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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

AWESOME! I love the change you created.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  The next chapter is in the lineup and it is from Edward's POV...regarding THE BITE!

Thanks, also, for the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It was fun to write...Esme is sneaky!

Kathie

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

I'm glad you shared the story of Bella's life and transformation.  The story of the painting was interesting as well.  Sorry, I don't have anything creative to add to that this morning.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for readng Elizabethan!  Glad you liked Bella's backstory...

Kathie

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

I like Bella in a blue Volvo - funny that Edward has a silver one just like it.  Wonder if he sawher at the Volvo dealership?  And I love Emmett, we didn't get enough of him in the original books.

 

 



Author's Response:

Bella, Edward...and Volvos!  There's a BLACK one later on... ;)

AND more Emmett too!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Oh, that was creepy - and how did she get his signature on "marriage papers" - like a marriage license?  He was so caughtup with the crowd, he didn't realize what he was signing?

So it sounds like she plans to kidnap him.  Yep, she's pretty deranged, and apparently her mother is too.

 



Author's Response:

Ah, Edward really should read everything that he signs his AUTOGRAPH on to! 

Yes, plenty deranged...and so much fun to write!

Kathie

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Whoa... ALL FOUR TIMES?! Oh my god! I wish I married HIM! I wish I was in HER position RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!

I'm guessing, he is going to be like Bella in Breaking Dawn: not ruled by her lust for blood. Review quickly!



Author's Response:

LOL...YOU are the ONLY one that commented on that... ;)

The next chapter is already in the lineup...should be up soon!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Helpless_Delicious (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

I think the change was perfect!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comment, Helpless_Delicious!  The next chapter, already in the line-up is the BITE from Edward's POV...should be up soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

I think this is a great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  TAKEN can have many meanings...and they were pretty TAKEN with each other!

Kathie

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

My guess is that the scent is a combo of hers and her moms.....this is so good!



Author's Response:

Excellent guesses Suz!

THanks for reading...AND the stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

wow, kinda scary and creepy, but it gives us an idea of the kind of crazy she is!



Author's Response:

Thanks Suz...she really is a NUT!  And crazy too...

Kathie

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I'm intrigued!! This story was recommended to me by the author of Prey for Protection!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are intrigued!  I do love Sonia too!

Kathie

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

The RPattz comment was funny.  I forgot to mention in the Ch. 3 review that the fans and stalkers sound a bit like what RPattz deals with and was wondering if that inspired your comments.

 

 



Author's Response:

That's it exacty.  I read where he was afraid of some deranged fan stabbing him with a needle or something...and that's what got my creative juices flowing...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Thank God For Deliverance (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

YAY THAT IS WAY TOTALLY SUPER EXCITING! AND I TOTALLY CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER! WOWZERS!

Reviewer: ForThe Love of Edward (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

So sweet and perfect! That's how I wanted it to happen for Bella in the series!! So excited to see what comes next! But I have to tell ya, not knowing what is actually happening in the bedroom is killing me!!! Great job though!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, FTLOE!  Edward gets to have his POV for the BITE in the next chapter...which is already in the lineup...

LOL....my kids only let me go THIS far in the bedroom scenes...and one daughter said: TOO MANY TONGUE KISSES ALREADY!

You might want to check out my KNIGHTS OF HONOR here...it has, um, a bit more detail...and my girls won't read it!

Kathie

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

SInce you are already 34 chapters in, I will probably not review every chapter, but just wanted to say I had discovered the story today, recommended by Katie (that_writr).  I think the twist of Bella as vampire and Edward as human is definitely an underexplored area of fan fiction (although I may be wrong, just haven't seen that many stories myself) and your take on it through Chapter 2 is enough to keep me reading.  It's good that her family is supporting her and trying to make it easier for her to be around her singer.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Elizabethan!  I do love Katie too! 

I actually hadn't seen any stories with this twist either, but there really are so many stories overall, maybe I missed them...LOL

I hope you continue to like my take on the story...thanks for reading!  I"ve just added chapter 35 to the lineup too...

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Oh I loved this chapter but I am looking forward to the end with trepidation. As much as I want a happy ending I really don't want this to end. Perhaps there could be outtakes and one-shots? 



Author's Response:

Thanks Emma!  I've put the next chapter into the lineup and hope that you like that one too...

There are a few options for when I'm done...Chapter 37 will be the last chapter, with an epilogue...

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Great chapter..love it. Hope you win the Indie!

I love Yellowstone...haven't been there in  years.....have a wonderful vacation!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Sheryl...alas, GE did not win the Indies, but the fact that I was in the top TEN blows me away!

Yellowstone was great...but what a LONG drive!

Kathie

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Awesome chapter! It made me a little hungry while he listed him favorite foods.

Reading this story always makes me smile without even noticing it until my cheeks hurt. I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL...I got hungry WRITING that section! 

Oh, I'm so happy that this story makes you smile!  Your reviews make ME smile!

Next chapter is in the lineup!

Kathie

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

woohoo!! some sexy vampire action! YEAH1 Im so excited for  vampire eddie to have some fun!

Love it

MJ



Author's Response:

Thanks MJ!  Ah, Vampire Edward...he's on his way!

Kathie

Reviewer: Thank God For Deliverance (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

AHHHH!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! MORE THAN AMAZING AND I LOVED THE ENDING OF IT THE MOST ABOUT WHEN  HE WAS WAKING UP AND ALL!!! THAT WAS OVERLY AMAZING AND I AM LITERALLY JUMPING UP AND DOWN RIGHT NOW.



Author's Response:

THANKS SO MUCH!  I'm so happy that you loved it...I think that you will be quite FOND of the next chapter too...the BITE from Edward's POV...

Kathie

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Love this update.  Looking forward for the hunt and the fight with the nomads.  They are in for a surprise.  Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks Queendel!  The next chapter is in the lineup...There will be HUNTING and games...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

I just wanted to tell you that I love rereading this. :)  I know, I've said it before, but the story utterly captivates me.  Thank you for all the hard work this has required of you.  It's fabulous.

 

~LJ



Author's Response:

Oh, thanks LJ!  You are very welcome!!!

Everyone...go over and read A NEW MORNING by LJ....you'll love it!

Kathie

Reviewer: clobub (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

OMG!!!

Love it love it love it!!!!!!

i actually gasped when edward read bellas mind. i actually gasped aloud. loudly. lol

i want a vampire edward . . .  *sighs wistfully* :)

loving your work as always!!

xxclobubxx



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm so happy that you love it!  I want a vamp Edward too!  If you find him, can we share?

Kathie

Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

It's a good thing they suspected he might be a mind reader or the shock of his awakening like that would have been an unbelievable shock! You handled his change wonderfully in this chapter. Thanks for the update!

~Ayla

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  And you are very welcome!  Next chapter is in the lineup...Edward's POV for the BITE...

Kathie

Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

I like the role reversal of Edward and Bella!  I am also curious if the cougar referrence has a double meaning??? I'm just saying! LOL



Author's Response:

LOL, hadn't thought of that!  She IS a bit older than him...

Hope you enjoyed the rest...

Kathie

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