now?  :D

Thanks for the lovely stars too... go and check out Sonia Mari's PREY FOR PROTECTION!  It's a hit too!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

OMG! Uh yeah she has DEFINITELY got some issues. & I'm thinkin' 'mama' is just as friggin nutty as her spawn.
Wow. You have the crazy stalker persona nailed! <anything u might feel the need to confess?> lol
Lauren is one crazy biyatch!

Another great chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL...NOPE, nothing to confess...Mwahahaha....really!

It is rather scary how I can get into her nutty head...LOL

I am totally loving your reviews...!!!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

JUST started reading this today. Been reading from my phone and it won't let me review (doesn't seem to like the little boxes) I just kerschnockered my son's psp so I could do this because I couldn't keep reading WITHOUT taking a minute to tell you that I LOVE this story!
The plot is an awesome twist to the way E was always protecting B in the series.
You even made Jessica likable (which is a hella twist & no easy feat lol) First thought I had about the stalker was Lauren & the LM on the 'love' note has all but convinced me that I'm right.

Great job.
Fabulous story!


Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

OMIGAH I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! IT WORKED IT WOKED IT WORKED! *Virtual hugs* You are awesome! I love love love love love love you!

Author's Response:


Always nice when technology works!


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 32~~We're Going to the Chapel~~

Can't wait for the wedding and wedding night/honeymoon.....

Author's Response:

Sorry I missed this review!  Going on vacation was too hard on me...LOL

Thanks so much for reading!

Ah, the honeymoon....


Reviewer: ForThe Love of Edward (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 32~~We're Going to the Chapel~~

Awwwww, I'm so excited!! I can't believe my 3 day journey to the end of where this story is at has finally come! I can't wait for the next part to come out!! Oh, and please please please make the honeymoon NC-17!! The tension between the two is so palpable, it would be an amazing night if you wrote it!

Author's Response:

Thank you, FTLOE, for that lovely review!  The next chapter is in the line-up...hopefully it will be up soon...

The honeymoon is stil PG 13...but it's pretty good, at least I think so!

My *Knights of Honor* is rated NC 17....and it's posted here might want to take a peek at that... ;)


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