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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

I love this story.  What is going on at Jessica's home?  I know I gotta wait to find out... but ugh....

Angela is going to be thrilled she gets to bring the papers in to see Edward.

Miss LM is nuts... I can't wait to see her POV.



Author's Response:

Yes, Angela is a BIT thrilled to get Edward...who wouldn't be?  ;)

Again, YES, Miss LM is NUTS!

Thanks so much for reading AND reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

ahhh I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, glad that I have left you wanting more!  And it IS on the way...

Kathie

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

you've definitely built up the suspense level!



Author's Response:

I hope that's a GOOD THING...lol!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

AHHH !   SO Please update a.s.a.p. PLEASE!

 

I beg you... hahaha ok

 

 

really soon then?



Author's Response:

Begging, hmmmm...

I can tell you that the next chapter is already in the line up, awaiting validation!  So, soon!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

This is a good, nail-biting mystery!  And I'm really intrigued to find out where Edward knows Bella from!



Author's Response:

Thanks Stellarrose!

I'm glad that you are finding it a fun mystery....

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

 Loved the chapter!  I liked that Mike and Jessica are sympathetic characters, a bit of a change from most fics!  Hope all is alright at their house!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much...

I just had to write one story where Mike and Jessica weren't the BAD GUYS for a change...LOL, which doesn't mean to say that I haven't enjoyed a bit of Mike bashing that I've read in some stories...!

Ah, their house...uh oh!

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

cool!! i liked the emmet-edward joking hahaha!! and the stalker situation.. creepy!!! i how's the next chapter going to be??.. OMG.. creepy stalker chick stalking edward creepily, can't wait!! 

well i'm totally into this.. you've been favorited an all.. haha!! 

lots of lov!!!



Author's Response:

I am SO glad you like this!  Ah, Emmett and Edward get lots of opportunities to joke around in an upcoming chapter.  I do love those boys together...almost as much as Bella and Edward!

Thanks for making me a favorite...

Kathie

Reviewer: nicole22 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

like your fic! it 's a nice idea. different but not too out there!!!



Author's Response:

I appreciate that!  I am trying not to make it too far out there...

My family suggests some "out there" ideas for this story...Falling Asteroids that kill Edward...that's from my TEAM SETH daughters!  Um, I won't be going in that direction!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

K wonder what happened at Jessica's place. I can't wait to read the stalker point of view. It should be very interesting.

Author's Response:

Ah, Jessica's place...yep...that's really something... ;)  We'll actually see that soon....

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: wishful19 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

Is the stalker a vampire too?

 

Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

To begin with the stalker WAS going to be a vampire...but then the story played out differently...although there will be OTHER vampires in later chapters...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

Now this was a really great chapter.  It did a fantastic job of highlighted the Cullens talents both as detectives and body guards.  I love how they work so well in such a tight team.  Reminds me of my superhero comics without the costumes. 

I can't wait to see the stalker POV.  I always love to read about psychos because they often reflect my own bad attitude.  The difference is that all they have is a bad attitude.

Ta

Master of the Boot



Author's Response:

Ah, but Emmett REALLY wants a cape...LOL!

Maybe he wears one for his times alone with Rosalie....Mwahahah!

Uh oh...you and me...psycho POV...it was SO much fun to write...and I hope you all will like it...

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

Great chapter Kathie! Could LM stand for Lauren Mallory maybe? I was hoping they wouldn't leave Jessica home alone. It sounds like that won't be an issue now that something happened. I can't wait for the next chapter. The stalker's POV should be very interesting!



Author's Response:

Thanks valelf...Hmmmm....Lauren Mallory...that's an excellent guess!

The stalker's POV is now in line....

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment...I appreciate hearing it!

Kathie

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: reedinthewind (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

Cliffie! No, no! I really like how even though this story is a total AU, everyone's still in character. Really creepy--very good job of building tension without any imminent danger. I think the stalker POV could be really interesting...and I just remembered who has the initials LM. Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Reed...

I did try to keep them in character....and the Stalker's POV...well, my children think I had just a little too much fun with it...LOL!

LM....hmmm...who could be LM.... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: Joy Moony (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

intriguing! you kept things moving along nicely, and  I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you aer enjoying this...it's just so much fun to write...

Kathie

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

This is totally delightful. I have just started and I am happy that there are already 4 chapters in. I am also happy that updates will come quickly.

By the way, Vampbella is still in character, she is a minder, a protector, like the original human Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Camilla!  *Delightful*...I love that!

Yep, I'm working on Chapter 28 right now...so lots of "next" buttons coming up!

Thanks so much for reading AND reviewing...

Kathie

Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

AWW MAN! I came to the end of this chapter to not find a NEXT sign on it?

Damn. Please update. I love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your enthusiasm!

The next chapter is in the line up...it will be up soon!

Can't remember if I've mentioned the title, but here it is:

~~~Love Letters?~~~

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

I love your story!  Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  You know that I'm going to keep going...LOL!

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

i have no ideaa!!!... maybe.. he saw her in a.. magazine or.. in his history book.. idk!!

i liked edward's pov!!! thanks 4 updating so fast!!

 



Author's Response:

Oooo....You are SO close in your guess!

Thanks for updating go to my beta, everwondering...she's FAST!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

nice



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

Really enjoying this story!



Author's Response:

That makes me happy!

I'm currently writing Chapter 27 "OPTIONS"...wow, who knew they were so chatty?  LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

I honestly have no clue where Edward could have seen her before... but I did like his POV here.



Author's Response:


Thanks Aille...Let's see where could he have seen her, where she didn't see him?  She's not an actress, she doesn't get interviewed on TV...Even in passing, she probably would have smelled him...Hmmmmm....We'll just have to see...but here's a hint:

FRAME

Does that help?

Kathie

Reviewer: sizzlinghotcat (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

I like where this story is going very orginal. You are a good writer who gives nice details. One request/suggestion. Please don't make one chapter Bella's then the next one Edwards with the exact same scene. I find that it gets really annoying and I stop reading those stories.  Just a suggestion.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like the premise here...

I did mention in the a/n at the end that this would be the only chapter that rehashed another one, I don't like that either!  It just gets SO redundant...but I did want to see what Edward thought as he met the Cullens for the first time...

There are the only two chapters that will do that...we need to get the story moving!

Thanks again for reading...and I appreciate your comments...

Kathie

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

I have to say that I'm loving Edward's POV. You captured perfectly that gentlmenly mindset of his.  Where he met Bella, who can say? 

I just know that I'm hot and eager for more.

Ta

Master of teh Boot



Author's Response:

Glad you liked being in Edward's head...It is actually quite a nice place to be....

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

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