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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Epilogue 6.0 Esme

I love Esme! Good job.

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Epilogue 6.0 Esme

I loved Esme's perspective - she's such a kind and loving person.

I can't wait to read your new story! Going to check it out now = )

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Haha!  I love the A/N about the food at the hospital being THAT good!  It's actually brought tears to my eyes from laughing! 

Now, OMG!  What do I wanna bet that Bella sat for that portrait, or the painter saw her and painted her portrait without her knowing.  Then Bella and the Cullens had to go and buy up all of his works so that this very thing wouldn't happen.  Only they obviously missed one, and it just so happens to have been hanging in the Masen's home all this time.  Poor Bella, talk about crappy luck. 

I love the security at the hospital and how you tied it in to one of their previous cases, the baby ring. 

Thanks for your responses to my reviews, they make me smile almost as much as the story does.  I'm really dreading going to bed b/c I know I won't be done.  At least I can dream about your characters. 



Author's Response:

LOL...it always make me laugh when I get MORE comments on the A/N's than the story....lololol

The food really was THAT good...LOL...

Excellent guess on the painting!  Very good indeed...

Security really has gotten better at hospitals...unfortunately it's because babies WERE being stolen...sigh...

Now, you really want to stop reading BEFORE the HARD chapter...yes, this fluffy bit of fic has a HARD couple of chapters....I believe it is 14...you might want to stop before THAT one...unless you can stay up for three more... ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Lauren Mallory is NUTS!!!!!!  Completely off her freakin rocker and I don't think she could ever find her way back to sanityville.  Poor Jessica!  She doesn't deserve any of this, none of them do.  I love that Bella is the one with the medical degrees this time around.  She really is an amazing person and so good with humans.  Her job (and Emmett and Rosalie's) has made it where she can't really be standoffish.  It's a nice change.  To see more than just Carlisle really interacting with humans, being "among the living" so to speak.

Great job at building the tension of the story and giving us an idea of how far Lauren is willing to take this craziness.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Nuts...I was going for that, guess I succeeded! It was so much fun writing NUTS...made my family worried...LOL

They are a bit more "human" here...they've had practice...

Lovely stars! Thank you!

Kathie

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

Kathie,

Yeah, just more proof that S.M's characters and now yours are so not real.  How many guys would actually be smart enough to let go of the macho act and admit they needed help.  Not many that I know. 

And might I say bonding over cars will do it every time!

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Uh, yeah...you've totally tapped into the mind of a serial killer here.  I wonder how much Criminal Minds you watch?!?  Very creepy.  The whole "Mama" thing really throws me though.  How psycho is that!!!!!  And for once I want to say "NOT JESSICA"!!!  I really like Jessica in this. 

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

Kathie,

You could keep me entertained for days on end with your writing!  This chapter is fantastic!  You have completely created a demented stalker, and that's before even reading their POV!  REally though, you have Emmett pegged!  I just love your Emmett and I enjoy that Rosalie is more positive and kindhearted while still being the same character that we all love. 

I must say, I really appreciate you not listening to your daughters for once and having an asteroid kill off all the vampires...that'd be no fun at all.  :(

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Epilogue 6.0 Esme

Loved this story and I love the Epiloges of different veiwpoints too! I've allready discoverd your new story Immesion and have it in my Fav list as well! Congratulations on being runner up! I voted for you LOL!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Epilogue 6.0 Esme

Esme is wonderful! She has such a big heart. Great chapter!

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Epilogue 6.0 Esme

This chapter was so very Esme! I loved reading it. You captured her completely and I enjoyed reading about the pack. Thanks for this.  I can't wait to hear Jasper's story next. 

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Epilogue 6.0 Esme

WOOO! Omigah Esme is just adorable! I squealed! Lol, soooo cute! And gotta love that Seth, he's just the sweetest thing! That was amazing, and Mama E was just.... OOOO you are amazing!!!



Author's Response:

Thank, MJBabe!  Esme never gets enough air time...had to fix that...I do love SETH!

Thanks for the stellar stars too!

Kathie

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

Hmmm...has Edward "met" Bella in his dreams?  That's the only guess I've got right now.  And once again you had me laughing with this chapter...Edward's thinking about groupies, his misinterpretation with the People article, and of course the Robert Pattison mention.  I also noticed you threw in a couple of generations of music....Rolling Stones to the Jonas Brothers.  hehe

I can't wait to find out the mystery of where Edward has seen Bella before...



Author's Response:

That is a good guess, but, alas, wrong!  LOL...BUT it will get cleared up after one of those NEXT buttons... ;D

My girls suggested the Jonas Brothers...they also suggest asteroids killing all the vampires later on, but I didn't listen to them then...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

Kathie,

I do so love having the 'Next' button at my demand.  hehe  A longer chapter overall but very delightful in how the time is passed and material is covered.  I truly do enjoy the laughter that comes when you least expect it, such as Emmett wanting to bring Edward's socks and Alice "fixing" the shirt-dress.  It was nice to hear a bit of backstory of both the  Cullens and Edward.  How all of the Cullens have their own businesses/trades in comparison to the kids simply playing students all the time.  Is this due to the fact that it appears you have made them a small bit older?  (You mentioned Bella appeared to be 20.)  Also, we got to hear a bit of the backstory of Edward but not in the standard way (his telling/her hearing) but via the internet.  A wonderful segway into the trauma he must have experienced at loosing both of his parents at the same time. 

So far I'm enjoying Jessica's character too.  She seems to have a sweet personality and I really love that. 

Looking forward to going on to the next chapter!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Epilogue 6.0 Esme

Aww... Mama Esme and her canine children... :)

Truly, you captured her so beautifully. I enjoy her welcoming the increase of love in her family. The increase of caring and sharing and all the FAMILY that goes with ... family. :)

Heheh.  And Jazz is up next, huh?  *grin* Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Thanks, LJ, for the review and the Stellar Stars!

Canine children...and there were some that thought she was going to be a CAT LADY...LOL

Yes, Jazz is next...he said I could interview him while he wears his BLUE RIDING LEATHERS...Cathair wants to sit in on the interview too...I think we'll be doing it outside, on our deck!

Kathie

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

Another brillant chapter Kathie.  I'm so proud of Bella making the resolve to be bigger than this scent.  To be better than others of her kind.  I also feel for Emmett, when he was telling his story (the way you wrote it) I just ached for him, wanting to wrap him up in my arms and let him know he is still loved.  (Which Esme promptly did for me...)  But the point is that you evoked such emotion from me with his telling.

Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! It was close there...Bella almost had a yummy snack...LOL

Aren't you so glad that you have the NEXT button all ready for you?  I just put up Epilogue 6.0 for this story...so you have LOTS to read!

Emmett's backstory came from SM herself...found it on the TWILIGHT LEXICON...

Kathie

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Kathie,

So great!  I loved the prologue, how she started and the last line of the prologue nearly made me snort my Diet Coke (a HUGE crime)!  Yeah, Emmett would want a cape!  I wouldn't be suprised to find an outtake whith Rosalie going into Emmett's closet and finding a long shiny red cape with the letter Emmett on the back.  Of course Emmett will love his cape and say that the E stands for Excellent or Extraordinary.  hehe

The first chapter is good too.  I loved the part about all the animals they have found!  A great mix of humor and seriousness while still moving the plot along quickly.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There has to be some humor here...LOL...

The cape does come up later on...

Hope you enjoy the rest...

Kathie

Reviewer: goldeneyez (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Oh my word! I'd been leaving you ratings previously but after this chapter I just had to write an actual review. AMAZING! Seriously, I love the idea of Bella being Edward's protector, and how well she handles her attraction to him as opposed to Edward's constant angst about it in Twilight. Beautiful! I really love your portrayal of Bella throughout. You've made her a well rounded character who is becoming more and more real with each chapter. Wonderful! bravo! Okay, I'm done now...i'm on to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Fanfiction worthy of reading is so hard to find, yours is a real treat!



Author's Response:

Oh MY!  Thank you so much!  I'm so happy that GUARDING EDWARD has brought out such lovely emotions....I am rather fond of this one myself!

Thank you so very much, for reading, rating (those stars are lovely) and this wonderful review!

I'm very pleased to say that GUARDING EDWARD was the RUNNER UP in the CUTE CATEGORY in the MYSTIC AWARDS...they were announced 10/18....so that means...yes...SECOND PLACE!!!!

And it was all because of READERS...wow...I'm amazed!

Kathie

Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Epilogue 4.0 Emmett's Christmas

ADORABLE!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed that!

Thanks for reading...and the pretty stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: JerickaRose (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 36~~Preparations~~

Hurray! Team Seth FTW! Okay, not really team Seth... but... whatever. Anyway, I <3 him a lot.

Edward as Wolvie is a win idea. Sorry. I'm slightly obsessed with Wolverine. I hope my first child is a boy so I can name him Logan James. A daughter would be named Laura Rose (X-13, and one of Wolvie's wives). You know, I just realized that's close to Laura Roslin, President of the Colonies. Gosh I'm nerd-tastic.

I was going to be pissed that Jacob showed up in this story at all, but I forgive you because Seth is awesome and the elders decided to be cool about the Cullen's family size.



Author's Response:

Glad that my Jacob meets with your approval...LOL!

Ah, I'm a nerd right along with you since I got who you were talking about!

Yes, Seth is very awesome...I do love the pup...

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: JerickaRose (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Gah! I feel SO sorry for you! Not only do you have to live with someone so hugely Team Jacob... but that person is your daughter! Can't you ground her or something? ^_-  I kidd I kidd.... mostly...

Hubby is hillarious though. I have a strong dislike for Jacob, mostly because of his behaviour. I read a one-shot fic once where Renesmee wanted a dog, and the family reminded her she already had one... and so they went out and got a giant dog house for Jacob. Hillarious.

Okay, so that was all very random. I appologize. I'm super Anti-Tanya... and can't wait to see Bella rip her up and throw her in a fire. lol!



Author's Response:

I know! Team Jacob!  Where did I go wrong?  LOL...but they are all beyond Twilight now...and only going to see NEW MOON because of Taylor...ah well, leaves more Edward for me...

I think you'll enjoy the Tanya moments...

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: JerickaRose (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

I'm loving your story. And I totally giggled when you mentioned Mick. Hottest.Vampire.Ever. Gah. ::fans self:: I'm so sad Moonlight only lasted a season. Ah well.

Back to reading for me! Poor Edward! I've jammed a finger in a door before and wanted to die. I can't imagine someone taking a hammer to my whole hand!



Author's Response:

Ah, Mick...it's too bad that the actor's new show is such a turkey...it would have been nice to look at his face every day!

OUCH on your finger...Poor Edward...yes, that did hurt...a LOT!

Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy the rest!

Kathie

Reviewer: FanFic4SANITY32 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

I normally leave a review when i finish a story, but I had to let you know "Scared of you"!  That was as painful to read as the hammer scene in Misery. I absolutly LOVED IT.  This would make a great T.V. series.  O.K, back to the story.



Author's Response:

That is so nice of you to say so! I'm glad you are enjoying this so much...

Yes, I'm going to copy and paste this into each and every review that I answer today...shameless self promotion you know:
 
Here is the link to the MYSTIC AWARDS...GUARDING EDWARD is up in the CUTE CATEGORY...for a story that makes you feel all fuzzy and warm inside...
 
 
The voting goes through TODAY and I'd really appreciate your vote!
 
Esme will be up next...she wants to brag on her new sons...and their imprints!  She also wants to tell us about how EVERYONE got a little taste of tainted blood...in the name of solidarity...ah, the fun continues!
 
Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing...and voting if you chose to do so!  And for those lovely STARS!
 
Kathie

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Epilogue 5.0 Carlisle

Sorry missed review from before. Loved the chapter.

The blood desensitizing that edward is going threw sounds bad but I think it doing the trick.

Looking forward to more. =-D



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think that the blood thing is working!  Ugh, made me gag to write it!

Yes, I'm going to copy and paste this into each and every review that I answer today...shameless self promotion you know:

 

Here is the link to the MYSTIC AWARDS...GUARDING EDWARD is up in the CUTE CATEGORY...for a story that makes you feel all fuzzy and warm inside...

 

http://themysticawards.webs.com/vote.htm

 

The voting goes through TODAY and I'd really appreciate your vote!

 

Esme will be up next...she wants to brag on her new sons...and their imprints!  She also wants to tell us about how EVERYONE got a little taste of tainted blood...in the name of solidarity...ah, the fun continues!

 

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing...and voting if you chose to do so!

 

Kathie

 

 

Reviewer: mycullenfantasy (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Epilogue 5.0 Carlisle

I loved that, Emmett is highlarious. I told you edward would do well didn't I?

Author's Response:

Yes, you did!  Ugh, Emmett hated tasting it too...and Edward really did, man, um, vampire up!

Yes, I'm going to copy and paste this into each and every review that I answer today...shameless self promotion you know:

 

Here is the link to the MYSTIC AWARDS...GUARDING EDWARD is up in the CUTE CATEGORY...for a story that makes you feel all fuzzy and warm inside...

 

http://themysticawards.webs.com/vote.htm

 

The voting goes through TODAY and I'd really appreciate your vote!

 

Esme will be up next...she wants to brag on her new sons...and their imprints!  She also wants to tell us about how EVERYONE got a little taste of tainted blood...in the name of solidarity...ah, the fun continues!

 

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing...and voting if you chose to do so!

 

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Epilogue 5.0 Carlisle

I loved Carlisle's POV. I can't wait to read Esme's PoV = )



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you enjoyed Carlisle!  Thanks for the stellar rating!

Yes, I'm going to copy and paste this into each and every review that I answer today...shameless self promotion you know:

 

Here is the link to the MYSTIC AWARDS...GUARDING EDWARD is up in the CUTE CATEGORY...for a story that makes you feel all fuzzy and warm inside...

 

http://themysticawards.webs.com/vote.htm

 

The voting goes through TODAY and I'd really appreciate your vote!

 

Esme will be up next...she wants to brag on her new sons...and their imprints!  She also wants to tell us about how EVERYONE got a little taste of tainted blood...in the name of solidarity...ah, the fun continues!

 

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing...and voting if you chose to do so!

 

Kathie

 

 

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