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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

I think it's the mother who's the other part of the scent.  Since she's been a part of the whole planning thing.

I love the fact that he has a picture of the baby in his wallet.  It's sweet.

Great chapter & I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

You're good, Aille....

I liked the baby picture too...

Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing Aille!

Kathie

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

The wig?  I don't know, but I'm hooked. Please let there be a scene where Bella gives her a bit of a smack down!! =]



Author's Response:

That was a good guess!  Oh yes, there will be some smackdown in the future...!!!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing rhiannon!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Loved it!!! I feel so stupid! I have no idea what is missing! I have been wracking my brains and can not come up with an answer! Oh, well, I'll find out when all is revealed! Anyhoo, wonderful job, ever chapter you leaving me dying for more and sad when the chapter is over! Lol :_F

Author's Response:

Yes, all will be revealed...my daughter didn't get it either...and she had been reading from the beginning...

I'm so glad that you are enjoying this ForbiddenFyre!  It's so much fun to write...

Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: xfrequentlyxdazzledx (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

mama is missing from the scent? is the only thing i can think of. lol



Author's Response:

You are a smart cookie too!

Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

I think its her mom which is missing from the overall scent



Author's Response:

I've got some really SMART readers!

Now, will Elite Guardians figure that out in time?  We can only hope...

Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing Jacquelyn!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

Lots of sniffing going on this chapter! lol! I was wondering if Bella would sneak into his bedroom and watch him sleep. Alice meeting Edward  - I can't wait for that! Great chapter! ~ Val



Author's Response:

Look at you, figuring out that Bella was a nighttime stalker girl! 

Yes, the sniffing...well, guess it is better than draining!  :F

I thought it was funny asking Alice if she could pretend to be a "fan girl"...I think she's got that covered!

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating, valelf!

Kathie

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

*claps* Good chapter:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much JuliannaOphelia!  I'll take applause any time!

Kathie

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

can't wait for more. :D



Author's Response:

The next one is already in the line up...shouldn't be long.  Everwondering is FAST!

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating, fightinsurfgrl!

Kathie

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

This chapter was so sweet. I am getting more and more curious about the Lauren case. And how I would love to run my hands through Edward's hair. :)

'I knew she would want to meet the man who had sniffed me...' LOL! That's sounds very much like Alice, getting excited over the small things.

Baela Compton



Author's Response:

We'll take turns running our fingers through his hair, okay?  I'll even let YOU go first! :F

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating, Baela!

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

Mmm...I would stalk Edward too, though in a non-creepy way...I think.

Excellent chapter as per usual!  I can see Bella starting to fall for him, even if she doesn't realize it herself.

Great work!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you would stalk him too, Amayes...we could do it together!  Taking turns, you know!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

Danny didn't stand a chance once Bella started on him.  But I don't feel sorry for him.

she does have slight stalker tendancies, but she's a lot better behaved about it.



Author's Response:

I didn't feel sorry for Danny either...LOL!  He's lucky all she did was TALK to him!

LOL, she does have a few *stalker tendencies*... ;F

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating, Aille!

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

edward and bella time!!! yay!! when is the corny stuff coming? XD... i guess edward was saying bella's name... uuuu.... well that's what i imagine!!! =) 

also i was wondering... when is edward going to find out about bella being a vampire??... well cause bella finds out pretty soon about edwards true identity in twilight!!.. omg! i can't wait!!!

thanx a lot!! lots of lov!! :D



Author's Response:

There will be *corny stuff* coming...I'm guessing he WAS saying her name too...we'll have to see the NEXT time she hangs out while he is sleeping...

Edward will find out about her being a vampire, but not for a few chapters...

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating, cullengirl06!

Kathie

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

I'm glad Bella and Edward are finally interacting one on one! I can't wait for more!

xx



Author's Response:

And there will be MORE interaction in the next chapter. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, anabana219!

Kathie

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

There are more than one?  I mean I know about the mom, but did I miss something?  Ohhh, I like how this is playing out and I can't wait for the next chapter.  More please, like Alice pouting to see Edward and see who sniffed Bella and who wants a shopping trip!  Pretty please!?!



Author's Response:

Yes, Lauren and her Mom are totally "Stalkers United"...

Alice is looking forward to seeing Edward too...

The next chapter is already in the line-up, awaiting validation...it will be up soon!

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating, Autumnmissa!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

That was such a nice chapter. Bella is falling for Edward and Edward is falling for Bella and all is right in the world. = )



Author's Response:

I totally agree...Bella falling, Edward falling = all is right with the world...well, except for that crazy stalker...!!!!

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating Eidelweiss!

Kathie

Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

Another good chapter.  Thanks for the frequent updates!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much TLammy24...Yes, my validating beta, everwondering, is fast!

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating!

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

I Like the sniffing.   How about a kiss?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the sniffing, it made me laugh...

There will be kisses, but not just yet...

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

Love this new chapter!! Just like Edward watching Bella, Bella's watching him! At least Bella is a "good" stacker while Lauren's not. Oh, and the smilie is awesome! Love the fangs!

Author's Response:

:F  I like that smilie too! Fangs and all...

Yes, our Bella is watching Edward...but she came through the door, not the window!

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Awesome chapter Kathie! I love that Edward is so unlike other humans around Bella, and actually touches her and leans toward her. This whole role-reversal thing is really cool! I loved reading about Bella's back story - the old creepy guy and then how she became a vamp. I'm looking forward to reading about her night alone with Edward! ~ Val



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward is a *touchy feely* kind of guy...shocking to Bella for sure...

Their night alone is...different...Rosalie screetches at one point!

Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating!

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

i loved it!!!.. man.. i don't have stories in mind at the moment!! but yours is great!!

=) awesome as always!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

I think I missed this chapter before!  I'm not sure how I did that.

Bella's human situation sounded terrible!  I'm glad Esme found her and brought her into the family.

Hmm, Bella in the house with Edward...sounds intriguing!



Author's Response:

Thanks, AMayes...

Yes, Bella in the house with Edward...!!!!

I'm glad that Esme found her too...otherwise my story would not have gone anywhere...LOL!

Thanks again,

Kathie

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Oh gross, I would hate to be forced to marry a man 25 years, a very sick man at that! I don't blame Bella one bit for her reaction! I'm hoping Bella is going to do well in the car with Edward! I hope everwondering validates Chapter 11 soon! By the way, I love the fact that Jassica isn't a flighty gossip. Makes her so much easier to like! Lauren is seriously twisted !

You are a fantastic writer!

Baela :)



Author's Response:

Yes, that James A was a very sick man...here's a secret...my first husband's name was "James Anderson"....LOL!  He wasn't hideous like this one...but he is no longer my husband!  I've got my own version of Edward now...and I'm much happier... ;)

I could have made Lauren the sweet one in this story, but somehow it just didn't work...she's nasty!

I appreciate the kind words, thanks so much!

Kathie

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

My goodness, when I read about Edward recognizing Bella from a portrait, I immediatiely thought of a painting reproduction that I own. It was painted by Sir Frank Francis Bernard Dicksee (long name, I know, lol) in 1917; a painting of his niece. I love the painting that you picked, and just thought I would share another that sparked to mind. I am enjoying this 'switched-roles' fic very much and look forward to more after Chapter 10!

 niece portrait - dicksee



Author's Response:

WOW!  If I had found HER I would have used her for sure!  I'm going to have to look up more of his work...

Although the one I used fit the story really well, THIS girl is lovely!  Thanks so much for sharing!

Thanks so much for reading, rating and reviewing...I really do appreciate it!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Great story as always --- so happy to see this updated today! I really do love this angle --- Bella being the vamp with Edward as singer. And I hope things work out between them as I have become more than addicted to my happy endings = )



Author's Response:

I can totally assure you that there will be an HEA=Happily Ever After!

Eventually!  That's the only kind of stories that I like to read...and only kind I can write.  I don't mind some angst before the great HEA, but there better be one!  LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Wonderful chapter.  I love the story that you have for Bella's change, I also like that you have her younger than Esme & Carlisle.  Most of the time when there is a Bella's the vamp story, she's either changed first by Carlisle, or much much older.  This is a nice twist.

My thought when Edward touched her, was hmmmm... I wonder what he things about the temp of her skin...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Aille!  He does have some thoughts on her skin...BUT, these vampires are not quite as cold as SM's...so just a bit OOC in this AU fic...she is still COOL, just not COLD...

Thanks again!

Kathie

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