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Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

i'm a little behind on my reading!!! but this was awesomee!!!

i liked the blushing Edward!!.. 

=)



Author's Response:

Yes, a blushing Edward is totally yummy! 

Thanks for your support cullengirl06!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Awesome!!! Wonderful update. And I do feel a little sorry for Lauren. She's not really all that bad, but with a mother like Mama, well, it's no wonder she's so confused!! Anyhoo, love the update and can not wait for more!!

Author's Response:

Yep, no wonder she's confused...and delusional!

Next update should come soon...

Thanks so much for your support ForbiddenFyre!

Kathie

Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Moooooore please =)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support ashkanoodle!

The next chapter is in the line-up...coming soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

It would be Lauren Mallory's crazy ass that would go all crazy psycho on Edward. I swear. I'm all about snapping her like a twig.

I hope they find him...and Bella gets some lovin'.

More soon please!



Author's Response:

*Snapping her like a twig*...FUN!!!  But don't you feel the smallest bit sorry for her?  She's got a nut job for a Mama afterall...

Me neither...I don't feel sorry for her either!

Finding him...soon!

Thanks for the support agiismsxx (by the way, what does that stand for?)!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Great chapter! I loved Jasper's POV! That was amazing! Alice's vision was very cool! Edward having to deal with Mama is a very scary thought.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that YOU like Jasper's POV...since you've done his too!

Alice's vision...I can just see it.  I paint in watercolors and acrylics...but couldn't do that justice...I may have to ge my daughter to draw this for me...

Unless someone HERE wants to draw it and share with us!

Ah, dealing with Mama...scary indeed...she has "equalizers" to make up for her small stature...sigh...!!!!

Thanks for the support valelf!  I was happy to see YOUR update too!

Kathie

Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

oh please please please please update soon i cant wait to see what happens when bella finds them :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, edwardsluver for your enthusiasm!  The next chapter is already in the line-up...

I appreciate your support!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Fantastic! I so love this story. I am on the edge of my (computer seat) for the next chapter! I can't wait to see what happens when an angry Edward goes up again the psycho mom!



Author's Response:

Don't fall off that chair!

Angry, yet injured, Edward...with no shirt...!!!

Thanks, Eidelweiss, I appreciate your support!

Kathie

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Poor Edward! I get the feeling we are about to experience a scene from "Misery" here. 

Thanks for another fantabulous chapter!



Author's Response:

Ah...Misery...wasn't her name Annie?  Yes, I did have some thoughts about that woman as I wrote this...

You are very welcome...thanks for calling the chapter:  FANTABULOUS!

Thanks for reading, artsy!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Great chapter! I hope they find him soon!



Author's Response:

Ah, soon is relative.... ;)

I hope they do too!

Thanks for reading, twilightfan1969....

Kathie

Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

I LOVE the vision that Alice has. It's such a beautiful, eerie image.

As much as I wanted to see Bella tear Lauren to peices, I really like that Jasper had her simply comply with answering the questions. It made it so much easier to get the answers they needed. He must have been feeling a little overloaded with trying to keep Bella calm and Lauren compliant.

Poor Edward. At least he has the guts to stand up to his attacker.

Love this story, Kathie!

 

Kris



Author's Response:

Thank YOU, Kris, for the vision!

Yes, Jasper really had to do the interrogation...Bella was just too close to the situation...and her blood lust was really high...

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Ohhh.... I still hope Bella gets to kick some arse.

Mama is nuts.

Jasper is wonderful. He was the right one to do the questioning, because Bella probably would have killed her (not that anyone would blame her if she did).



Author's Response:

I think that Bella wants to go BEYOND kicking...me too!

Ugh, killing Lauren in the conference room could have been messy...unless she drained her...but then she would have broken her streak...

Mama IS nuts...downright scary!

Thanks for the review and rating Aille!

Kathie

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Great chapter! But Oh! Poor Edward!! I can't wait to hear more from his POV! 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it anabanana219...there will be some of Edward's POV in the next chapter...Poor dear....

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

I wondered about the bullet, thanks for letting us know it's no longer in him.  Good chapter.  Can't wait to see the rescue of Edward and his and Bella's reunion ;)



Author's Response:

Yes, had to get the bullet OUT of him...too bad it had to go all the way through...ugh...and ICK!

Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing, TLammy24!  I appreciate it!

Kathie

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

DUN DUN! Argh! Fix it please??



Author's Response:

Fightinsurfgrl, there will be FIXING!  Soon....

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

I was picturing Bella with a pair of scissors held to Lauren's scalp offering to give her a 'new doo' if she didn't talk. LOL

I hope Mama isn't too hard on Edward! Yikes! Please update soon!!!!!



Author's Response:

I hadn't thought of that!  Lauren would have been shocked to have her HAIR threatened!  LOL

Alas, Mama is going to be pretty HARD on poor Edward...sigh....

Thanks for reading rhiannon113!

Kathie



Author's Response:

I hadn't thought of that!  Lauren would have been shocked to have her HAIR threatened!  LOL

Alas, Mama is going to be pretty HARD on poor Edward...sigh....

Thanks for reading rhiannon113!

Kathie

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Nope still have the same problem as last chapter. you explain why there isn't security with him but not why one of the Cullens wasn't keeping an eye on him at all times (every one of them was there are several were 'working') or why none of them knew where his dressing room would be. If Elite Guardians is that good they would have kept eyes on him at all times and left the extra securty looking for problems/he stalker. I just am having trouble with the idea of them being invincible, vampire badass guards when someone was so easily taken. It wasn't like a swat team came in and grabbed him. I had been enjoying the story and digging the plot but this just seems like the gorup that's supposed to be amazing in a bunch of bumbling amatures and really stretches my belief in the story.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you don't like it, but thanks for the input...I do appreciate the time you took to review.

One thing I'd like to point out...yes, they ARE vampires, but they aren't perfect.  Bella and the team hadn't realized that there were more than ONE stalker.  We, the readers, knew it, but they didn't.  They thought they HAD THE stalker...

In NEW MOON Edward thought he was doing the *right* thing...leaving Bella...but it shattered her.  So, not so perfect...LOL!

If there really wasn't a kidnapping in my story, there wouldn't be much of one. 

Thanks again for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Go Mr. Whitlock. Is he wearing a tie? I'd love that.  



Author's Response:

Emma Austin, just for you...he was wearing a tie...a nice silk one.  He adjusted it before he stepped into the room...running his long, pale fingers down the center of it, then settling it back against is throat.

;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Great chapter as always!  I like that Edward is strong!  He can handle Mama, I'm sure.

I love Jasper too, he's great and you wrote his POV really well!

Lauren is a real piece of work.  Not to mention insane.  Whew!

Thanks Kathie!



Author's Response:

You are very welcome, AMayes! 

Edward is strong...I just hope that he CAN handle Mama...

Ah, Jasper...I just love that guy! 

Thanks Sweetie!

Kathie

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

What a delusional bitch. Or bitches I should say. Lauren seems to be a brainwashed copy of her mother, blinded into thinking the world is hers to play with. But still innocent in a small way, like she doesn't have a reality sense. I hope Edward survives, or is this his death shot to immortality? Can't wait for more!

Later, Baela



Author's Response:

Dang!  I missed this review when you did it!  I'm so sorry!

Yes, the two of those women...nuts for sure! 

Surviving...that would be a good thing for Edward...he has so much to live for...

Kathie

Reviewer: montepython4life (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Wow that was really good. This is quite the thrilling story! Update soon!!



Author's Response:

Goodness!  I am so sorry for missing this review!  I've found about four that way...sorry!

Anyway...thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

Very good!  Write more!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks OzNimbus!  I'm actually up to chapter 32...!!!

I appreciate your support...

Kathie

Reviewer: sethschick (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

OH MY!  Mama needs to get her butt kicked and so does Lauren!  Team JACOB - Yeah!  I feel for Edward and I know Bella will find him, they are meant to be.  Mama is definitely a nutcase though....good job on the craziness! Sethschick.



Author's Response:

Hey!  I thought you were TEAM SETH???  LOL!

Yes, they ARE meant to be...eventually!

Glad you like my portrayal of CRAZY...my family has a few concerns...mwahaha!

;)

Thanks for your support sethschick!

Kathie

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

OMG!!! how dare you NOT leave us with a next button? I'm loving this!! I've read this all today and normally I dnt liek stories that have humans other than Bella and Renee etc in them! but this was FAB FAB FAB!! I can't wait for more!! great peice! It's like it belongs in the twilight series :O and your a litrey GENIUS!! great work!



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry NIAIS!  The next chapter is in with line-up...coming soon!

I'm so happy that you are enjoying this story...especially as you don't normally read these types.

I appreciate your comments and rating very much!

Kathie

Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Creepy as hell!  Well done!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much OzNimbus!  Lucky YOU, YOU have a next button on that chapter...!!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

Kathie

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

LAUREN MALLORY!!! 

JENKIES!!!!

We need to kick her butt.

Write me into the story so I can kick a bitch!!



Author's Response:

This does have a slight Scooby Do feel, doesn't it?  Vamps and all.... ;F

Ah, writing YOU into the story...let me check my outline....checking....checking...

Sorry! I don't see your name here...maybe for the next story?

But don't worry...there will be a light here...eventually!  There has to be a chain first though....

Everyone, go read "Do These Dresses Come in Pixie" by agiismsxx and valef...VERY CUTE...and lots of Jasper and Alice!

Thanks, sweets for your review and rating!

Kathie

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