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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Great chapter --- this was really sweet, one of the best. I love how their relationship is blossoming.

Can't wait for the updates as always = )

Author's Response:

Oh, *one of the best*...thanks so much!

Update will be in line later today....Thursdays are our busy days here in home school land...

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating, Eidelweiss!  Pixel cookies for you!


Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

ehn! I love it!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Julianna!


Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

I'm blowing a perpetual rasberry at you. =P

Author's Response:

:P right back at you!!!  Too funny...

It was a FUN chapter though...*Taken*....

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating Jacquelyn Swan!  Pixel chocolate for you too!


Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

*sigh* Why does Edward always have to be such a gentleman??  :)

I love Jasper, I'm not sure what it is about him, but I love him!

Did I ever mention that I really like you making Edward a concert pianist?  I just wanted to say that here.

Loved the chapter!

Author's Response:

I know! Such a gentleman...sigh...

Jasper...I love him too!

I'm glad you like him as a concert pianist...those long fingers....sigh....

Gosh, I'm BAD...

Thanks AMayes!


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

That was a very clever, and sneaky, chapter title! hehe

Enjoyed it all - looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Sneaky, yet clever!  LOL!

Mean too....

Thanks for reading Daylen!


Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Yes. The title had me going for a bit there. Very clever. Now I am taken in by this story. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Oh, emma austin, you are TAKEN in by the story!  Very nice...

Thanks so much for reading!


Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

They are so cute together. :) I'm glad she was able to comfort him after that nightmare. 

*giggles* Rose and Edward talking car talk and him getting excited about the upgrades she could do.  Funny thing is, I don't think any of them are fully realizing they are making plans beyond the concert and beyond LM. 

The visual of Edward in that tux is just hot.

I just adore that he gave Angela the 2 tickets and invited her to the after party.  I can just see her buzzing from the joy of that.  And Ben probably just shaking his head.

Author's Response:

Yep, Edward in a tux...sleep pants...clean, grungy...ah, he suits any look!

Car Talk...with gorgeous Rosalie always cracks me up...and they ARE all making some long term plans...he fits with them so well...

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating Aille!  You get some nice pixel chocolate...


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Yeah, you got me - I thought "taken" meant Edward had a girlfriend or something!

Awesome.....More Please! How about them kissing? 

Author's Response:

That was very mean of me...wasn't it, sherylb?  But at least he doesn't have a girlfriend...just a stalker

There will be kissing, just not yet...

I'll get the next chapter into the line up later today...I'm working my beta really hard!


Reviewer: cwagner617 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

tell me tell me tell me!! i can't figure it out!!!!!! 

nor can i wait for the next chapter! i really like this one! :) keep up the good work!!

Author's Response:

Lauren and her Mama have been planning this...

And now you have the NEXT chapter! Edward in a tux...and sleep pants...sigh...

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating, cwagner...


Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

is momma missing?   or did she just forget to shower today?

Author's Response:

That made me LAUGH!  One person said that what was missing was Lauren's SANITY...that made me laugh too!

* Shower *....snork!

Thanks so much, maddaq, for reading, reviewing AND rating!


Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Very much enjoying the story- was a bit leery at first- I mean, what can really be threatening when you have vampiric bodyguards?  But the stalker's instability keeps Alice out of the picture, and you do a nice job building the tension.

Author's Response:

That's why they were so good at their job...not a lot can touch a vampire...and they were really good at finding lost dogs and cats too...that sense of smell, you know....LOL

I'm glad you gave it a shot, and hope that you continue to like it. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, squarepancake!


Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

That last line on the card really hits you hard.

The part with the ultrasound and the pictures was so sweet.

Hmmm, not sure what could be missing from the scent. Maybe her mom's scent mixed with hers? Or possibly the scent of the wig she wears? I don't know.

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

There's my Valelf!  I hear that you are pushing people to read my story...COOL!

Yep, that last line...Lauren, um, is not up to sharing...

Good guesses on what is missing...

Next chapter has Rob, I mean, Edward, in a tux...sigh!

Thanks so much for reading and rating and reviewing!  And telling others to read too!


Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

The smell has me stumped. But the chapter is good. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

You are very welcome!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

I finally decided to read your story =] Mainly because Val glowed about it (plus finals consumed my life last week).

So...I'm at a loss about why Bella would smell her own scent.'s someone she's related to in some sort of distant way?


Author's Response:

Ah, Val is one of my favorite people! 

It wasn't Bella's scent that she was smelling, it was the stalker's...and something is missing from it...lots of good answers in my other reviews...

The next chapter is already in the line-up...and it's one of my favorite ones!  Edward in a tux...sigh...oh, and sleep pants!

Thanks for reading, reviewing AND rating!


Reviewer: VampyreLvr (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Assuming the missing piece of the scent maybe confusing the scents of her and her mother? 



Author's Response:

You get pixel cookies too... ;)

Thanks for reading, reviewing AND rating my story, VampyreLvr!


Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

My guess is because It is the stalkers Mom that is on the letters

Author's Response:

Excellent twilightfan!  My daughter is annoyed that so many of you are getting it...LOL!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Guarding Edward...


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

My guess is the mother's scent but then again I could be wrong.

Lauren is creepy... like I have chills!

Great as always, can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Chills?  Cool....!!!!!

And you are right...!!!

I'm tweaking the next chapter right now...well, after feeding the horses!

Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing Eidelweiss!


Reviewer: sirwebbie (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

I think it is the scent of the stalker's mother.  Am I right?

Author's Response:

Excellent!  You are right!  Now, if Elite Guardians can figure it time....

Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing sirwebbie!


Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

I know! I know! lol

This story is so much fun reading through it again. Love it! It keeps me from being too sad.

Author's Response:

I'm glad I'm keeping you from being too sad....

Everyone, go check out kejce's story:

Autumn Knights' Dreams....

You can read that while you wait for my next chapter!


Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Is the missing scent her mother's scent? They are always together, it would make sense if it kind of combined on things. Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Great guess! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing justaskalice!


Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Mama is missing from the scent, right? Good chapter, can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Excellent guess!

Thanks for reading and reviewing cullens_pet!


Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

perfume? scent of a wig? I'm sure it's something obvious and i'm being totally obtuse about it -_- great chapter, keep it up

Author's Response:

Those are good guesses too, JuliannaOphelia...

Thanks so much for reading...


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Icky creepy Laruen...

Author's Response:

But isn't she FUN?  Of course, I know how it works out...which makes it easier for me...

Next chapter should be up soon....


Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Ah Kathie, I strive to write like you!

I loved this chapter, it's building the suspense and you do a great job with the stalker's point of view.  We can see how unhinged she really is.

Poor Edward, I can't imagine what he would be going through, knowing that a lunatic is after him. 

Great update!

Author's Response:

Sweets...I strive to write like you!  Lemons included... ;)

Yes, unhinged...makes YOU scared to be my friend, doesn't it?  ;)


Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

I can't imagine what is missing from the scent...hmmm...she sure is getting more and more stalkery...creepy

Author's Response:

Yes, the creep factor is very high in Lauren...but she's so much fun to write...which is scary in itself!  LOL

Thanks for reading and reviewing gpl993!


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