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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

Oooh, I can't wait for Edward's POV! I love that Bella was wearing his shirt as a dress and that Alice had to make it look good! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I loved Bella in Edward's shirt...even though Alice had to FIX it!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

I loved Bella's reaction to Emmett saying that Edward smelled good! This is great!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Yes, our Bella is just a *bit* possessive!  I like her that way...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

Omg!! i can't wait... you're right!! 

i'm addicted!!.. i loved that bella did her little research!!.. and why is edward looking at her with that familiar look??? i'm curious!!! 

awesome!! keep it going!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

He really looks like he recognizes her...but she's sure that she's never met him...she'd be right... ;)

Ah, a mystery...

Kathie 

Reviewer: Joy Moony (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

I like the story-- very intriguing premise and you write well. 

small quibble about coninuity:"“Mr. Cullen, we’ve looked over the information you sent us.  And we all agree that this stalker situation is getting out of hand"

should be "Mr. Masen"



Author's Response:

ARGHHHHH!!!! Dang!  My 12 y/o caught my, what I thought was ONE mistake like that....ARGH, where was she when I was writing this one.....dang...

THANKS SO MUCH...fixing THAT now....LOL!

Want to beta, Joy? ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

Now this chapter is just wonderful.  Bella must be the luckiest vampire on the planet.  I love how she adjusted herself by wearing Edward's shirt.  Alice and her omniprescent fashion sense cracked me up. 

I'll be looking forward into Edward's thoughts.

Ta

Master of teh Boot



Author's Response:

Thank you! I wish I had an Alice in my life too...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raie (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

I am really enjoying your story.  Can't wait to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks Raie...glad you like it.  It's funny, I wrote out the ideas that I wanted to incorporate into this story...but then the characters say things like: Hey!  I want to go here and do this...

So I have to let them...sigh...my children are a bit worried that CHARACTERS talk to me... ;)

Thanks again,

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

I'm really enjoying this and I'm glad their first meeting didn't end up with anyone dead. :)

LOL @ Alice.  She really didn't like Bella just wearing Edward's shirt like she was.  She had to make it at least a little fashionable.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Aille...glad you like it.  I'm glad Bella didn't kill him at the first meeting too.  Would have made a VERY short story...LOL

Alice really did have to spruce up that black shirt...I think the red leather belt helped...and so did she!

Kathie

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

I think that this is wonderful.  I love how Bella is handling the news of her singer and it's very coregeous how she's determined to beat this thing. 

About Emmett and Rose in France, that was a very good story.  It really makes him seem more human for trying to hide his shame at such an act. 

I laughed when Bella yelled, "MINE!"  I just loved that.  It was also really great when Bella just wants to snatch up those papers. 

Either will be the safest man on earth or he'll be the least safe.

ta

Master of teh Boot



Author's Response:

She is determined...and we'll hope she succeeds! 

Yes, Bella yelling MINE...she certainly doesn't want to share...LOL

Thanks for reading and reviewing...

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

I am quite grateful that I stumbled accross this story and I can't wait to read more - especially Edwards point of view. Great job, please update soon!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found Guarding Edward too!

I'm getting my next chapter to my wonderful beta right now....

Kathie

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

nice



Author's Response:

Thanks...I appreciate your reading and reviewing...

Kathie

Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

I love, love, love, this story.

I am so glad it is told from Bella Vamp Edward Human.

I cannot wait to see what happens.  Oh those beautiful green eyes.



Author's Response:

What a lovely review!  Thank you!

Ah, his green eyes...I manipulated some for my title banner...my hubby is annoyed when they pop up on my screen saver...LOL!

Kathie

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

Your description of Edward has me swooning!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Edward, no matter who writes him, is a pretty swoon worthy guy!  I need a fan.....

Thanks for reading AND reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

The prologue was awesome! It's great to see Bella kicking some butt and to know how she got started with the whole bodyguard thing!

I love the idea behind this! I really like the way you've used the characters! It's so cool that Edward is her singer! Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I appreciate your enthusiasm...I like "Butt Kicking Bella" too...

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

Great job, definitly going on my favs for updates when there is more. :)

I haven't read a fan fic like this one yet, so I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it.



Author's Response:

Oh!  That's so nice to know...on your FAVORITES!

I hope you like where this goes, I'm having a blast writing it.

Thanks for reading AND reviewing...

Kathie

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

more



Author's Response:

More on the way...it's in the lineup!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: klizcullen (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

I like your vampire bella! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading klizcullen! I like my vampire Bella too...strong,yet feminine.

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

yay!! cool stuff!! i can't wait for the edward - bella meeting!!! how is bella going to react?? it's so interesting to see bella as a vampire! i'm just 2 excited with this story!!

=) keep it up!!! lots of luv!! thanks so much!!



Author's Response:

Yes, the MEETING!  Will Bella have enough control?  I guess we'll see...oh wait...I know!  LOL...

But seriously, I really was looking forward to that first REAL meeting...Next chapter!

Kathie

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

OOOOOOO! Can't wait for more. By the way I do really enjoy the little things to changed that are Bella's things as a vampire. Such as the car and how it was a deer was a he not a she like in the movie (when edward is chasing in the beginning).



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading AND reviewing...

I liked Bella's car too...I drive a beat up old red mini van...LOL...so I'm living vicariously through HER car...in BLUE!

Kathie

Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Kathie,

You know I love this story. I'm really happy to see that it was accepted over here!



Author's Response:

Kris, I know you do!  And I'm working on that other project too...mwahaha!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Hehehe, they just keep chatting, so no end in sight... that was funny.  I like this so far.  Bella may want to take herself off guard duty for a while though, considering she's more of a danger to Edward than whatever else (unless it's another vampire after Edward!).  Wouldn't that be ironic? 

I got the weird sense that Bella is just so smug and satisfied with her control for some reason.  This really knocked her off her axis!

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

They DO keep chatting...LOL...I had only blocked out about 20 chapters...and yet, we are still going strong...

Thanks for reading AND reviewing...

Kathie

Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I like your story. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!  The next chapter is already in the lineup...soon to be here...

Kathie

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I'm totally interested in seeing what will happen next!



Author's Response:

Glad you are liking it...

I think I know where there are going, then one of the characters takes a turn!  So they are keeping me guessing too...

But there will be a HEA....Happily Ever After...eventually!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I love this story so far.  I'm in love with the idea of Bella, Rose and Emmet as bodyguards.  They're perfect for the job.  It's like I've begun watching some really exciting Tv show. 

The innitial incident was great, with that wifebeater.  Bella showed him a trick or two.  Nice way to get things started.  I also loved how you recapped the adventure of Elite Guard.  Good name for a bodyguard company by the way.

And now Edward is in more trouble than he knows.  I think that also the characters of Mike, Jessica and Angela are perfect.  Just like in the book.

Ta

MAster of teh Boot



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I thought that the three of them would make good bodyguards too...Emmett really wants to wear that cape though...maybe later!

Yes, poor Edward...but who is in more trouble?  Edward or Bella?  LOL!

I'm glad you liked Angela, Jessica and Mike too...they are the good guys in this story...they don't get that a lot in ff...!!!

Thanks again!

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

this fic is just so awesome!!

cool idea.. i love it and i am going to read all 25 chapters and the ones the other ones too hahaha 

thanx so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked my idea...and that you'll read the 25+ chapters to come!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raie (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Really enjoyed the start of your story.  Can't wait to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

I appreciate that...I keep wondering just exactly where they are going too!

It's a fun journey...

Kathie

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