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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: missymarieb (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

issue: maybe a double personality...why do i get the feeling that "mama" is a figmanent of her delusinal mind?

Well i just started reading your story, its great so far. Definately a very original story line. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!  Ah, the truth will be known soon...aren't you glad you can click NEXT? 

Hope you enjoy the rest, missymarieb!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Yeah it is time to take action. 



Author's Response:

My daughter said that...and she was right! 

But uh oh...such action...sigh...at least you can click NEXT right away!

Kathie

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

I have been following your story for the last month or so, and I am sorry to say I am horrible about making sure I reivew, so this is probably the first I will be saying anything. Your story is well written and a lot happened. I like the reversal stories like this, but a lot of times it just follows the same Twilight plotline too closely. I like how you did this and I like that they are older and you had your own story line. I have enjoyed reading this story and I can't wait for the epilogue. The only request that I have is please make sure that you are including an update on Jess, Mike, and the baby, I thought they were good characters. Also, I would love to see how they explain Edward's absense/death, sometimes people leave that out, it doesn't really bother me, but it leaves everything covered. Again, great story, thanks for letting me read it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your lovely review...I'm glad that you liked the changes I made...

There will definitely be more of the Newtons in the epilogue...and just what Edward's life is going to be like as a vampire...and whether he will be IN or OUT of the spotlight...

Thanks again, for reading, reviewing...and the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Yes I thought someone would be kidnapped and was pissed that crazy Lauren would be able to take someone from a vampire.  I was pleasently surprised. 

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

I enjoyed the fight scene and where the wolves were getting to know the Cullens .



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, mcamastow!  I like the wolves and Cullens...together! 

I appreciate your support...

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

warm linen and vanilla. yum. can we add brown sugar. or cocoa?  Uhm.



Author's Response:

Sure...you can add those flavors too!  I think we can all agree that he smells YUMMY!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Even though she's his best friend to Jess.  He sounds more like a boyfriend in his emotions. 



Author's Response:

The three of them were really close...Edward, Mike and Jessica...after his parents died, I think that he leaned on the TWO of them even more...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

I agree with your daughter she does look more like Victoria.  Does Dr. Morrow still work in Seattle.  I'm in need of an OB, and I'm not above moving from Tennesse for Carlise *cough* *wink* Dr. Morrow. 



Author's Response:

Another reader found a much better painting from the time frame, but I had already used THIS one for material in the story...dang!

LOL...Dr. Morrow is an ob/gyn in FLORIDA, do you want to move there?  He was so sweet...and HOT...and I liked his wife too.. ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

I loved this story! I'm brand new to fan-fic, so I missed the Indies, but this story was fantastic! Thank you!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you enjoyed it!

I was so thrilled to be nominated...and to be in the final 10...very cool indeed...

Thanks for reading AND reviewing...and those stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

You know I me some Em.  I know Robward is number one, but I have a had time choosing Em or Jake as number 2.  No Jake is this story so I'm guessing you're Team Edward.  I'm Team Edzterland. 



Author's Response:

I am team Edward...and Team Seth...and Team Taylor...LOL

I do like Jacob, just not with Bella...!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

pshyco...cue music



Author's Response:

Exactly! She really is nuts...with ISSUES!

Kathie

Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

tears came to my eyes when I was reading about Esme and how she is such a wonderful mother figure



Author's Response:

Ah...that's so nice to read!  I'm glad that you enjoyed the Esme and Wolves...they have a part in the epilogue for sure...

Thanks, so much for reading and your support!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

duhm duhm duhm duhm.  where does edward remember bella from?  was it a sweet dream or a beautiful nightmare (beyounce)?  I think the stalker will be Lauren (i see her as kinda helpless).  I thought victoria would be an excellent stalker. 



Author's Response:

When I came up with the story, I actually had Victoria in that place...but then the story went in another direction...it amazes me how it does that...LOL

They are really CHATTY too...much more so than the 20 chapters I envisioned when I started!

Kathie

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Hey!

I'm so pleased with how it ended! Totally satisfied.... but an epilougue wouldn't hurt!

I love this story so much! I'm totally up for a sequel, but I know how hard the fight scenes are, i have to write one for a future chapter and i'm terrified :) but i;m positive you could pull it off!

I love Esme and the wolves! That is so dang cute!!! I would love to see some more interaction with her! It's soooo sweet! and how she made them cookies,ADORABLE!

That was absolutely wonderful and i couldn't be happier i found the story! It was great! I've always wondered what could happen if the roles were reversed and now i'm totally pleased to know it would have ended exactly the same... LOVE! Just not that horribly annoying Renesme... yay for no renesme!

That was great great great great great!!!!!!!!!! Wow this is like, the longest review i've ever left...

I can't believe it didn't win! I voted on like three different computers! Dad gum!

Well, that was soo amazing! From start to finish i was totally thrilled!!!

You did Abso-freaking-lutely perfect!

Thanks for this story,

Mj/Catherine



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you have enjoyed this, Catherine!  LOL...there will definitely be an Epilogue...

I think that Esme and the wolves is one of my favorite parts...and COOKIES!

LOL that you are happy that there is no Renesmee...but the epilogue isn't done yet...*evil laugh*....LOL

I appreciate your support so much!  Thank you!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

thanks for sparing the whole rehash from another perspective.  folks are going overboard witht that.



Author's Response:

You are welcome!  I don't like that either...it's BORING...BUT, I did want his reaction to them...and it wont' happen again... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

I am truly sad to see this story end, but so grateful for finding it in the first place and getting the chance to experience your talent !

I would love to see a sequel in any form --- a visit to Italy, a run-in with some unidentifieds, heck, even Edward and Bella staring at each other with love couldn't be too bad!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I've actually got the epilogue started...it's been hard to write it...because that means that it really IS over....LOL

I could have EPILOGUE 1.0....then 2.0....then 3.0!!!!

Thanks for reading...really!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

i was wondering about the sense of recognition



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

The answer to that will be up shortly...

Kathie

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Great story.  I love how some of the wolves hve adopted Esme as mom.  I'm glad that you didn't allow James to do any damage



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Gelsamina!  The wolves do love Esme...and she gets to be a MOM again...

I really didn't want James to get the upper hand here...it was 3 against 18...the odds were really WITH the Vampires and the Wolves...didn't want him to be able to take them on *one on one*!

Kathie

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

what a great story. I loved it!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you loved it Suz!

Thanks for reading, reviewing...and the stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

great part



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing Emz8om!

Kathie

Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Thanks for sharing this story. You have done a wonderful job. I would like to see how they handle the death of human Edward especially for Jessica & Mike in the epilogue, please!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading aylag!  There will be some closure in the epilogue...for sure!  AND more Mike and Jessica...

Kathie

Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

I love Seth too so I'm glad to see he will get to be friends with Edward. Edward throwing Emmett was perfect! Now I'm off to read next chapter...

Author's Response:

I did love that too...glad you found it enjoyable too!  I loved that Em threw HIM too!

Kathie

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

That was INCREDIBLE!! Your fight scenes did not disappoint at all, contrary to what you said. :) Volturi scenes are good ideas, since I really dislike how it ended in BD, they walked away unscathed when it was their very intention to destroy Cullen family because they felt threatened. Damn bullies. They need to be taken down a notch or two!

And oh, don't think I didn't miss the fact that this Edward and Bella are so different from the ones from canon in the sense that during the fight, they trust each other. They will be on look out for each other, of course... but they won't prevent each other from fighting just to "keep them safe". What a refreshing change!

And the wolves... ah yes, I thought of what I want to see in epilogue now. I'll like to see what the new treaty is between the wolves and the Cullens, and their lifestyle in the future, of course. It'll be a treat to see the wolves coming and going at the Cullen residence, chatting and sneaking off Esme's cookies while laughing and joking with each other. That'll be pretty amazing to see (should you choose to write that, of course)!

And how about how Edward deals with human scent? How about his music career? The Denali coven? I know Tanya promised to lay off Edward... but how well can she resist when Bella's not around? And can Edward fight her succubus charms off all by himself?

Good grief, I just bombarded you with all kinds of things... it might be a bit too much to fit into one epilogue... but whatever you choose, I will love it. Doesn't matter what. I'm in love with your story, and am sad to see it already ending... I'll miss it so much! Once again, you're an incredible writer and would love to see what other stories you're going to come up with next - because there's no way you can stop writing now! :D

And thank you... so much for writing. You must have expended so much effort and thought into this, and for that I really appreciate it.



Author's Response:

Ah, HeavenDust...I'm going to print out this review...and put it at the end of my printed copy of GE...and read it often!

I'm glad that you thought the fight scene was good...I really didn't want them to get away to come back and terrorize them another day...and good heavens! It was 18 to 3!  They were never going to get better odds!  LOL  I do think that JANE should be taken out at some point...I really hate that girl...and I think that Dakota Fanning is going to play her very well...

He did trust Bella during the fight...I should have gone into that a little better...but he realizes that he is the newborn, and she is the BODY GUARD...and he trusted her...

I've got the treaty meeting hammered out too...There does need to be some changes!  And I don't think that anything will keep those young wolves away from Esme now...some of them really needed a mother figure...and she fills that so well.  Not to mention that she is becoming a great cook...with Emmett's help... ;)

I also have a plan for Edward and blood...Carlisle is going to be a great help there...

You DID give me lots of great ideas...have actually thought of having Epilogue 1.0...then 2.0....3.0....LOL

I have appreciated YOUR support so much! Thanks so much!

I do have a couple of other stories at ffn... under the same author name...and I have some other ideas too...

Thanks again...pixle cookies AND chocolate for you!

Kathie

Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

i want to read about jessica and mike and their son, how they and edward relationship continue or if it dosent...what about edward and the humans ? and so on and so on... this is story that i enjoy reading about and its so sad to see it end...keep up the good work.. ; )



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely review rosela!  There will be some moments with Edward and the Newtons in the epilogue...got THAT portion blocked out already!

AND his blood lust...got an idea for that too...

Kathie

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

It's a beautiful, wonderful story, Kathie.  I love it every time I see it and am so jazzed to have it on my Kindle, too.  :)

And we're all still waiting for the epilogue. I refuse to make suggestions.  lol  I trust your imagination...  It's a GOOD ONE!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much LJ!  And I hope you enjoy it on your Kindle...

I did have another thought on the epilogue last night...and I hope to make progress this weekend!

Kathie

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