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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Epilogue 1.0 Edward

Very sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Epilogue 4.0 Emmett's Christmas

I loved this point of view I think the most out of them... I like Emmett, and I love how you wrote his point of view --- hes so happy and almost childlike and its just perfect! Can't wait for Edward's point of view =)



Author's Response:

He really is, isn't he?  Such a sweetie...

Thanks for the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

The fight scene was well written.  The words built the action but I could still pciture in my mind exactly what was going on. 

Would love to hear the music for Alice's movements!

Computer is being crazy you may get two of these!



Author's Response:

TWILIGHTED was acting weird! 

Glad you enjoyed the fight scene, I've been told it's not my *strong suit*....LOL

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

The fight scene was well written.  The words built the action but I could still pciture in my mind exactly what was going on. 

Would love to hear the music for Alice's movements!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the fight scene...I wish I could hear the music too!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

The tossing was great.  I also enjoyed Seth.  Another fantastic Chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the TOSSING! That was my favorite part!

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 35~~New Life~~

I wondered how Jacob would work into the story. 



Author's Response:

I debated...but he really needed to be in there...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 34~~Changes~~

Loved the way he woke up!!!!!!!!

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that!  It was rather quiet...at least he didn't want to kill everyone...just wanted to KISS Bella!

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 33~~We Do~~

My favorite line: "Welcome Home. Mrs. Masen".



Author's Response:

Thank you! I rather liked that myself...MRS. MASEN...sigh...

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~

I like this plan!



Author's Response:

Good! Wedding planning...so much fun...

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 30~~Roommates~~

This chapter is just plain cool!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

K

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 29~~Drawbacks~~

Awesome.  I am so glad that Bella is happy that Edward wants to be changed!   Loved Emmett not being playful and being serious.  I like the one on one interaction with the family members.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the family interaction...I can't decide who I like the best...so everyone gets just a bit of POV....LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 27~~Options~~

I loved that he did not take a long sigh or pinch the bridge of his nose or run his hands through his hair when he asked the last question.  There is no doubt...in his mind...at that moment about that question.

Very well written.



Author's Response:

He's a LOT less *angsty* in this story...I just can't write angst...LOL

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

Wonderful, wonderful way to bring out Edward's gift.  I have always wanted to explore Eleazer a little more!

Thanks for ignoring the typos in my reviews.  I should proofread, before I hit submit, yet another reason you are the writer.



Author's Response:

Laughing about the typos! I do that too!

Glad you enjoyed finding out about Edward's gift...YOU should write an Eleazar fic!

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Your family is funny!  I love the rug joke! 

This sounds like it is going to get really interesting (not as though it hasn't been interesting...but you know what I mean)!  Loved the way you names Tanya's gift.

Could you imagine being kissed silly by Edward?!?!



Author's Response:

Actually I used my husband to get that kiss...and imagined him as Edward...LOL...he said he didn't mind... ;)

Glad you like Tanya...she's *something*...

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

The description of the dream was great.  I am guessing Jess and Mike are the visitors but she maybe to far along to travel....guess I will just click submit and then back to story to find out.

The "I love you" sequence was very original.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Glad you liked it!

Ah, that submit button is a GOOD thing... ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Epilogue 3.0 Rosalie

Loved the immortal muse - glad Rosalie has taken a shine to the wolves! Loved thsi chapter, just like all ur chapters! FINALLY up to date =[ Ten Stars =]

NIAIS



Author's Response:

Thanks, NIAIS!  Glad you enjoyed it!

I'm working on EMMETT'S CHRISTMAS right now...should be up this week...

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Didnt see that coming at all!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad I could surprise you!

K

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Epilogue 2.0...Alice

Loved the vision of the past =]

Maybe your sequel could be about Alice and her neices relationship - and she find out about vamps........ ten stars

NIAIS



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the walk through the past...I think that we will be seeing her niece again...in one of the million or so epilogue's I have planned...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Epilogue 1.0 Edward

hee hee loving th way the wolves and vaps are getting on and how Esem takes the wolves under her wing so to speak - LOVE the peacefullness and friendship between cullens and wolves =] Ten Stars

NIAIS



Author's Response:

They are gettting along...I think Esme's cookies and Emmett's chef skills MAY have a bit to do with it!  LOL

Thanks for the stars too!

Kathie

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~

Loving the wolves saying they would protect eseme- reading the rest this is b4 the end of chappie

Glad the fight was quick and someone had esme's back - wil you tell us the reason why Embry changed later than seth? You never said =]

I can't think of an idea for a sqeual but know you will be added to my favs cause i like your writing! Ten stars =]

NIAIS



Author's Response:

I guess I just decided that Seth was the baby...LOL

They really were protecting Esme...they do love her so...

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I really enjoyed the belly laughs!  I am glad that it seemed a little lighter than what I am used too.  I very fun read.



Author's Response:

Glad you found some humor here...hard not to with Emmett in the room!  LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

That house is so sweet. 

Was there a real discussion between Bella and Edward about her going to Colorado? 

I enjoy the details that you have thrown in for example: letting us know about Angela.  It just makes things tidy.

I really should be working but......



Author's Response:

Get back to work! The story will still be here...LOL

Yes, they did decide to go there together...he couldn't be alone, driving, etc. for some time....

Glad you liked the house...it is lovely!

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

I love Edward and Seth being friends - and i love seth full stop =] Ten stars =] I;m gonna miss it alot too =[  Is there a sequel??

NIAIS



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying Seth!  Welcome to the fan club! 

Ah, no sequel...but I'm working on Epilogue 4.0...Emmett's Christmas... ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Awww! Edward....what a male question.  Not thinking of anything but the kiss!  Love it.  Loved Carlisle's reaction as well.

 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that!  Ah, a kiss...

I do love Carlisle's reaction too...leaving her to explain...

K

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Goodness, Bella has good timing!  I just hope Bella remembers there is a big difference between a Savior and a Guardian.



Author's Response:

Her timing WAS pretty much perfect!  Good thing too...

K

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