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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: pacificgec (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

great twists!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for readig, pacificigec!


Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

great job!

I think it's really cool that Jakes pack leader!

Also it was awesome to know that Edward was soothed by the ice baths, Bella, ect. ect. in his change! The way you brought on the mind reading was really awesome!

Loved it!


Author's Response:

Thanks MJ!  Glad that you enjoyed his POV...

He HAD to have the mind reading thing, for sure!


Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

This was a really good chapter  two points of veiw not as much of Jacob As Edward but still really good.

Author's Response:

Yes, just a bit of Jacob...

Thanks for the lovely stars...


Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Wonderful update.  I totally love this Edward and the way that you protray him.  And Jacob seems more mature and rational.

Eager for more soon.

Author's Response:

Ah, thanks!  He does seem to be pretty accepting, but he DID know a lot of what was going to happen...I think that has to help.  AND he wanted it really badly...

Jacob, yes a bit more mature...and he's accepted his ALPHA role...

I'll be getting the next chapter into the lineup tomorrow...


Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

I loved it! This is what I read all day to read! Edward as a vamp again! I loved the shield thing and that they can work with it so readily.  I can't wait to see what Jacob decides, but I be they decide to fight with the Cullens and scare off the "mysterious" coven of three. I loved Edwards change, and I am going to be reading it every day until you post again!

Author's Response:

Wow! All day!   Having Bella's shield to help him to begin with should make his acceptance of his gift a little easer...SM's Edward just had his own strength of will to help...

Ah, Jacob, our dear ALPHA...I hope that he can see reason...

I'll be putting another chapter into the lineup tomorrow...


Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Wow! I loved it! He wakes up and answers all their questions without them even asking!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it MorganLizard!  (What an interesting name!)

That mind reading did come in handy...LOL

Thanks for the lovely stars also!


Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

I really liked! I hope the wolves don't attack and help out with the nomads instead.

Author's Response:

I hope so too!  Oh wait...I know what happens...LOL...I have FAITH in Ephraim Black's lineage... ;)


Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Well, hopefully Jake doesn't decide to throw a wolf tantrum and sulk about Edward's transformation... never know with him though.

Author's Response:

A *Wolf Tantrum*...that might be interesting!  I think that Paul would wish for that...

Thanks for reading, and the lovely stars!


Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Yes, that was a lovely little Mick cameo! Your story is getting better and better! Can't wait for what is next!

Author's Response:

Another MICK fan! There are many of us here...He made a pretty HOT glad to know that he'll have another show this a DOCTOR!  That's hot too... ;)

Thanks for reading, and all of your wonderful reviews!


Reviewer: sheba (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

I just started reading this last night and feel like a total idiot, for not reading this sooner!!!!!!!!!!!  Bad me!  I wanted Bella to start breaking bones. too!!

Author's Response:

Ah, Sheba, another member of the WE REALLY HATE Lorena fan are in good company sweets!

Hope that you enjoyed the rest of the many NEXT buttons to click!


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

I loved it too :-)  It's one of my favorites so I had to re-read it when it was posted here!!

Author's Response:

You are so sweet jfk06! 


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

I really liked hearing Edward's POV......................

Author's Response:

Thanks Sherylb!  I like being inside his head...

He was quite the ambassador too...I hope that the Elders come to the right decision... ;)


Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Hmm... they're not going harm Emmett, Edward and the rest of the family, right? God, I hope not.

I really like EPOV on his change! So much like brave Bella when she transformed (in SM's Twilight) and it's interesting to see what he experienced. Haha... I can't wait to see him giving Emmett a run for his money in arm wrestling next! *LOL*

Great update!

Author's Response:

I hope not!  LOL....I think that the wolves should make the right decision.  Those two changes were for the RIGHT reasons....

The next chapter DOES have their little competition...and it made me laugh...hope it does the same for you!

I'll be putting it in the lineup in the morning...


Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

very exciting!  i loved hearing edward's POV!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked his POV smisa!  It was fun to write...


Reviewer: lmb (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Great chapter.  I really like the balance between the family members

Author's Response:

Thanks, lmb...The family, all of them, really did support them in his change...made it easier for all of them.

Thanks for reading...


Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

I loved this chapter, Kathie!  I can't wait to see how the pack reacts to Edward and Emmett!

Author's Response:

Hi SarahBella!  I hope that the pack chooses to do the right thing....I'm thinking that they will!

Thanks for reading AND the stars!


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

woohoo Edward's got some diplomacy skills there :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Daylen!  He does have some skills...maybe that's his second gift... ;)


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Every time I read this story, I get so excited and sucked in even more. This chapter is certainly no exception --- LOVED Edward's point of view --- just absolutely perfect.

I'm curious what will happen with Jake!

Author's Response:

That is so nice of you to say, Eidelweiss!  Edward is so much fun to write...

Ah, Jake...I have faith in him...that the Elders will make the right decision!

Getting the next chapter up into the lineup!


Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Hi Kathie,

Looooved this chapter. Love the change from EPOV. And the hunt and the encounter with the werewolfs. Can't wait for the next chapter.


P.S.: The second New Moon teaser trailer has been leaked on youtube. It's awesome can't wait to see the movie in November.

Author's Response:

Thanks ON! 

I've got to see that new trailer!  Ah, Taylor is calling me to the dark side!


Reviewer: schaapje98 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Nice job!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you schaapje98!


Reviewer: AlixMaret (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

I really enjoyed the introduction of the wolves into the story, since it gives it an interesting twist and a reason to continue with more interesting "what-if's" and questions to be answered than just how easily the Cullens take out the nomads.

I'm looking forward to Edward's first experience at the piano as a vampire!

Overall though, he seems almost too self-possessed as he takes everything about the change, including the mind-reading in stride. Despite his love for Bella and preparation up front there are some downsides to this existence and being a newborn has to be a bit daunting and overwhelming, even without single-minded blood-lust. (Please don't take offense, I always found the atypical ease of Bella's transition in canon a bit hard to swallow.)

Since this is my first review of "Guarding Edward", let me add how much I enjoyed the read so far and the reversal of roles with Bella and Edward! It's a great premise, not just to reverse the vampire and human, but to emphasize the protective role for Bella which Edward is so focused on in canon. I loved the link between the two of them through her portrait and the back story you created for Bella. I also enjoyed your exploration of a human, compassionate, highly talented Edward dealing with the loss of his parents, living his passion for music and creating a whole new role for Mike and Jessica (they've rarely fared so well in fanfiction as they do in your story - kind of refreshing that the "normal, nice guys" aren't relegated to coming in last).

Thanks for a great read so far!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading...and the lovely review, AlixMaret!

Edward actually gets to play the piano in the next chapter, which will be in the lineup tomorrow...

He really is taking things well, but I figured that he KNOWS so much more about their lives than any of them did when they were changed.  He will experience some of the downsides soon...and I have a few plans in place for ways to help him through them...

Having Bella already fully capable of weilding her shield has helped him...SM's Edward just had to grin and bear it basically...but he does have someone to give him a respite from the VOICES...

I'm glad you gave the story a chance and that you have enjoyed it. 

Mike and Jess...they really do have a hard life in most I thought that I'd give them a bit of a break...LOL  Besides, Edward needed some nice human friends too!

Thank you again...this was a lovely review and I appreciate it!


Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~


Author's Response:

Thanks Suz!  Glad you enjoyed it!


Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

wow awsome chapter cant wait for the next one

Author's Response:

Hi Vamppy...glad you enjoyed it!  Next one should be in the lineup soon!


Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

i hope that nessie is going to show up in some form...i hope that jacob falls in love with her or something like that


Author's Response:

Hi Rosela!  I actually have an idea for a Nessie in the epilogue...which I just started girls (who just roll their eyes when I bounce ideas off of them) said that what I came up with *could work*...!!!

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

AWESOME! I love the change you created.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  The next chapter is in the lineup and it is from Edward's POV...regarding THE BITE!

Thanks, also, for the lovely stars!


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