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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

The updates have been great!  Also, I'm impressed with how differentiated the voices are for LM and LM's mother.  They're distinct, which is hard to do when you're channeling the crazy.



Author's Response:

Yes, everwondering is a swift beta...

Glad that the different POV's are clear...I worried about that...still very fun to write the Psycho Team...LOL

Thanks for R, R and R, squarepancake....I've been thinking HOW to make a square pancake...I need a metal form...

Kathie

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

AHHH!!! I loved this chapter!! I'm so glad they are falling for each other! BUT most of all I can't wait until next chapter if you say its time for the action!!

xx 



Author's Response:

Yes, the ACTION!  It's coming!  Scary...Lauren's Mama is scary....!!!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

So...crazy bitches that want to kidnap Bella's Edward before they even get to kiss should die.

JUST saying.

I don't think anyone would be too upset right? I mean you could always write in a curly headed shortie to...I don't know...set fire to her or something. Crazy stalker biznotches.

I'm hooked. You've got me =P More soon PA-LLLEEAASEE!!



Author's Response:

Going to reel you in now!  Hooked....cool!

Not nice to plan to take him before the kiss...we need the kiss!  Later had better get here...!!!!

Thanks so much, agiismsmxx!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

wow those 2 are nuts! I cannot wait for Bella and Edward to kiss!



Author's Response:

I want them to kiss too!  Too bad we've got to go through some stuff to get there....

Thanks for reading twilightfan1969...

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Oh no!! And, not oh, no for your writing, but oh no what Lauren's mom has in store for Edward! Anyhoo, wonderfully written again. You also leaving me wanting more again! Love your story! So can not wait for the next chapter! The vision about Edward being a vampire! I hope that it comes true soon!! I hate the thought of Edward not being a vampire, when everybody else is! Again, great job!!!

Author's Response:

Glad you are still liking this...and wanting more...next one is in the line-up...

I liked that vision too...flowers, a meadow...and golden eyes!

Thanks so much for R, R, and R!!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Oh Bella!  Stay close to Edward.  Gun? Drug? Hey, go ahead and try to take Bella out...good luck with that.  As long as the gang can shield Edward from the Wacko Skanks, nothing they try can hurt the Elite Guardians.  And if Edward sees things that are...inexplicable...well, then he and Bella will have plenty to talk about, won't they?

And we want that kiss later....



Author's Response:

Yes, we want that kiss....LATER for sure!

Ah, Lauren's Mama...she's BAD!  Guns, drugs...chains....sigh...

Thanks so much for reading, Stllarrose!

Kathie

Reviewer: reedinthewind (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Aaaaiiii! Don't leave us hanging for long! What with Bella's revelation and the seriously creepy but vague plans, I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you are hanging in here with me, reedinthewind!

The next chapter is in the line-up...shouldn't be long!

Thanks so much for R,R & R!

Kathie

Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Kathie,

You know I'm always good for a really good visual! I can't wait to see the scene with the chain in use. Such a good image I conjured up with that one, even if I do say so myself.

Love this chapter! Looking forward to what's coming next.

Kris



Author's Response:

Yes, you and your visuals....ah, they add so much!  And after a chapter or two, people will be sending YOU MY hate mail...LOL

You certainly are my partner in crime...and angst...!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: lizzied2702 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

more please! how long until the end???!! :-)



Author's Response:

So happy that you want MORE lizzied27202! 

I've just written chapter 31 and I think that there are 2-4 chapters after that...

The next one, EPIPHANY, should be up here soon...it's in the line-up already...

Kathie

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

That ending was so sweet. I really cannot wait for more! As much as I adore your fluff, I really want more suspense and trouble (I'm strange, I know...:F)! Please?

Lot's of hugs, Baela!



Author's Response:

I"m glad you like the fluff...the ANGST is coming soon...and it's scary!!!!

Thanks so much, Baela, for reading, reviewing and rating!  You get chocolate pixel cookies!

Kathie

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Lauren's mother is always with her to do the stalker plans, so their scent were intertwined? Is that the missing part? Anyways, great chapter, and I am so excited that I get to read two today! :) Baela



Author's Response:

How did I miss this review?  Hmmmm...very sorry!

You are correct...they are nearly always together!

Kathie

Reviewer: _-_-hisgoldeneyes-_-_ (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

DO YOU HAVE ANYYYY IDEA HOW MUCH I WISH THERE WAS A REAL COPY OF THIS TWILIGHT VERSION??!!!?!!?!

it is as good as the real twilight!! you should really publish this!!!



Author's Response:

How very nice of you to say so...I appreciate that...

I'm appently really good at using characters that already exist, not sure that I could make something up from scratch, but it's still nice to hear...

You get pixel cookies too, his golden eyes!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Oh my goodness! The images this chapter brought into my mind - first Edward in a tux - totally droolworthy! Then Edward in jammie pants - low-riding jammie pants at that! Wow!

I love that Bella was there to comfort him after his nightmare, and that he asked her to stay with him. I love how their relationship is growing, and that they both realize that they are "taken" with each other. Brilliant play on words, by the way!

This was a fantastic chapter! I loved it!



Author's Response:

Sigh...tux...jammies...low riding jammies...sigh....I'm glad you liked it...I'm more than willing to share those thoughts of him!

*Taken*...with each other....!!!!

I'm glad you liked it Val!

Cookies AND chocolate for you!

Kathie

Reviewer: sethschick (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Wow, when I read the title I was in shock! How could they let him get taken! I'm so relieved that he was taken in a good way. Oh Bella Bella Bellan she can't deny those green eyes much longer. Loved how you started with the one day but went back to the previous night. You are gifted. Keep up the amazing work. What was up with the scent in the last chapter? Was it blood they couldn't smell? So confused but awesome mystery. Sethschick

Author's Response:

Yep, she can't deny those green eyes...I wouldn't be able to either! AND he plays the piano...swoon!

I appreciate your lovely review very much...*gifted*...you make me blush!

Thanks so much, Sethschick, for reading, reviewing and rating!  Pixel chocolate for you too...

Kathie

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Um...

hello? *knocks on your door*

hello?

I think it would be best if you update today.

Again.

Just saying.



Author's Response:

There you go...just got the next chapter uploaded to my Beta...

Just because you asked so nicely... ;)

LOL!

I really like the next one too...starting out with Bella's POV...and memories of the night...

Thanks so much for reading, rating and reviewing agiismsxx!  Pixel chocolate for you!

Kathie

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Oooh.....is Bella the spider or the fly?  The predator or the one caught?  Two individuals caught completely unaware are being drawn to each other.  I have a feeling that if LM tries to lay a hand on Edward, Bella will react with more than just a bodyguard's feelings.  Imagine if she also feels the possessiveness of a vampire for her mate...

Psycho bitch ain't got a chance...



Author's Response:

Yes, I think that LM hasn't got a clue as to just WHAT she is messing with...She really doesn't stand a chance...BUT Elite Guardians don't have ALL the information just yet...uh oh!

I think that they are both getting caught...woven tightly together...

Thanks so much for your insights Stellarrose!

Kathie

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

AH! I FOR SURE thought "taken" meant "kidnapped"!! But I liked this just as much!!

xx



Author's Response:

Sneaky of me...sorry! 

Glad you liked it just as much...

Thanks for reading anabanana219!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

i love it! get rid of the stalker and start the lovin!



Author's Response:

Stalker girl just won't quit...we'll have to get passed her to get to the lov'n!

Thanks for reading twilightfan!

Kathie

Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Kathie! I love this chapter. Taken is such an appropriate name for it and you're right, taken has so many different meanings. It's fun to play with it.



Author's Response:

*Taken*...yep, many meanings...LOL!

Thanks Kris!

Kathie

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

You are EVIL!

 



Author's Response:

Evil!  I guess I AM pretty good....LOL

Next chapter up soon...

Thanks so much for reading, rating and reviewing SarahBella!  Pixel chocolate for you!

Kathie

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Aw Eddie needs Bella to sleep!  How cute!



Author's Response:

Sigh...yep she helped him have a good night's sleep after such a hideous nightmare...too bad he's such a gentleman!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Love it, thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much mangler!

Thanks so much for reading, rating and reviewing!  Pixel cookies for you!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Wow, Loved it!!!! I knew something was up when I read what Alice had packed Bella!! That sneake, evil, little pixie!! Anyhoo, this was a great chapter and I loved the Edward and Bellaness of it!! Again, I nearly cried when I reached the end of this chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked Alice's change to Bella's wardrobe!  Yes, she's going to pound her some day, but not right now...

I've put the next chapter into the line-up...

Thanks so much for reading, rating and reviewing ForbiddenFyre!  Pixel candy for you!

Kathie

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

OK, revieing here for the last 2 chapters...2 similar yet different scents?  Mother and daughter?  The POV were not hard to figure out, there have been others who have jumped without warning and were hard to discover, yours were nice.  Ohh, almost cuddleing with Bella...nightmares...and the concert tomm....well, you know.  More please!!!!!



Author's Response:

Excellent guess Autumnmissa!  I'm glad my POV were easy to catch...

Ah, cuddle time...there really needs to be MORE of that...!!!

Thanks so much for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Great chapter --- this was really sweet, one of the best. I love how their relationship is blossoming.

Can't wait for the updates as always = )



Author's Response:

Oh, *one of the best*...thanks so much!

Update will be in line later today....Thursdays are our busy days here in home school land...

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating, Eidelweiss!  Pixel cookies for you!

Kathie

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