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Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

 OK, I feel that you are stringing us along over what 'happened' at Jessica's place.  Either that or you have yet to finish that chapter or it is giving you a hard time...I wish you good luck either way and it is awlays cool to see Emmet be so laid back and smart.  So it is off to the hospital, huh?  Have I told you that after reading Lauren's thoughts...well I am scared of her and her as equally crazy mother!!!  YIKES!  ok, More please!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments, Autunmnmissa...

That chapter is already done and in the line-up for validating...

Yes, Emmett IS a smart guy...funny too...and a bit focused on SEX (that comes later...lol) but he IS smart.

Lauren and her Mama...they are NOT good people...and, actually, Mama is much worse than Lauren, which does not bode well for Edward...Poor Guy!  But he IS being guarded by vampires, which should help him... ;)

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I'm enjoying this twist on the Edward-Bella story. But longer chapters please. I can't wait to find out where Edward knows Bella from. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, bgwillis...I appreciate your comments!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

how does Edward know Bella? Dreams maybe?



Author's Response:

Good guess, twilightfan!

We'll find out in two chapters....

Thanks for reading AND reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Interesting prologue and 1st chapter. 

I'll def keep reading:-)

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

Great Edward and Emmett bonding!  I love their interaction. 

Here's hoping everyone is all right!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Amayes! 

I do love Edward and Emmett play time too.

I hope they are all all right too...wait!  I know what's coming....LOL!

Kathie

Reviewer: andrutzza13 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

I really love it!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.....please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, andrutzz13!

Next chapter is already in the lineup...it's called:  TOO CLOSE TO HOME...

We'll see what happened at Jessica's house...

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

oh... this was creepy!!! yeah! i can really tell.. she has a lot of anger!!.. 

great writing... as always!!! 

can't wait for the next chapter!! =)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, cullengirl, for reading and reviewing!

Hey, you got another chapter just hours after you reviewed!  Cool...

Kathie

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

In the wordsof Bella...Holy Crow!  Wow, that IS insane.  A great way to see the other POV and I was right...it was Laruen... and her crazy mom...yikes!  I am scared overthe whole autograph thing and marriage license.   I am looking forward to more and what she did at Jessica's.  More please!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Autumnmissa...Yes, what did he sign?  Uh oh...

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

*shiver* Very creepy!  That girl's got major issues!  Not to mention her mother!

Great chapter Kathie, keep them coming!



Author's Response:

Thanks, AMayes...your name always makes me think:  Amazing...which is what YOUR story is!  Everyone should go and read her:

Elevators, Strangers and Surprises

While you wait for my next chapter!

Kathie

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

I enjoyed this reading this chapter almost as much as you enjoyed writing it.  When we write about psychos, we can get out the anger and negative emotion that we feel.  We all have the potential to be psycho, but we have balance.  Lauren here, has no balance.

I love your use of repetetion of key phrases, like "He's MINE" in bold.  And always bringing up her mama. 

I loved this, I like it dark.

ta

MAster of teh Boot



Author's Response:

Thanks so much MOTB...I really did enjoy writing it...it let my inner monster come out and play...LOL

Yes, her sense of BALANCE is totally gone...her Mama has not raised her right, that's for sure.

Glad you liked the DARK...there's more of THAT to come...Poor Edward!

Kathie

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

This story is great.  Please keep the chapters coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Kycee!  I'm getting the next chapter up and into line today....

Kathie

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Creeepy. Well done. But since the stalker is hideous, maybe she should not have a full chapter next time, because the reader would prefer to stay on the side of E & B.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Camilla...She is pretty hideous!

The next chapter is from Edward's POV...he and Emmett get some male bonding time...in that great car!

Kathie

Reviewer: sethschick (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Chapter 6 - Ok, wow that was truly creepy. I'm concerned about you dear (lol). Really where did you come up with Mama? That was the creepiest part of it was her (whoever she is). The details were awesome, can't wait for the next chapter to see what happened at Jess's house! I am still going over the mama thing! Just creepy! Great job, sethschick

Author's Response:

Thanks, sethschick (btw, that name would fit all three of my daughters too!)

Yes, we were all concerned about me as I wrote this....I'm not sure exactly where Mama came from...but I was thinking about a book as I wrote that...*Misery* anyone?????

Thanks again...

Kathie

Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Hmmm now tell me are you just like Lauren? lol this is so creepy =) please update



Author's Response:

Nope, that's the thing, I am so NOT like Lauren.  Maybe that's why it was so much fun to write her POV...kind of like acting...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

that was just creepy.



Author's Response:

I thought so too!

Thanks for reading, maddaq.

Kathie

Reviewer: reedinthewind (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

That -really- creeped me out. [In a good way, though! I could tell you had fun writing it.] Interesting details about the gifts--the piano was broken accidentally. But what exactly did he sign at the autograph session? It wasn't the marriage license, was it??? And who exactly is Lauren's mother, and why is she so set on getting Lauren married to Edward? Elite Guardians had better take this seriously, because it's clear that Lauren and her mother are far beyond sane. Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Ah, yes, just WHAT did he sign?  That is the big question...

Lauren's Mama really just wants the best for her sweet little girl...

Elite Guardians are taking this very seriously....I just hope it's enough...

Thanks for reading Reed!

Kathie

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

I agree, very creepy!



Author's Response:

Creepy, but fun, right?

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

oh my... what a psycho! great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks twilightfan...yep, she's a psycho...for sure!

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

I thought it was Jessica, and she's completely lost her little mind hasn't she?

I enjoyed this twisted mind.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks Aille, glad you enjoyed the TWISTED MIND bit there...she hasn't really lost her mind...YET...that comes later!

Uh oh!

Kathie

Reviewer: Katwood (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Really cool--I wasn't expecting to hear from the stalker.  It lets you how screwed up she and her mama are. 

I can't wait to see what was at Mike & Jessica's house, and to see what else happens next.

 

Thanks for a great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks Katwood (ooo, our names are very close),

I hadn't really meant to write the POV, but, well, Lauren MADE ME.... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Eeeeek! Reading that gave me the creeps-- that's a compliment :)



Author's Response:

Glad I could "creep you out" riverspirit!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: mysticsavantpixie58 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

i think she's a creep and you need to come out with the next chapter soon so i can see what happens. <3



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, mystic!

I'll get the next chapter in the line up ASAP...

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

oooh that was creepy. Love that you put Lauren Mallory in the stalker position --- I can't stand that character (not like she was created for anything else anyways.) Her MAMA sounds freaky freaky FREAKY. Can't wait for the next update --- do I see a faked wedding cert in the future?



Author's Response:

I never liked Lauren either...!!!

But as bad as she is...uh oh...Mama is going to be worse...sigh...Poor Edward!

Hmmmmm.....he really should LOOK AT the things he signs... ;)

Thanks for reading Eidelweiss...

Kathie

Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

CREEPY.



Author's Response:

The author rubs her hands together in GLEE, I've done my job well!

Mwhahaha!

She was SO MUCH FUN to write...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

I know! I know! lol

I know where he's seen her before!

I finally have my account working right so I get the updates to the stories and just got the chapter 6 update tonight. I love this story!



Author's Response:

Funny girl!  I know too!  LOL!

I'm glad your account is working correctly now too!

Ugh...we have THREE super cells heading our way, there have already been a couple of tornadoes on the ground southwest of us....sigh.....time to get the story on the flashdrive and get it in my pocket...oh, and lock the cats and the ferret in the basement....just in case!

Thanks so much for the review Kris!

Kathie

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