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Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

wow what an awsome ending,,, great story bravo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, vamppy!  I'm working on the epilogue now...

Glad you enjoyed this...I had such a good time writing it...

Kathie

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

The sequel idea could work, but you need tons of description for that, maybe perhaps a co-author?



Author's Response:

Are YOU volunteering?

Thanks for the lovely stars, Robert Cullen...

Kathie

Reviewer: jlmann (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Wow...that was cold blooded! made me think of Misery when cathy bates goes crazy with the sledgehammer. Good story!



Author's Response:

Cool!  That was what I was going for...LOL

But, I hadn't ever read MISERY, just heard about it...

Hope you enjoy the rest of GUARDING EDWARD...thanks for reading AND reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

D'aaaaawwww.  I love Seth so much; he is so adorkable.  I loved the interaction with Esme and all the wolves in this chapter, actually; the scenes were so sweet.  (And I love Seth's "She smells like pumpkin pie and mashed potatoes and turkey!  She smells like a mom!" line.  <3)

The fight, to be honest, did seem to go a little fast/a little rushed.  Great build-up to it, with James's mind slipping into the insanity at the indignation of losing another prey, but after that it's like...attack, block, rippy time.  There was all this build-up, in this chapter and the ones before, and then a snap and the fight's over.  (Granted, like you said: maybe fight scenes aren't your strong point.  Still seemed a little rushed, though.)  And at the same time, given how the fighting started (and their preparedness for it), it does seem plausible that it could be over that fast.  Long in short, I'm wishy-washy on the fight scene.  xD

Overall, though, nice conclusion.  It felt like the natural stopping place, and it works for the fic.  Very nice job, and excellent, excellent fic.  C=



Author's Response:

Another SETH fan...glad you enjoyed the Esme interaction...she is such a MOM and those boys/pups could use that I think.

Ah, the fight scene...LOL...in its defense...it was 18 to 3...10 wolves and 8 vampires...who had the advantage of KNOWING what they were thinking.  I could have dragged out the ripping and tearing I suppose... ;)  I always wondered why the Cullens didn't just fight them in SM's universe...BUT that would have ruined her arc for sure...no James drama later...

It's also why I am leary of taking on the Volturi in a sequel...as the Cullens would be greatly outnumbered, although not out-matched.

I'm glad you liked it anyway... ;)

And I hope to have the epilogue up, with some loose ends taken care of, in the next two weeks.

Thanks, so much, for reading and your review.  I do appreciate it!

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

I have loved reading your story. I look forward to the epilogue!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your support over the course of this story Sheryl!

I'm working on the epilogue now...

Kathie

Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Gah... *shudders* Have you lost it?! Now, cause of that psycho he'll probably never play again. I have truly loved this so far. But now I feel sick with fear & grief. Fine work, Draven

Author's Response:

LOl...I bet you were very happy that you could click NEXT, weren't you?

Have faith...

And thanks for reading AND reviewing...

Kathie

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Those last two lines=LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE.

I can't wait for the epilogue.

Seriously. MORE SOON!



Author's Response:

Ah....thank you sweetie!

Glad you enjoyed it!  Shhhh....I'm actually typing right now!

Kathie

Reviewer: vic1 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Fantastic, absolutly loved it. Would be nice to know if Edward ever manages a relationship with his Godson?!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  He is actually going to get to *see* Michael Edward in the epilogue...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  He is actually going to get to *see* Michael Edward in the epilogue...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: sethschick (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Well I am sad to read the final chapter! It was brilliant and yet I still wanted you to keep writing! Its always sad to have something good come to an end. I can't wait to read the epilogue and more stories to come. Thanks so much kat for adding seth to the story! That just made me giggle! Talk to you later, sethschick.

Author's Response:

Thank you darlin'!  Had to have some more SETH for you...well, and me too!

I hope to get the epilogue up in the next two weeks...

I did just post DRAGON STONES...but it hasn't made it through validation yet...but it IS at ffn...

Kathie

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

It's good how you tie up the story.  It has a happy ending.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!  I really had to have that happy ending...and I'll tie up other loose ends in the epilogue...

Kathie

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

sad to have another favourite story ending, but happy that no one has been lost in this one (of note, anyways hehe)

I guess my only suggestion for the epilogue would be Edward playing the compositions he was thinking up during this chapter... perhaps finding a way to release them as a soundtrack of sorts. Oh, maybe there could be a goth-classical "group" that no one knows much about that Edward and the Cullens are behind the scenes on, releasing albums to huge acclaim hehe

(hmm... sounded somewhat better in my head, but I think I got the idea/concept across :S )

 



Author's Response:

LOL...yes, I couldn't lose any of the ones that we like the most!

Edward will definitely be playing in the epilogue...although I rather like that *goth-classical group* thing!  Maybe they could try that too!

Hmmm...I can actually see something along those lines...now you've done it!  LOL

Thanks, Daylen, for reading and reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: Elli_goes_into_the_Twilight (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

the mother?  this story is realy damn good. good on ya!  epic high five!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading...and that is an EXCELLENT guess!

Kathie

Reviewer: hermhogwarts55 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

This is amazing! I can't wait to see the epilogue if you still write one!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, hermhogwarts55!  I am actually writing on the epilogue right now...hope to get it done in the next two weeks...

Kathie

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

I love it when you update! I'm going to read the mect chapter this instant!  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review and the lovely stars, Lespino01!

I hope you enjoyed the next chapter too!

Kathie

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Another fabulous chapter, Kathie!

I'm so sad to see this story coming to an end!

I can't wait for the epilogue!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, SarahBella!  I really hate to see it end too...sigh...

BUT I am working on the epilogue right now...

Kathie



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, SarahBella!  I really hate to see it end too...sigh...

BUT I am working on the epilogue right now...

Kathie

Reviewer: Jackiechancleta (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I love this story, I started reading it a few days ago.. and could not stop. The twist on using some of the same dialogue is wonderful. Cannot wait for the epilogue. Thanks for adding Emmet and Jasper alot more to the storyline, Jasper is my favorite character. Rosalie's is so likeable in this story also, great.



Author's Response:

Thank you! So glad that you have enjoyed it...and my twisting of the dialog...

We really needed to have more Em and Jazz in here...I do love them...Rosalie is in a much happier place in this story...makes her easier to be around, for sure!

Kathie

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Thank you for sharing your amazing story with the world.  It is a very brave thing indeed to open up your heart and invite feedback!

Congratulations and I look forward to your next fiction!



Author's Response:

You are very welcome, maiseypattinson...It was so much fun to write this story...and the feedback has been such a blessing to me.  I've actually only gotten a very few *flames* in the way of reviews...and that delete button hasn't had to be used but TWICE...LOL

I've actually got another story here, KNIGHTS OF HONOR...and a couple over at fanfiction.net still under the name of katmom...

Thanks, again, for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Calling_Siren (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Really? The Cullens taking the Volturi down?...That's a great idea: I have to admit that I thought about writing something like that, but until now I've been just reading a lot...Well, if you want help or ideas for that, just tell me! :) It can be the way for me to break the ice! ;)

Author's Response:

I may have to have a chat with you about that...LOL...some said that my *fight* scene was a bit *rushed*...so not sure that I could actually write a drawn out Volturi fight...

BUT I do have lots of ideas that I'm working through for the epilogue...hope to have it out in the next couple of weeks...

Writing fan fiction is so much fun...and the feedback is WONDERFUL...you really should give it a shot...I'd be glad to read over your work, if you'd like...

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

I know it would be so unfair for Bella to dual Lauren, but Tanya is a vampire.  I don't care if they are cousins.  She has been waiting for Edward for over 90 years and Bella should so kick her ASS!



Author's Response:

LOL...another one on the ANTI Team Tanya club!

She really is just too much...but she is so much fun to despise...!!!

Thanks so much for reading AND reviewing...your reviews have really made me laugh...thank you!

Kathie

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

I'm glad the fight scene happened as it did. The efficiency was great!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you thought so!  It WAS 18 against 3...the odds were in their favor...and with Edward hearing their thoughts about what should/could happen...I think they were right in their decision to STOP them...

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I'm also wondering with Edward being so famous how will that play out if Bella turns him.  It would be hard to hide him in public, and with technology now adays people could access his images for years to come?



Author's Response:

Ah, I do have a PLAN in place.... have faith!

I'm all about the HEA's...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

THe house is a slice of heaven.  Thanks for including the visuals. 



Author's Response:

You are very welcome...We just took a vacation through CO...and I kept wondering if I should look that place up!  Did see one very similar in Idaho!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

more kisses..and lemons please



Author's Response:

Ah, there will be more kisses...and some near misses...

Alas, this story is rated *only* PG 13...my girls insisted...LOL

BUT, my KNIGHTS OF HONOR, which is also on this site, has a lemon...

AND I have an account at ffn, same user name, that has another lemon story...HUNTERS' PARADISE...

Kathie

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Thanks for the ride! :-)



Author's Response:

You are very welcome!

I should have the epilogue up in the next couple of weeks...

Kathie

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

It was a great place to end it, although I'm sad to see it coming to an end. Can't wait to read the epilogue! :)  Brandy



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your support, Brandy!

I should have the epilogue up in the next couple of weeks...

Kathie

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