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Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Hi Kathie,

I love the ending and how Edward awakens. I would have been disapointed if he couldn't read minds. It just is a part of him. He wouldn't be Edward if he couldn't read minds.

I bet he's going to win the armwrestling match with Emmet. ;-)

You did an awesome job on this chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Sarah



Author's Response:

Hey Sarah...thanks so much for the lovely review...Yes, he really did need to read minds...ah, arm wrestling...actually Edward had a different idea... ;)

It's in the lineup...hopefully up soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Very nice!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, LitlleMissCullen!

Kathie

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

i have enjoyed reading your version of events, are you going to let us know how it goes with the three nomads and will there be a fight.??



Author's Response:

Thank you VixenJc!  Yep, there will be some action with the Nomads...and wolves!  The next chapter is in the lineup...hope you like it!

Kathie

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Loved it!  Great chapter!  I liked all the detail from Bella's perspective about the change.  We've heard it all from guilt-ridden Edward watcing Bella change, but this is good to hear it from a more "relaxed" perspective.  Yes, she feels bad for his pain and is doing everything she can to alleviate that, but she is thinking about their life together, which is the more realistic way to look at it! 



Author's Response:

LOL, I just couldn't write tooooo much ANGST...Yes, she was worried, but they both wanted it...AND she listened to what he was saying AND meaning... ;)

Thanks, so much, for your lovely review!

Kathie

Reviewer: katymae (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Hi

Just a quick msg to say that I'm really enjoying your story, and looking forward to reading the rest.

Katy xx



Author's Response:

Thank you KatyMae!  Glad you are enjoing this...the next chapter is in the lineup!

Kathie

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

very well written chapter all the honet moon fun mixed with the anxiety of the change b I enjoyed.



Author's Response:

Thanks, mcamastow!  Glad you liked the loving and the BITE...!!!

Next chapter should be up soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

awwww :) Super sweet



Author's Response:

Thanks Julianna!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Wow.
Wowie wow wow even.
That was perfect. Absolutely fuggin' perfect. The dance scene before was beautiful and I couldn't not go all *girly sigh* When he just smiled and spoke of kissing her. Leave it to Edward to wake up the world's sweetest newborn vampire lol
Fabulous chapter!
Hope you're enjoying you vaca!

Sonia



Author's Response:

*Perfect*...I'll take that !  Yes, all girlysigh...that was what I was shooting for... ;)

I think that Edward is going to eventually have some issues...but not just yet!

My vacation was great...but so nice to be back HOME!

Kathie

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

wow awsome chapter i totally luved it .. Great change for edward and alot of control :)i cant wait for the next one and have fun in yellowstone that place is awsome and gorgeous :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Vamppy!!!  He does have quite a bit of control, but then he KNEW what to expect, so hopefully that helped...

Yellowstone was great...nice and GREEN with MOUNTAINS after flat OK!

Kathie

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

That went wonderfully! I'm surprised there isn't an EPOV on the change, but SM had covered that part so I'm not too fussed. Gah... I'm so excited! This is what I dreamed of and more. You did really, really great! Thank you... :)



Author's Response:

Ah, the NEXT chapter, which is in the lineup WILL have an EDWARD POV for the change!  Hope that you like it!

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing HeavenDust!

Kathie

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

awesome!  simply awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks, smisa, glad you liked it!

Next chapter is in the lineup...

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

I think I say this on every chapter, but its like canon law at this point ---

Absolutely stunning chapter, so beautiful. You are so very talented Kathie, never am I more happy when I get sucked into your writing. Loved Edward's change --- just sublime!



Author's Response:

Ah, thanks so much, Eidelweiss!  The next chapter is in the lineup...with Edward's POV for the BITE!  Oh, and a wolf POV too..

Kathie

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

YAY!! EDWARDS A VAMPIRE LOL .. im so happy i cant wait for the next chapter yay i cant wait for him to beat emmett and then him race jasper (he's the fastest right now right?) well anyway who ever is the fastest he has to beat them =D



Author's Response:

Hurray!  He's a VAMPIRE!  The next chapter has Edward's POV for the bite...and some wolf comments too...it's already in the lineup...

They will also be a competition to see who is stronger, but it won't be with arm wrestling...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

That was really great!!! Loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, branlc!  Glad you love it! The next chapter is in the lineup...with Edward's POV for the BITE!

Kathie

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

I loved this story, now drawing to a close. I want to thank you about this chapter, because it reminded me I have to do a change in the one I am writing presently (not submitted yet, of course). The fading of memories...

In my story, AU, Edward will also be changed, but in 1944, and I had forgotten that I must have him recalling his human memories in the first days as a newborn...

I am sorry I cannot vote. I am not good at all at interacting with website..It is a miracle that I manage to submit what I write.

Well, thank you again.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, so much for reading and reviewing!

And good luck with your story...

Kathie

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Well done!



Author's Response:

Thanks DHD!

Kathie

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

So beautiful...tense, but beautiful!  great lyrics too

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much wantmoretwilightnow! I do love that song...I think it's on every one of my playlists on youtube...LOL

AND it fit here nicely...

The next chapter should be up shortly...

Thanks, also, for the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

So good, Kathie!  I love it!

I can't wait to see Edward as a vampire!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading SarahBella!

Ah, Vampire Edward...I think we all need one...

Kathie

Reviewer: EclipsedbyJacob (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Oh, please don't make his guts come out!  Eeeww!  I'm Team Jacob, too, but I love Edward anyway...I don't want him to die!!



Author's Response:

I hope you got to read the next part...no guts coming out!  And I quit listening to my kids too!

Sorry that took so long to get back to you...we were on vacation...

Hope you enjoyed the rest!

Kathie

Reviewer: EclipsedbyJacob (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

I'm guessing its Luaren's mom's scent missing.  She wasn't with the staalker girl at the university, so I figure that's what's missing.  Oh, and it must be so cool to share the love of Twilight with your daughter...



Author's Response:

Excellent guess!

My three girls do enjoy Twilight very much...and we've gotten into some heated discussions about it...I'm Team Edward and they are Team Seth....we are all Team TAYLOR though...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

I looved the wedding! It was perfect. I almost choked when Edward was holding the baby and saying goodbye to Jessica and Mike. Thank you. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Emma Austin!  I hope that Edward gets to hold him again...

Kathie

Reviewer: seashells22 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Interesting plot line! It always throws me for a loop when Bella is the vampire. Can't wiat to catch up today!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much...hope that you "got caught up" and enjoyed the rest of it!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

That was wondermus. o yes... a whole new kind of wonderful :)
But... The Next button seems to be broken. Wait, I'm caught up!?!?! Nooo! *cry*

Kathie this story of your, is chock full of well written tender moments, u possess a larger than average amount as kickassedness.
I'm SOO glad I found this :) Every chapter is a pleasure to read.
& I can't wait to read more :))

Sonia
O and my ch 14 is @ the beta <finally!>



Author's Response:

Too funny, I just got YOUR response at ffn!

I have totally loved your reviews...they really did make my day!

Looking forward to your next chapter of:

PREY FOR PROTECTION

Everyone should go and read it now... ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

Finally! HAHAHAHAHAHA! I've been waiting for the wiedding since 1818! Hehe...enthusiasm. Please review quickly.



Author's Response:

Since 1818!  Cool!  Yes, pretty much it only takes ENTHUSIASM! LOL

Hope you have seen the next chapter...and then the next one is already in the lineup!

Kathie

Reviewer: EclipsedbyJacob (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

My guess is Lauren Mallory...we'll see if I'm right.  This is greaat!



Author's Response:

Excellent guess!

Hope you enjoyed the rest!

Kathie

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