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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 32~~We're Going to the Chapel~~

Funny fact, Nov 21 is my parent's anniversary *shrug*
Bella's such a worrier :) <Lovely dress!>
Glad they're getting Mike, Jess & little Mikey to safety before trouble arrives.
Dyin to see how this goes!


Author's Response:

I'm still catching up on reviews!

Really, the 21st?  That is so cool!

Yep, Bella has to worry just a bit...but she's cool with it too!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

Wow!! First off, the whole Capture the flag thing was fuggin BRILLIANT! I SOOO loved the game.
And the visitors! omg! Is it... Is it Victoria/James/Laurent??? If they broke into Edward's house did they see the painting? If James is involved he'd defiitely recognize it...
And then the proposal!! The impending wedding! How wonderfully beautiful was all that!
I am totally blown away!!! :)


Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

wow awsome chapter the wedding very romantic i sooo cant wait for next chapter :)

Author's Response:

Sorry it took me so long to respond...I was on vacation...hope that you got the NEXT chapter already...and then NEXT one is already in the lineup!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 30~~Roommates~~

Yay! You kept his mother's ring!!! That's awesome! She's gonna love it! Won't she? I mean this Bella can't be all against marriage like the other Bella - can she? I hope not!

Loved Edward & Alice, can already see the two of them developing that special bond they always have. Of course I love his interactions with the whole family, but I take xtra joy w/ him and Alice & him & EmmBear.
Love watching their love grow *sigh*

Great chappie (as always)

Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 29~~Drawbacks~~

First off, I don't think I've read an Emmett cooks for the human scene before, but I could so see it as I read it here. And the duct tape art bit! ROFL PRICELESS! So very Emmett! And if he was gonna cook, a pig in a firepit would so be his first idea! LOVED it!!
Edward took the cons really well too... Seems there really is no price too high when true love's involved.
Great Chapter!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~

ROFL @ Emm I love him. :)
Edward's still taking everything in stride. Granted that's not hard to do when your going over the pros... wonder how he'll handle the cons?
Love the way your building their relationship :) No rush ~ Just letting them be, letting them feel...
LOVED this chapter
(Just got an update to my email inbox for the first time in three days - dunno whats up w/that...) But I hadn't had a chance to read any of your responses prior to now.
I really am kinda slackin' on PFP. I have almost 5k words into CH 14, but it's missing something and I can't figure out what it is yet. So I reread it, tweak it a little and get my GE fix, rinse and repeat... I'll get it. :) Yes I'd get it faster i I wrote more and read less, but hey... What can I say? I'm hooked here.

Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

Alice!!! Love her so! Especially when she's pouncing on man stealing succubae. Whole lot of awesome in that little bitty package. :)
You did great w/ the varying PoVs, no confusion at all

Still lovin' your story


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

I had to read this twice just beacuse I kept gasping in awe and just general happiness at each little part of this chapter - such a beautiful wedding, perfectly written.

Love your work Kathie. Can't wait to read the next chapter! =-)


Author's Response:

Thank you Eidelweiss!  Weddings really are happy affairs, especially since Tanya didn't disrupt anything!

Thank you, so much...I do love your reviews!


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

Bella better keep an eye on Miss Tanya. That vamp's dangerous enough w/o the 'additional' gift of enticement...
Loved the bit w/Eleazar and Edward's gift & Bella's shield :) Very well played
Gratz on the nominations :) No doubt they're well deserved.

Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

God they're SO friggin sweet!
TANYA!!! While he stands the biggest chance of surviving a visit from her than anyone else I could think of, I think she may be the BIGGEST threat in Bella's eyes. & Her gift! Yikes! Like a hot vamp needs somethin' like that! SOOoo not fair.
I hope Bella can keep Edward safe :))
Still lovin' every minute of it

Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Ahhhhhhh! Those sweetest of words! <insert girly lovesick sigh here> How exciting! & he even told her 1st!!! How Perfect!!
Visitors... humans or vamps? hmmm... We've already learned James' role, unless he was changed w/o Bella's knowledge after she was - not seeming especially likely. Could there be a victoria w/o James? Or oohhh maybe it's Tanya! That wouldn't go over well either, although at least she'd be more interested in his body than his blood...

hmmm... I dunno, guess I'll just have to keep reading>


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Liked it? How bout LOVED it! The Wonder woman thing was pretty hilarious :) Loved the whole Q&A bit between the two lovebirds :) They're just soo cute together :)

Curious as to how he'll react to her fleeing


Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~


Author's Response:

Glad you liked it MJ!  They are pretty cute together...not *very* angsty...LOL


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

That Edward... He never ceases to amaze.& You... Your brilliance astounds!!! The way you've brought us to this point... *sigh* I truly enjoy your style of writing. You don't gloss over things too quickly nor do you dwell too long on the little things, you tone and pace are perfect.
I get my kids to help me in my stories too. Missed my daughter's help like crazy while she was gone. She calls herself my Alpha Beta :)


Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

Snazzy house :)
Loved this chapter, love the time they spend together and watching them grow closer.
So glad to see them in CO :)

Reviewer: Thank God For Deliverance (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Yea! I'm diggin that idea with the astroids! And by the way, Alice can pick a cake... That was DELICIOUS! I totally can't wait until the next chapter of the story! It's going to be amazing!You're a FANTASTIC author. Ever consider writing a real book?

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

Hi katmom,

I loved this chapter. It was very romantic and at the end turns very ... mmmmm.

Great work on it. Can't wait for Emmet's comments when the others come to Forks ;-) Will Renesmee enforcedly have no appearance or will she have a cameo?

Looking forward to the next chapter.


Author's Response:

Thanks Sarah! Yep, NO Reneesmee in this story...Maybe I could find some girl and let a wolf imprint on her! 

Glad you liked the mom skipped reading that part!  LOL

The next, next chapter should be up at any moment!


Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

wonderful chapter!  loved how you wrote the wedding night.  i like a good lemon, but how you wrote that was very sweet, romantic, and erotic.  well done.  can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Ah, thank you smisa! daughters really insisted NO lemons...LOL...and they thought this was TOOOO much...LOL

Oh well!  My KNIGHTS OF HONOR has a lemon in it...they won't read that one either... ;D

Thanks, so much, for reading!


Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

i wanna lick the frosting off edward fingers boo hoo it was a beautiful day

Author's Response:

Me too, me too!

So glad you enjoyed the wedding!  It was so much fun to write!

Thanks for the lovely stars!



Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

My husband's name is Michael Edward, so I smile every time I read that!  Great wedding - so filled with love!  Can't wait for the honeymoon!

Author's Response:

Your hubby!  That is so cool! 

Hope you got to click through to the next chapter...and the honeymoon!

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

Awwww... The wedding was great!

Thanks for updating! :-)

Author's Response:

So sorry that it took so long to respond!  I was on vacation...

So happy that you enjoyed the wedding...wish everyone could have had a slice of cake!


Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~


Author's Response:

Thank you!


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

aww the Wedding was beautiful; Jasper had sage advice, and Emmett was hilarious.


Author's Response:

Ah, Jasper and his advice...and EMMETT!  He's always good for a laugh!

Thanks for reading, Daylen!


Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

hmmm can't wait for the change...and them after it haha.

Author's Response:

Thanks LitlleMissCullen!

THAT chapter is in the lineup!


Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

He is just so PERFECT! Gak! I love that Edward is so comfy with the family. I love that he stalked her to get her garter. I love that he actually was thinking of waiting 'til he was changed to consummate their marriage.

Beautiful. But then, you know that. ;) 

Hope you have a terrific vacation!


Author's Response:

Ah, thanks LJ! He is pretty perfect...I'm going to have to make him MESS up at some point....Hmmmm, maybe drain a concert hall full of humans?  THAT would blow his perfect image for sure...LOL

Thanks...I'm hoping to have a good vacation too...with INTERNET!


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