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Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Edward is hurt?  Bella is going to raise all hell for that!  Maybe this is how he finds out she is a vamp?  When she rescues him with super speed...or strength...or something.



Author's Response:

Ah, YES...Bella is pretty ticked...

To answer your question:  YES...

Thanks for reading and reviewing gpl993!

Kathie

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

....well jacob is not in this story so ;P

ok, no delay, more asap plz

OH How does Bella find him now?  She will have to bite him to save his life?



Author's Response:

I keep trying to figure out a way to bring Jacob in...but it's just not working out....!!!!

Ah, all will be revealed SOON as to how she finds him....to bite? or not to bite? That really is the question... ;F

Thanks, Autumnmissa...oh!  I sent you an e-mail....

Kathie

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

you write crazy well, keep up the good work;)



Author's Response:

MWAHAHAHA! Thanks.... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

I do like this story. Well written and interesting. I see a future with him being difficult just because he is so easily recognizable; how would they explain him being young forever? But I do like how both he and Bella react to each other. Sniffing? Love it.

I have two problems with this chapter though. First, this best security team would know were his dressing room was going to be. Second, someone would have stayed with him at all times. There were more than enough people. If they are as good as they're supposed to be those seem like pure negligence.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Karen, I appreciate your input and thoughts.  I've got some ideas on just HOW he's going to be later...

Ah, if everthing had gone according to plan, then there would be no story...the next chapter actually DOES address your concerns with the story...hopefully quite well...let me know what you think when you read it...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Oh the angst!  The angst!  Is he going to even survive??

 

It's scary, the concept of stalkers, even fans to a certain extent, when they think they know an public figure so well, when they've fallen in love with an illusion in their head, and then...  Ugh.



Author's Response:

That's how I actually came up with this...Rob mentioned once that he was worried about getting stabbed by a fan, with a virus filled syringe...Voila!  My story....except he got shot... ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, sareliz!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Hey Kathie,

I'm really glad you told us you're a Happily Ever After girl! I had a feeling something like this was coming, but it's good to know that things will work out. I didn't expect him to be shot. That was a bit of a shocker. Poor Edward. Yeah, I think Mama is a few Fruit Loops shy of a full bowl. That chain is scary. I can't wait for whatever's next! This was a great chapter!



Author's Response:

She's a few Fruit Loops shy of a full bowl!  That's good! 

Ah, the chain...nice and black and shiny....sigh....

Everyone...go read valelf's story:  Does this Dress Come in Pixie?

Very cute!

Thanks for the support Val!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Wow, just wow! Mama is sooo off her rocker!! Poor Edward, I feel so bad for him and a little tiny portion of me feels bad for Lauren having to put up with a mother like that, but only a LITTLE tiny portion! Another lovely written chapter! I love how you incorporated the different POVs. Again, you astound with your marvelous talent! Can't wait to find out what happens next and I really hope Edward makes it to have a happy ending, with Bella!~

Author's Response:

You are such a good person...feeling a bit sorry for Lauren...you deserve pixel cookies!

I'm glad my POV's worked...

Ah, remember:  HEA...only way for me!

I really do appreciate your support, ForbiddenFyre!

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Now YOUR review was short and to the point!  LOL!~

Thanks so much for your support, sherylb!

Kathie

Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Love this chapter Kathie. It starts out so sweet with Bella thinking about later and then BAM!

It seems like I haven't chatted with you in forever! Such a good chapter. Can't wait to see more!



Author's Response:

BAM!  Hahahaha!  Oh, wait...yes, so sad.... ;)

It does seem like that, doesn't it?  Have to chat soon!

Everyone, go read kejce's AUTUMN KNIGHTS' DREAMS...well worth your time!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Wow! Crazy does run in this family~



Author's Response:

It certainly does!  I just hope that they don't have aunts or grandmas lurking around somewhere....

Thanks for your support, twilightfan1969....

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Oh wow. I am kinda in shock right now. Very, very good. And no more pain for Edward --- he's in enough. By the way, HE NEEDS TO SURVIVE THE VAN RIDE! ok, I'm done = )

Great as always, please please PLEASE update soon!



Author's Response:

Have a nice cup of sweet tea...that's good for shock!  And then a nice cookie...Sigh, get ready though, there is more pain coming for our poor Edward...get the tea ready!

Remember...HEA...coming to this story eventually (My hubby said that I should say:  eventually....maybe!)

Thanks so much for your support Eidelweiss!

Kathie

Reviewer: anemies (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

is the missing scent revealed? IT hasn't right???

Damn.....

Guess 1: Bella will have to transform Edward in an attempt to save his life. and then in the epilogue, Alice's vision will come true.

OKAY!

I owe you 15 reviews that had been building up. I cannot say how much your story is good. At first impression, I was like..."What?" but then, I saw the story line forming and I got hooked instantly. I download your story into my iPod so I can read before going to bed, or I'll just lay there in my bed at 4 in the morning still reading it. Talk about obsessed, right? Okay, back to first impressions: I said "What?" because I never really have read any story that Bella's the vamp and Edward's the human. I have never read anything like it. And the fact that Edward’s in danger is simple amazing. Very creative and astounding imagination. Your way with words flow like the river…haha, that’s cheesy. Very captivating and well-written.

The constant danger and thrill that something could happen any moment is enjoyable and entrancing partnered with the forbidden love tale equals greatest. Do you want me to write down every adjective I have build up for all the reviews I owe you? (It’s a rhetorical question)

Your story, Guarding Edward is…

Amusing, breathtaking, amazing, stunning, astounding, astonishing, awe-inspiring, stupendous, staggering, engaging,  extraordinary, incredible, unbelievable, magnificent, wonderful, spectacular, remarkable, phenomenal, prodigious, miraculous, sublime, leave me wanting for more, formidable, imposing, impressive, mind-boggling, wondrous, phenomenal, exceptional, surprising, bewildering, stunning, shocking, captivating, startling, stupefying, perplexing, confounding, AWESOME, sensational, spectacular, prodigious, incredible, unbelievable, magnificent, brilliant, marvelous, magnificent, exquisit, artistic, creative, witty, humorous, splendid, superb, admirable, marvellous, tremendous, terrific, great, out of this world, unique, one of a kind, memorable, unforgettable, dramatic, dazzling, sensational, outstanding, arresting, exciting and alluring and fascinating.

I wish I could know what happens next because I can’t help myself to speculate away. I can't wait to read more. More power and support for your story.

Guarding Edward is an awarding phenomenon  for any reader.

Guarding Edward is an irresistable, engaging read that any reader in their right minds wouldn't pass up.



Author's Response:

WOW!  I love all my reviews and reviewers....YOURS was amazing!  I cannot tell you how excited I was to read this...

Yes, the did figure out that there were TWO...and Bella felt really dumb when she realized that....

I'm glad that you gave the story a chance...and that you like it so much!  Makes me want to write even better...and more!

Gosh, I may have to post YOUR review on the main page...maybe more will want to read it after that lovely summary!

Thanks again, anemies...

Kathie

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Promising.. like the ideas here



Author's Response:

Thanks, Edwardia Maven...I hope you enjoy the rest of the completed chapters too!

Kathie

Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

It's getting exciting!!!! Definitely don't listen to your daughter :)  Crazy mama can't hurt Edward too much if her crazy daughter wants him!! Thanks



Author's Response:

Glad you like the excitement, mangler!  *Mangler*...sounds like YOU would like all the blood and guts!

Thanks for the support!

Kathie

Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

yeah, i wouldn't take suggestions from her anymore.  that would not mesh well with your tendencies for HEA's.

 

nail biting, awe inducing, terror inspiring chapter.  I am only taking comfort in your love of HEA's.  it will all work out in the end.



Author's Response:

Yep, no suggestions from any of my daughters! 

YES...HEA will happen here!  You've got my promise of that!

Thanks for the support maddaq!

Kathie

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Katmom, if you were not killing me before, I am definately dying now.  Poor Edward!  Poor Bella!  Please do not take long to update.  PLEEAAASSE!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Don't die, kycee!  Relief is coming!  I promise!

Thanks for your support!

Kathie

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Oh no! Please update soon!! I hope Bella and Rosalie shred Mama to bits when the catch hold of her! Crazy bint! Lauren is a class A Loony as well!

Very well written! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaase update soon! =]



Author's Response:

Bella and Rosalie both really do want to SHRED those two!  I think plans are running through their minds right now....

Updating soon!

Thanks, rhiannon113, for your support!

Kathie

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

*gasp!* FIX IT PLEASE?



Author's Response:

There will be FIXING in the near future!  I promise...

Thanks for your support fightinsurfgrl!

Kathie

Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Well if the gang has Lauren at least there won't be any marriage ;)  Good chapter, hope Bella gets to him soon. 



Author's Response:

That IS a plus...Lauren can't marry him if she's in custody...!!!!

Bella has to FIND him before she can rescue him....soon, I hope!

Thanks TLammy24...I appreciate your support...

Kathie

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

hahah I was about to comment about the drama and suspense but then your daughter's comment just cracked me up... hmm... maybe he can have some problems with the chains chaffing his wrists? Or being forced to marry Lauren (shudder) ;)

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter for Bella and the family's reactions :)



Author's Response:

Daylen, glad my daughters made you laugh...they really think they are funny!  I think being forced to marry Lauren might be worse than being shot...shudder for sure!

Thanks so much for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

OMG she shot Edward!  Bella is going to KILL her.

Lauren has lost what little mind she had.  Crazy... you don't admit to what she just did in that hallway when you're doing what she was planning.  Stupid girl.  Of course I'm glad she did... but stupid.

I hope Bella gets to kick ass.



Author's Response:

Yes, shot!  ugh...killed me to write that...And yes, Bella is a *bit* MIFFED....!!!!!

Also, Lauren IS stupid...thankfully!  It's Mama that is the brains of the outfit...and she's about three fries short of a happy meal!

Bella is going to have some action...soon!

Thanks, Aille, for your support!

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Wow, Lauren's mother is all kinds of crazy!  Those two need to be locked up and the key thrown away!

I am sad the chapter is over!  Bella must be going out of her mind right now!  Not to mention the predicament Edward is in...

LOL regarding what your daughter said!  I think there was enough blood/trauma in the story! 

Great job!  Looking forward to more as always.



Author's Response:

Locked up and the key thrown away!  That's one plan.... ;)

I'm glad you thought there was enough blood...ugh! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing AMayes (everyone, go check out her story:  Elevators, Strangers and Surprises!)

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Yikes. Please update soon. I can appreciate your daughter's point. Maybe your next story could be about Jacob? (hint, hint) 



Author's Response:

Ah, emma austin, a Jacob fan...I actually don't mind Jacob...once he imprinted!  LOL!

I have three daughters...and the way he manipulated Bella all the time really bugged me...my daughters are teenagers and I can see boys behaving that way! At least none that we know of can phase into DOGS...LOL!  Of course, there was stalker boy too.... ;)

I'll have to think on that....any ideas you'd like to see in a Jacob story?

Kathie

Reviewer: BriarRose (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Very, very nicely done.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much BriarRose!  I appreciate your comments!

Kathie

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

No, hell, don't ask her. I can dispense with Jacob anytime.

I suppose he will be rescued, eventually. After that it depends how you want your story to be long. Because he could be on the verge of death, and we know the solution, or they must fal explicitly in love, but he is human, OMG, and then it can go on forever, before they choose the obvious sloution.

Well I am ready for both, so let me see.



Author's Response:

Yep, not asking the daughters for any more input!  Killed me to write him being shot!

Yes, there will be a rescue...eventually!  So many things have to happen first...like finding him!

Thanks so much, Camilla, for reading and reviewing!

Kathie

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