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Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

LOL!!  in this case your husband's suggestion was ridiculous, but it still made me laugh!!

i agree that seth is the best!  great chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Ah, yes...the hubby...Although Hugh Jackman as Van Helsing was HOT...it really didn't fit with my story line...although that might be a crackfic for another time...LOL

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

omg noOOOOOOO i love this story omg i love seth he is my fav wolf as well .. im so gonna miss this story .. but i really loved it



Author's Response:

Oh! Thank you!  Another chapter to go yet...and I'm writing the epilogue...had a great BRAIN STORM about it last night...LOL

I'm so happy that you are enjoying it!

Kathie

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

*lol* I know! I adore Seth too. He's just a big goofy kid, non-judgmental. Throwing Emmett is a great idea~! I imagined Emmett shouting "Ah-hoo-hoo-hoo!" as he flew over the trees. :D

Amazing update as usual - love it love it love it! I'm going to miss it when it finally ends too.



Author's Response:

I do love him too...he's just so accepting of them...oh, and Esme's cookies help too!

Glad you enjoyed VAMPIRE TOSSING...maybe it should be an Olympic sport!

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

Aww, so close to the end!  I'll be very sad to see your story go :-(  Any plans for another story after this?

As I re-read this chapter, the bit about baseball made me wonder who would win in a vampire vs. werewolf baseball game!  I can just imagine the boys phasing mid-field to catch a ball ;-)

Excellent chapter!  Looking forward to everyone getting their happily ever after ... assuming that's what happens next! :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks, darlin'!

I've actually got DRAGON STONES....KNIGHTS OF HONOR....HUNTERS' PARADISE....all going now!  KOH is on here...and the other two will get put up after GE is done...

There will definitely be a HEA...I even have one planned out for Jacob!

Kathie

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

YEA!!  Seth is the best non-vamp character and I've always loved him.  I'm glad he gets to be included for a little bit.



Author's Response:

He really is, isn't he?  He gets a bit more *air time* in the next chapter too...

Thanks for reading...and those lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

Good chapter! I'm glad the wolves decided to help! Can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Whew!  Me too!  LOL...They really need to help because it will help ALL of them...

Thanks so much for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

Thank you for putting Seth in this story. I love him and you captured his goofy openness to Edward and the rest of the family. I am not looking forward to this story ending. I really enjoy reading it.



Author's Response:

You are welcome...he is such a cutie!  And so goofy! 

Thanks so much for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

Seth is the best wolf- probably because he phased when he was young enough to think of it as an adventure.

Author's Response:

That may be it...I do love Seth...he's my favorite!

He'll get a bit more time in this story...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Ooh! Great chapter! I loved the bit at the end from Jake's POV. And Edward's POV was really cool. I liked his first reaction to the mind-reading. Nice. Thanks for updating. =)



Author's Response:

You are very welcome!  I'm hoping that the next chapter might be up tonight...I've already uploaded it...

Thanks for the review...and the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I saw the two that they showed at Comic Con while there and I saw the French version of this one.  I am still Team Edward!!!= )  Not much a 17 year old can do for me! LOL  Yes, Taylor is the one that lives near me. = )



Author's Response:

MY 16 y/o says that she'll be marrying him at some point...LOL!

I am also TEAM EDWARD...but sure can LOOK at TAYLOR...I think that I'm more team TAYLOR than Team JACOB....LOL

He actually appears to be a really nice kid...Peter (Carlisle) seems the same...NICE people...

Kathei

Reviewer: Thank God For Deliverance (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

gasp! no way... you cannot make a space rock land on edward's head. gasp! (again) lol. that sounds interesting. lol. i cant wait for the next chapter and that outtake. and there's no way i could write as good as you. puh-leeze. lol. :D

Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Hey Kathie:

I truly don't have much to say, only that this chapter was awesome, as always. And that I really hope that the updates were coming in faster. But, as much as I would love it, I guess quality comes before quantity and in that note, I encourage you to take as much time as you need. But please, don't leave us hanging too long either. I send you lots of love, and I'm very glad that you enjoyed your vacations.

The Best of Lucks:

Aly     

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Aly! 

Alas, updates can only come as fast the validating betas can get to them...BUT I heard that the next chapter should be up TODAY!

I've got it written through the 37th chapter...and have started the epilogue...

Kathie

Reviewer: sarky_devotchka (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

I"m so very happie that im finally catching up with story! :)



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it!  Next chapter should be up here today...

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: sarky_devotchka (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

This was an amazing chapter!

Reviewer: larisbell (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

u hav 2 write more and i cant wait to read it  tell me if u update



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading larisbell!  I heard that my next chapter would be up TODAY...I'm hoping so!

Kathie

Reviewer: darkdemongirl (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

love the house you did a great job picking it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  My kids wanted to take a vacation there...me too! 

Hope you liked the rest of the story...

Kathie

Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Dang!  I need more!!!!!!!  I hope you update soon! = )



Author's Response:

I heard that the next chapter may be up...TODAY!  I hope so too!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Awesome, as always!



Author's Response:

Ah, thanks, sconnolly318!  I appreciate the stars too!

I think the next chapter may be up today!  Crossing my fingers...

Kathie

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

I know I've fallen off the commenting bandwagon, but this story is still as fabulous as ever!!

 

I'm seriously on the edge of my seat. Will the wolves seriously punish the Cullens for turning Emmett and Edward?! Seriously? I'll beat them up.



Author's Response:

That's okay, sweetie!  Ah, the wolves...they really ARE the wild card, aren't they?  I'm holding out FAITH that they will do the right thing!

Next chapter should be up TODAY!

Kathie

Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Your daughter should be boiled in oil for being Team Jacob!LOL  He lives near me by the way and I am still and always will be, TEAM EDWARD!!!!! = )

Glad to see Mick St. John found another job! = )   I sure do miss him on TV.  I will definitely watch Alex McLaughlin's new series though!

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL....my daughter was walking by when I read this review....She yelled...LOL

So, who lives near you?  Taylor?  Swoon....have you seen the new trailer? 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SvkaCRl3D0s

I like Mick too!  And I'm hoping that his new series is a good one...

Kathie

Reviewer: Thank God For Deliverance (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

it was great. i totally cant wait for the next chapter... and i'm STILL waiting on the astroids. I'm jk. jk. :D



Author's Response:

LOL...my daughter had a lovely ASTEROID moment today...told me ALL about the outtake I could write...sigh...LOLOLOL  It involved a space rock knocking on E's head....

I really do need to write that...or you could!

I'm hoping that the next chapter is up...TODAY!  We'll cross our fingers....

Kathie

Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

Dang, I certainly missed a lot while my comp was in limbo hell/my life was a'sploding, didn't I?  xD

I loved the game of Capture the Flag (oh, Em, you are so adorkable  xD) and how you're incorporating the nomads; I'm really looking forward to how you spin their involvement.  Also loved the change (both perspectives - nice idea on the ice bath!), though I will admit I'm a bit curious.  Are you planning on faking Edward's death (for his celebrity), or is he really going to try to be a faceless celeb now?  I would have thought faking the death would be easier, but eh.  I guess it could work out both ways.  Also: love the control you're giving Ed/how he's handling his gift.  I just love how easy-going your Edward is and that it's a trait that's continued through his change; it's a nice difference to the Emo!Ed we saw in the books but still very plausible, given how you've set him up.

I do love that you're including the wolves (I'll be the first to say I'm not always a big Jake fan, but I do like the wolves in general), too.  My only thing is Jake's voice sounded off.  I would say maybe it's just because he's a bit older (as you've increased the ages a bit on the Cullens, so it's logical to assume the pack would be older, too), but you noted that the pack voices still sounded young, so I'm guessing he's still teenagerish?  Still, going from his original character/voice, I can't see him using words like "aback" or saying something had been a "fantastic fight".  Jake's more gruff, laid back, and crude; not quite Emmett-crude, but crude enough (just take a loot at his chapter titles in BD).  You make him sound more sophisticated, older, and...just a bit not-Jake.  It's only a bit of POV-writing at the end of this last chapter, I know, but it still threw me off a bit.  =/

Other than that, I loved the last few chapters.  This is definitely still one of my favorite AUs.  C=

~ Ver



Author's Response:

What a lovely LONG review!  Thanks so much! 

I have an idea about how Edward can still keep playing, but be hidden too...it will work out.  Having Bella, who is already a shield, is very helpful with Edward's gift...he gets the BREAK that SM's E didn't get...I'm glad that you think he is still plausible...he seems to be staying true to himself.  Although he is going to have a bit of angst over human blood...but I have a plan for that too!  Ah, the plans!

Jake is a bit older...AND the Alpha this go round...uh oh...he MAY have used words that were a bit beyond his age...sigh...I'll have to work on that!  He's going to get a bit more chit chat in the Epilogue...we may even see him IMPRINT...mwahaha...

Thanks, so much for reading!  I head that Chapter 36, Preparations, may actually get validated today!  Hope so...

Kathie

Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

this story is so good. thankyou for writing it. i can't wait for more. please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, gabby871!  I wrote for me, but it tickles me so much when others enjoy it too...

I heard that the next chapter would be up...TODAY!  I'm hoping so!

Kathie

Reviewer: ellie (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I absolutely love this story! Will the end include a confrontation with the Volturi because that would be awesome :-)

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

I loved Edward's speech and Jacob's pov was interesting and authentic. Can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Emma!  THAT is why he changed after all...well, and that he wanted to be with Bella forever...

Glad you liked Jacob's POV...he's still cocky, but not blinded by love for Bella...I like that!

I heard that the next chapter might be up today!

Kathie

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