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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Wonderful chapter.  I love the story that you have for Bella's change, I also like that you have her younger than Esme & Carlisle.  Most of the time when there is a Bella's the vamp story, she's either changed first by Carlisle, or much much older.  This is a nice twist.

My thought when Edward touched her, was hmmmm... I wonder what he things about the temp of her skin...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Aille!  He does have some thoughts on her skin...BUT, these vampires are not quite as cold as SM's...so just a bit OOC in this AU fic...she is still COOL, just not COLD...

Thanks again!

Kathie

Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

please update as soon as possible im so excited to see what happens at Edwaards!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Edwardsluver, I love your excitement! 

Ah, at Edward's place...it's fun... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

If feels like a cliff...but i know it isn't....i just want that much more!!! ;)  Interesting on how she became a vampire and all.  Ok, Enough of me, it was good and I need more...feed MY addiction!  :)



Author's Response:

I'll feed your addiction!  Going to upload my next chapter this evening...

Next chapter Bella gets to meet Danny, the gate guard...That's fun...Mwhahaha!

AND some more BxE interaction... ;)

Thanks for reading Autumnmissa!

Kathie

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

This story is so much fun--a perfect balance of funny (that's a hanging offense! haha) and suspense (scary stalker--yipes!).  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Glad that you liked that *hanging offense* comment from Emmett...he made me laugh too!

Still lots of suspense coming...Poor Edward!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

I liked the backstory of Bella. Sure, it's not crucial, but it's nice to know anyways. Lovely as always, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you liked the backstory, JuliannaOphelia...

I liked that it was Esme who found her...and was strong enough to carry her to Carlisle without draining her...

Kathie

Reviewer: April2460 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

So a James in the past means no villian James in the present right?  Interesting story about Bella and painting.  Another good chapter.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Maybe....LOL! 

Just because I used a James in the past, doesn't mean that I can't use another one in the present... ;)

Ugh, except that I really hate that guy! Every time he comes into a story I'm reading, I GROAN!  LOL!  Just kill him already! ugh...

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating!

Kathie

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Fracking <3 this chappie!



Author's Response:

Thank you, SarahBella!  I'm glad you love it!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Great chapter! I love Jessica's reaction to Emmett driving Edward's car! That's pretty cool about the painting. Will we learn at some point how Bella came to pose for it?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review and rating, valelf...

Yep, next chapter we find out how Bella's portrait came to be...a hint:  Her father had it done....

Should be on-line soon, it's in the line up now...

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Busted!!! finally we know... yay!!! 

and yeah.., i agree... she looks more like a victoria.. but hey... this is fiction... you can make anything happen, right? i loved the reference to the 4 star chef.. it would be awesome to have them in ALL hospitals!!

i'm happy happy with the story!! thanx so much!

 



Author's Response:

Yep, kind of like Victoria...that's where the *writing* and *painting* license comes into play!  LOL

Your being happy happy with the story makes ME happy happy too!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

I had a crush on my ob/gyn... it wasn't good.  I had dreams about him all the time.  I seriously blushed every time I went to see him... it was embarrassing. 

Cool that he recognized her from a portrait... I was convinced that he was going to have known her from childhood somehow... like maybe he was in the park one of those times that she saved someone.  Or there when she used to go running.  I like this better:-)



Author's Response:

You did too?  It is somewhat embarrassing isn't it?  Ah, but he was so cute!  And so sweet too, I was friends with his wife...

I'm glad you liked the painting twist...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Great chapter. :) I love that Jessica & Edward now are thinking that it may be Bella in that picture. 

I wish our local hospital had a decent chef... hospital food... yuck



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Aille...I really was surprised at how good the food was there...

Yes, just HOW could it be Bella?  All will be known soon!

Thanks for the rating too!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Love your story and you are so right about Bella being prettier than the woman in the picture. I also love how you put Jessica and Mike as friends of Edward's instead of the perpetual enemies they always seem to be. Anyhoo, great job and great storyline can not wait to see what you come out with next!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much ForbiddenFyre!  Yep, the stories with Jessica and Mike as good people are very few and far between! 

I appreciate your comments...

Kathie

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

If there was ever a chapter to have as an Edward POV, this would be it.  So the boy has now remembered where he's seen Bella before.  I must say bloody f-ing good show, old boy, or girl. 

Yes, Bella is far prettier than that cursed painting.  But I imagine that Bella would be annoye at having her painting done.  Poor, humble deary. 

I'm really liking your rendition of Jessica, I guess that grown up she's much nicer.  Again, as a mystery and as a romance, this whole thing is coming together beautifully.

Ta

Master of teh Boot



Author's Response:

MOTB..I'm so glad that you liked Edward's POV in this one...

Yes, she was annoyed at having to have the painting done...for a very good reason...that we will hear about in the next chapter...

Jessica has grown up nicely, hasn't she?  But then she's a bit OOC in my AU....LOL

Thanks so much for reading, Sweets...

Kathie

Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

oh please please please update soon im so excited to c what happens next!!!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating, edwardsluver!

I rather like the next chapter...A preview:  Bella WAS peeved when that painting was done! 

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Fantastic story as always. Thanks for throwing the portrait in there --- I was wondering if it were real! Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks, eidelweiss!  I think it's cool that we can actually put pictures in like that...and not have to follow a link.

Next update is already in the lineup...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

I love this story, keep the chapters coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much kycee!  The next chapter is already in the line up...my poor beta is getting a workout!

Kathie

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

so there IS a picture! Though not exactly what I had originally guessed - didn't even think of a painting :S Wonder what Bella was annoyed about that day? hehe and what Edward's reaction might be when he eventually discovers it WAS her posing for it? :)



Author's Response:

We'll find out what she was annoyed about in the next chapter...

AND Edward will get to see the painting AND Bella together at some point... ;)

Thanks for the review Daylen!

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Ah the portrait, little does Edward know...at least, I'm assuming that it's Bella.  :)

Great chapter as always!  I like the little (and large) moments the characters have together. 

Also, I want to eat at this hospital with the four/five star chef!  Sounds yummy.



Author's Response:

Thanks, AMayes...I like those little and large moments too. 

The food really was good at that hospital.  I don't even remember what I ate, but it was good!  AND the cafeteria looked like a cute little bistro...and nothing like a HOSPITAL CAFETERIA!

Thanks again!

Kathie

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

wow, the lady in the painting looks pretty peeved. Anyways, good chapter, as usual.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Julianna!

She DOES look peeved...I wonder why?

Kathie

Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Looks like Bella might have to come up with a long deceased relative who posed for a painting many years ago since it probably really was her ;)  Good chapter.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, reviewing...and rating, TLammy!

Yes, Bella is going to need a story to work this out...

Next chapter is Bella's backstory!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Oooh, pixel cookies? YAY! Well, of course it's worth five stars!

I think Lauren should get the Psycho of the Year award. She is uber-creepy! I just hope Jessica and the baby are okay. Someone needs to make Lauren pay! Great chapter Kathie! I loved it!



Author's Response:

Cool, pixel cookies get people to RATE!  What kind would you like?  Snickerdoodles?  Chocolate Chip?  A dozen pixel cookies coming YOUR way!

"Psycho of the Year"...I bet there is an ACTUAL award by that name!

Ah, there will be payback...she's dealing with VAMPIRES, after all!

Thanks so much, valelf!  I love reading your reviews!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

Hehe! I loved the whole male bonding thing - cars & sports. Will we get to read about the "chat" with Danny? I'd love to see Emmett's reaction to that! This was a great chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the boy bonding time. I do love those two together. 

There will be a scene with the chat with Danny...but it won't be done by Emmett... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

I'm finally getting caught up on the chapters I've missed. Kathie, you totally rocked the stalker's POV! That was so creepy and disturbing - I loved it! Lauren and her mama have some definite issues!



Author's Response:

Thanks, valelf...glad you thought that I rocked the stalker's POV...scary, isn't it?  That I did it so well...LOL!

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

The stress isn't good for the baby or the readers. Thanks for updating so quickly. 



Author's Response:

"For the baby...OR for the readers"  LOLOLOL!  But so much fun for the author.... ;)

Thanks for the quick updating go to everwondering, my validation beta!

Thanks for reading Emma Austin!

Kathie

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

chickiscrazy



Author's Response:

Yes, jilburfm...the Chick IS crazy!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

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