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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: sethschick (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I'm on the seat of my chair crying out in agony because I can't take the suspense! I love emmett and the male bonding and all but I want to know who this nutlady is. Poor jess man, what's happening with the baby. Oh I can't take it! I'm so glad ur chapter got through so fast but I hope there's another chapter tomorrow :-). SethsChick p.s. Tell ur daughters I appreciate that they love Seth too!

Author's Response:

Ah, suspense...!!!  I guess I am doing my job!  I've billed this one as Romance/Suspense/Mystery/Humor...!!!

Yes, my daughters don't like sharing Seth...LOL...but since there are three of them...I guess Seth could be spread to all FOUR of you... ;)

Thanks for reading, reviewing...AND rating!


Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Awesome writing and twist on the Bella vampire/Edward human story line. Bravo! Also, the initials LM... Is this Lauren Mallory or a different character made specifically for the story? Curiousity gets to me! Hope you can settle it down with more of this great story!

Author's Response:

Thanks Nova!  For both the review and the rating!

I'm glad that you like my little twist on the story...

Yes, LM would be Lauren Mallory...she's a very twisted sister...!!!!

Thanks for reading...


Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Wow. Longer chaps please? this was good

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review AND ratings obsessiveimagination!

Starting with the next chapter, they will all have at least 3000 words, and most are in the 5000 range...does that help?


Reviewer: mysticsavantpixie58 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

lauren is an obsessed bitch, seriously. i pity edward. cuz someone needs to give that girl a reality check. love your story, so please come out with a long long chapter so i have an excuse to not do my homework.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing mystic...

Yep, Edward is to be pitied...once Lauren gets her plan in action. 

My next chapter is quite long....BUt you still need to do your homework...LOL


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

pixel cookies - yum! they're the low-cal kind, right? ;)

should be interesting to see how they end up catching the stalker!

Author's Response:

Yep, Daylen!  No calories in these pixel you can eat LOTS!

Thanks for reading...AND rating!


Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Now this was great.  Not only did it highlight how insane Lauren really is but is highlighted Bella's compassion and skill as well. 

I'd say that this was a tirumph

The handling of Jessica was wonderful, few things are more tear jerking than an expectant mother in peril.  This game is growing more dangerous with each passing day. 


Master of teh Boot

Author's Response:

What a lovely review MOTB!

It was actually rather hard to write Jessica in peril...she and baby haven't done anything wrong...yet, Lauren is nuts...I wonder what she has planned for Saturday????  Uh oh....

Thanks for reading...


Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

i love this story! Its amazing! Please update as soon as you can! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, edwardsluver...I appreciate your review...

And thanks for rating!


Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Just an FYI - I've given you 5 stars every time I review...


<3's for the chappie!  Can't wait to see what comes next!

Author's Response:

Sarah Bella!  You get  DOZEN pixel cookies!!!!  Your choice of flavors... ;)

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~ a good way.  You have a way of getting us going then cutting us off wanting, needing more...hmmm where do you live again ;)

hehehe, It sucks that Jessica wasn't listening, to have her back yard destroyed and then the grafiti on the house... So was it a combined effort or just the rantings of a very unstable little, maybe you should enlighten us on her crazy mom's pov?  Since they have her scent can they follow it and find them?    more please!!! Pretty, pretty (pouting like Alice) please!

Author's Response:

Yes, like I'd tell you where I'd come take my flash drive away...and look at it...LOL!

Ah, Crazy Mama actually does get her own POV later on...and as much fun as it was to write Lauren's, well, Mama is NUTSO!

Next Chapter is in the line up!

Thanks for reading, Autumnmissa...


Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Please do continue. 
I'm loving the originality of this plotline.  Can we have more Bella/Edward interaction?  I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thanks kkroonie...I will continue through about 30+ chapters actually!

AND there is more Bella/Edward in the next chapter....which is already in line to be uploaded...

Thanks again!...Love those star ratings!

A cookie for YOU too...or a piece of the coffee cake that I just made... ;)


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

You and me both fightinsurfgrl!

I'll be putting it in the line up today!

Thanks for reading...


Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Great chapter!  It's fun to read it again!  It'd be too mean for anything bad to happen to your version of Jessica!  She's sweet. 

And I hear you on that half star!  Mine went up to a full five and then back down to four and a half! 

Here's to a quick update!

Author's Response:

Thanks Amayes...Yes, this Jessica is a sweet girl.  That makes her unique in the Fan Fiction world, doesn't it?  LOL

Hurray!  I got that last half star!!!!!


Reviewer: ShandyAnn (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

woo! pixel cookies, mmmm!

amazing chapter, as per usual, i love your characters

Author's Response:

Yes, I think they were RANGER PIXEL COOKIES....they have coconut, nuts, craisons, oatmeal, chocolate chips....!!!!

Thanks so much for reading, ShandyAnn~


Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

wow, scary stuff! Very well written

Author's Response:

Thanks Julianna...Jessica really was scared...good thing the women were there to help...

Glad you like it!


Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

I'm sorry if you were confused by my review earlier today, I actually get quite a hoot of guys bonding over cars.  My fiance is one of the worst really when he gets going on about older cars.  I do find it to be a typical guy thing, but really, it's one of the things I find incredably sexy about them too.  You get a 10 from me every chapter since I found this. :)

Poor Jessica, that would be a horrible thing to come home to.  No one deserves to be treated like that.  I'm glad that Rose went home with her, and that Bella knows what she is doing when it comes to the contractions.

Author's Response:

No, I wasn't confused.  I get that guys bond over cars too...and sports!  LOL

It IS sexy, I guess it doesn't really matter what they get passionate about, just watching them BE passionate about something is a turn on!

Oooo...a 10 every time?  Thanks SO MUCH!  You get pixel cookies for sure... ;)

Yep, good thing Dr. Bella was there!

Thanks again,


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

Great chapter --- Edward and Emmett are kind of bonding (in an odd way over a stalker, but still bonding.)

Please keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Eidelweiss... 

Edward is going to get a chance to bond with ALL the Cullens at some point...


Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

i like your emmett 2!!! ah.. the bonding!! i loved that 2!! stil super curious about where edward knows bella from!!! but i'll be patient! poor jessica, she must have had a big big shock!!.. maybe all her house was covered with toilet paper!! haha.. no.. jk.. but after the creepy stalker chapter it's probably something very wierd and hateful.. can't wait!! 

awesome as always =) 

Author's Response:

Patience is a virtue...I'm glad I'm helping you with that...LOL

We'll see what happened at the house in the next should be up soon, it's waiting in the line up...

Thanks for the "awesome"!  I really do appreciate your comments...


Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

AHHH when are you updating? Soon? really soon? please?


awesome !

Author's Response:

Thanks for the "awesome", obsessiveimagination!

The next chapter is already in the line up awaiting validation...Soon!


Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

I am really enjoying this story.  The stalker's pov was very effective and creepy.  Please keep writing 

Author's Response:

Thanks, Emma Austin...I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. 

I certainly will keep writing!  I'm already writing Chapter 29... ;)


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

I'm not big into cars... but damn those Vanquish's are nice :)

I'm wondering if Edward's got some old family photos that happen to have a certain petite pretty brunette in them? perhaps that's where the nagging recognition is coming from? hehe

Author's Response:

You are so close, Daylen!  So close....


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

and i'm wondering if Mama isn't a separate physical entity from the stalker... so much of the chapter feels like the stalker talking to another identity inside her own head :S

Feeling sorry for Jessica and Mike!

Author's Response:

Very insightful Daylen!

Yes, poor Jessica and Mike...but they are in good hands now...

Thanks for reading...


Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

fun twist of the story.

Love that she's already possessive.

Author's Response:

Thanks, jilburfm...glad you like my twist...

Yes, Bella is, um, slightly possessive! Even at this point...


Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

I enjoyed the banter between Edward and Emmett about cars & sports.  Typical thing to bond over, but definitly something these two would do. :)

I loved Edward's description of Rose and Emmett's answering grin.  He knows his wife is stunning.

Edward did the right thing by giving Emmett the keys.  Although he doesn't know just how safe he is with Emmett as a driver, I can only thing of 6 other people who would be more careful, but still be able to get them to the hospital as fast as is needed. 

Author's Response:

Ah, thanks, Aille...

Yep, only six others that could get him to the hospital faster than HUMANLY possible...glad you caught that!


Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

 OK, I feel that you are stringing us along over what 'happened' at Jessica's place.  Either that or you have yet to finish that chapter or it is giving you a hard time...I wish you good luck either way and it is awlays cool to see Emmet be so laid back and smart.  So it is off to the hospital, huh?  Have I told you that after reading Lauren's thoughts...well I am scared of her and her as equally crazy mother!!!  YIKES!  ok, More please!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments, Autunmnmissa...

That chapter is already done and in the line-up for validating...

Yes, Emmett IS a smart guy...funny too...and a bit focused on SEX (that comes but he IS smart.

Lauren and her Mama...they are NOT good people...and, actually, Mama is much worse than Lauren, which does not bode well for Edward...Poor Guy!  But he IS being guarded by vampires, which should help him... ;)

Thanks for reading...


Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I'm enjoying this twist on the Edward-Bella story. But longer chapters please. I can't wait to find out where Edward knows Bella from. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, bgwillis...I appreciate your comments!


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