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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

oh good action! Looking forward to it

Author's Response:

Yes, action is coming...I just hope everyone isn't mad when they read it....Mwhahaha!

Thanks for reading Julianna!


Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

OH NO - there's isn't another chapter - PLEASE post again soon....can't believe there isn't another chapter after I have just read 14 chapters in a few painful it is to have to wait :(

Author's Response:

Twilight2Midnight...I have LOVED each and every one of your reviews! Thanks so much for taking the time to say something about so many chapters!  It tickles me to see the story anew with each one...

You deserve pixel cookies AND chocolate for having read all those chapters at once...whew! 

Sorry you are having to one is in the line-up...


Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Can't review - have to get to the next chapter quickly - sorry :)

Too good to stop to review...LOL

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Love this chapter - fav so far....

Onto more reading :)

Author's Response:

I know I thanked you in one fell swoop...but I'm so glad you loved this chapter too!


Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Yay, she loves him!  But really, who wouldn't??

You do a great job of writing the creepy mom and daughter duo!  Very scary and dangerous!  Edward is going to need all the protection that the vampires can offer!

Great update!


Author's Response:

Exactly!  Who wouldn't love him? 

Even Lauren...creepy stalker girl that she is....


Thanks for reading AMayes!


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~


Author's Response:

I hope they do!  Time will tell...

Thanks for reading fightinsurfgrl...


Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

Another great chapter - but just have to keep reading... no guesses as to what's missing  (I have NO idea!!!)

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Can't wait for the next chapter. I agree with your daughter only I'm a bit concerned how this will go with Alice's vision. 

Author's Response:

Concerned...yep, that's a good word for the next chapter...sigh...

Thanks for reading emma austin!


Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

WOW - powerful stuff! Loved this chapter!

Especially Bella in Edward's room - AWESOME! So twisted yet perfect (against the Twilight book I mean!!!)

Author's Response:

I loved her in his room...twisted, but nice too!


Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Ahhh  - going back to Edward's place...this should be interesting :)

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Wow.  Just wow.  Love and a chain and drugs and a stalker and LOVE!  Could we have an Edward POV next.  Is he in love with Bella yet?

Author's Response:

There will be three POV in the next chapter....Bella, Mama...and Edward...

Hope you enjoy them!

Thanks for reading gpl993!


Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

WOW - that was a twist to have him think she was the lady in the painting!

Very good thought there - great twist!!! And to think it's in Edward's family home!

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

Getting very hateful isn't THE STALKER!!!

What a horrible person to do that - oh well, she's confused or something like that anyway....

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~ on the way - Jessica out of sight for the weekend maybe - kjust in time for THE STALKER to catch her prey....

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

That was fantastic writing from the Stalkers POV - creepy actually but good!

And yes, just thinking - she DOES have a FEW issues!!!!


Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

OHHH such a cliffie - can't wai tto read more....:)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

Maybe he had researched her as well - you know for the bodyguard assignment!!!

Only more chapters will tell all...

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

AWESOME!!!! Can't stop reading - this is fantastic :)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

Ohhh...this is getting really good - love the turn around - great story :)

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

What a contrast of sweetness and craziness in that chapter! I love it!

Author's Response:

Sweet and crazy...what a combination....!!!!

I'm so happy that you liked it, artsy!  That keeps me writing...


Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Katmom, you are killing me.  Now I am nervous and worried about poor Edward.  I hope the vamps are up to the task of keeping him out of the grasp of the two looney birds.  Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Oh, don't want to kill you, kycee, you review so nicely!  Lauren, maybe!

Have tissues ready for the next chapter...I know I needed one!


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

Everything's building up... though I'm very curious as to how they're going to get Edward away from Bella and the others! It would seem the kidnapping would have to take place in such a way that the Cullen's are prevented from acting with their true abilities - they'll be forced into appearing human for the people witnessing... and then be playing catch-up afterwards :P

Author's Response:

My daughter said:  ENOUGH build up! Get to the action!  The next chapter is really full of it...LOL

*Playing Catch Up*....maybe!

Thanks, Daylen!


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~


DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!STALKER GIRL AN MAMA ARE REALLY CREEPY!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

I don't think that this Bella is quite that angsty about changing him...but we'll have to see...

Stalker Girls are NUTS!

Thanks, sherylb, for R, R and R!


Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

I loved Bella's epiphany. The almost kiss had my heart racing.

Lauren's mom is super creepy! Great chapter!

Author's Response:

The *almost kiss*...sigh...and then his tux clad backside...!!!!

Thanks for R, R & R, valelf!


Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

The updates have been great!  Also, I'm impressed with how differentiated the voices are for LM and LM's mother.  They're distinct, which is hard to do when you're channeling the crazy.

Author's Response:

Yes, everwondering is a swift beta...

Glad that the different POV's are clear...I worried about that...still very fun to write the Psycho Team...LOL

Thanks for R, R and R, squarepancake....I've been thinking HOW to make a square pancake...I need a metal form...


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